Writing Feedback Form- Level 1 – Skills Writing Quiz

Student’s Name: Date: September 3, 2022

Time: Afternoon Textbook: North Star
Voc/Wrong Voc/Missing Better
Gr/Tense Gr/Structure Spelling Punctuation Unnecessary redundance
Word Word structure
which is better iPhone 14 pro or Samsung S22 ultra
iPhone 14 is the newest iPhone for Apple and the same for Samsung. iPhone 14 has a big
display with 6.7 inches OLED and has A strong material also, it has the best CPU in
smartphones is A16 bionic, and has the best camera, it has three lenses, one of them is
48Mb less than the camera in s22 ultra but is better. Samsung s22 ultra has a bigger display
with 6.8 inches OLED, s22 ultra also has one of the best CPUs on phone but it isn’t doesn't
the same as the CPU in iPhone 14 pro, s22 ultra has a bigger camera with 108Mb. you can
buy them from any big shops For electronics here in Riyadh Jarir or Extra or from the
official stores. finally, which is better for me, I used both but I prefer the Samsung s22 ultra
to the iPhone because it has the most beautiful display and has a bigger memory with 12
rams, and when I was a child just I use The Samsung products.

Feedback Level 1 – Skills Writing Quiz

Content & Organization Language
-Correct ending. - Good use of Vocabulary.

Strong
points:

- - Improve the use of FAN BOYS.

Points to
consider:
Grammar & Str. 5.5 /6 Teacher’s Note:
Punctuation & Caps. 2.7 /3
5
Spelling 3 /3
Grade Vocabulary 4.5 /5
Outline & 3 /3
Conventions Specific
for genre*
Plagiarism Detected 0

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 Writing Feedback Form- Level 1 – Skills Writing Quiz
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Writing grade for this task .7
5
*Conventions specific for genre:
While the rules of spelling, punctuation, capitalisation, and grammar are necessary for all texts, some genres have their own sets of rules and principles to follow. These features help the reader to
identify what kind of text they are looking at.
Note for teacher: Please refresh the formula from layout to sum up the marks.
Teacher’s general evaluation This is a successful attempt. Good job :)
Good luck

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