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The study This study can be described as exploratory in that its aim was to
Participants and obtain new insights into an area about which little is known to date
setting (Dörnyei 2007), namely, the instructional approaches that are regularly
employed by L2 writing teachers. The researcher had no preconceived
notions of what observations and interviews would reveal, and
participating teachers were instructed not to alter their customary
practices in any way. Participants were seven academic L2 writing
teachers responsible for pre-university and credit-bearing university
courses in five different tertiary institutions in three New Zealand
cities. They all had professional TESOL and academic qualifications to
at least MA level and were highly experienced. Five were women and
two were men. Three teachers were originally from England, two were
New Zealanders, and the remaining two were from the United States
and South Africa. Generally accepted methods of establishing expertise,
including qualifications, experience, references from managers and
colleagues, and contributions to the discipline (Tsui 2003), were used to
recruit a purposive sample.
The seven courses in the study were either integrated skills (pre-
university) or academic writing only (undergraduate; Year 1 and Year
2). None was discipline-specific. Course content included composing
processes such as planning and editing, writing using sources, and
analysis and construction of a range of academic text types (for example
comparison, explanation, problem-solution, discussion, and argument
essays). Attention to sentence and paragraph-level writing featured
in all courses, particularly those at pre-university and Year 1 levels.
Classes took place through two 120-minute sessions per day for 5 days
each week (pre-university), or two or three sessions of 90–120 minutes
per week (undergraduate) over a semester of 10–12 weeks’ duration.
Learners were young adults from Polynesia, East Asia, the Middle East,
Data collection The primary data source for the study was a set of detailed field notes
and analysis from four to six lesson observations (each lasting 90–120 minutes)
for each teacher. Due to practical constraints, including teachers’
timetables and in-class assessments, observations were not always of
consecutive lessons; however, for each teacher they were completed
within a four-week period. Observational data were supported by
transcripts of five or six half-hour interviews with each teacher (three
hours in total), as well as syllabus documents and teaching materials.
Summaries of instructional episodes, defined as a 15–30-minute-
unit of explicit instruction, were extracted from the observation field
notes. These were then compiled in table format to show the events
Pre-university class 1 Pre-university class 2 100 level for-credit class 1 100 level for-credit class 2
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Process text Summary text Cause–effect text Paraphrase text
Pre-modelling Learners create a coherent process The teacher leads a discussion on The teacher leads a discussion on The teacher leads a discussion on
stage text from six sentences linked summaries: purposes, features, and cause–effect in an essay on Natural paraphrases: purposes, features, and
chronologically but lacking cohesion composing stages (read, take notes, Disasters. The teacher and class composing stages (read, take notes,
markers (e.g. reference markers and transform, and write). Learners read together prepare outlines for transform, and write); synonyms and
conjunctions) and transition signals. and answer comprehension questions introductory and concluding reporting verbs. Learners evaluate
In pairs, learners compare their on the text to be summarized. paragraphs of this essay. sample summary citations.
drafts.
Collaborative Learners make suggestions for each The teacher elicits the main ideas The teacher elicits content (e.g. The teacher elicits options for
modelling stage of the process text, based on of five short paragraphs (one-third definitions, causes, effects, statistics, paraphrasing two sample texts.
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stage their drafts. Errors are identified and of the complete text). The teacher and examples) for three body Suggestions for possible content and
the class discusses the best options elicits options for summarizing the paragraphs and writes this up as linking devices (e.g. punctuation,
for content and linkers to create five paragraphs. Alternatives are paragraph outlines. The teacher cohesion markers, and transition
a cohesive text. A class version suggested and evaluated by learners elicits options for linking content signals options) are commented on,
is composed. The text created and the teacher. Options for signalling (e.g. cohesion markers and transition added to, or altered by the teacher
by the class is photocopied and thought relationships between ideas, signals), and metadiscourse strategies and other learners in discussion.
distributed in the next lesson. punctuation, cohesion markers, (e.g. hedges and opinion markers). Paraphrases of the texts are created
Learners compare it with their and transition signals options are These are used to expand the collaboratively.
drafts. elicited and discussed. A summary is paragraph outlines. Opening and
composed collaboratively. closing sentences for each paragraph
are constructed.
Post- Learners construct a process text Learners compose a summary Learners complete the construction Learners read one of two short
modelling independently (with support from a of the second third of the text in of one body paragraph in pairs, and texts and make notes. In pairs, they
stage diagram) on a different topic. pairs, and the final third of the text compose the other two body paraphrase their texts orally, and
independently. paragraphs as independent, comment on clarity and coherence
out-of-class work. in their partner’s paraphrase. Written
paraphrases are then composed
independently.
ta b l e
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Four sample episodes of instruction using collaborative modelling