My travel to Cuzco with my brother

One of my best memories that i have is my travel to cuzco in 2017 therefore I describe my
travel in this essay .¹ This travel was especial for me because I travel with my brother. I don’t
like travel alone, so I traveled with my brother.² We were in cuzco for 3 days. Consequently,
we couldn’t go all places.³

First of all, we become in the morning. We went to sleep in the hotel; otherwise, we would
have been sick for the weather. ⁴ In the Afternoon, we went to catedral of cuzco because we
read in a magazine that is a special place. ⁵ It was a wonderfull experience.

The next day, we went to the fortaleza of Sacsayhuaman, we spent all day in Sacsayhuaman
because this place is very confortable and the people is very nice. ⁶

I can remember lot of things about Sacsayhuaman. For example, I always remember the
mistery of this place. I remember the energy of the tourist and the beauty of the place, to
name a few. ⁷

In the last day, we went to Pisac and we bought a lot of things for my family. We walked for 3
hours in the city. Consequently, we were very tired. ⁸

Finally, we went to the airport in the night for return to lima. My brother was very sad because
he wanted go to other places in cuzco.

To conclude, This travel was special because i spent time with my brother. Usually i don’t have
free time. Consequently, I can’t spend time with my family. ⁹

I will plan to travel to cuzco next year, so I will visit Machu Picchu. ¹⁰

Check List

1. Transitions to conect sentences (effect/result): therefore

Sentence: One of my best memories that i have is my travel to cuzco in 2017 therefore
I describe my travel in this essay.
2. Coordinating Conjuntions: so
Sentence: I don’t like travel alone, so I traveled with my brother.
3. Transitions to conect sentences (effect/result): Consequently
Sentence: We were in cuzco for 3 days. Consequently, we couldn’t go all places.
4. Transitions to conect sentences (effect/result): otherwise
Sentence: We went to sleep in the hotel; otherwise, we would have been sick for the
weather.
5. Subordinating Conjuntions: because
Sentence: In the Afternoon, we went to catedral of cuzco because we read in a
magazine that is a special place.
6. Subordinating Conjuntions: because
Sentence: we spent all day in Sacsayhuaman because this place is very confortable and
the people is very nice.
7. Transitions to connect block of test: For example
Sentence: For example, I always remember the mistery of this place. I remember the
energy of the tourist and the beauty of the place, to name a few.

8. Transitions to conect sentences (effect/result): Consequently

Sentence: We walked for 3 hours in the city. Consequently, we were very tired.

9. Transitions to conect sentences (effect/result): Consequently

Sentence: Usually I don’t have free time. Consequently, I can’t spend time with my
family.

10. Coordinating Conjuntions: so

Sentence: I will plan to travel to cuzco next year, so I will visit Machu Picchu.