Writing Feedback Form- Level 3 - Assignments

Gr/
Gr/Structure Spelling Punctuation Voc/Wrong Word Voc/Missing Word
Tense

Subject: Application for Support Worker position

Dear Hiring Manager
I am writing to express my interest in the support worker position at your company. As
someone who has a strong passion for caring for others, understanding of the needs of the
older people, skills of communication, listening skills, I believe I would be able to take this
role.

Through my experiences، I developed the ability to provide compassionate care and

support to those in need. I recognize the importance of compassion and patience when
working with older adults, and I am committed to ensuring their well-being and comfort.
Besides that, I am able to build rapport and establish positive relationships with both clients
and their families. I am also available to work weekends, because I understand the
importance of providing ongoing care and support to those who depend on in it.
Furthermore, I am eager to take advantage of the excellent training opportunities your
company offers, as a person who committed in continuous personal development.

Thank you for considering my application. I am excited about the opportunity to contribute
my skills and dedication to your team. I have attached my CV for your review. I look forward
to the possibility of discussing how my qualifications align with the support worker at your
company.

Feedback Level 3
Content & Organization Language

Fulya Mahallesi. Büyükdere Caddesi. Dıs kapı no: 42-46 Iç kapı no:16 Istanbul, Şişli

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 Writing Feedback Form- Level 3 - Assignments

+ The content is well-organized and coherent. + Correct tenses.

+ Good punctuation, capitalization, spelling.
Strong + Clear outline - appropriate to genre, purpose & audience.
+ Good use of vocabulary.
points: + Correct use of discourse markers
+ Arguments are well-developed and supported by sufficient evidence

Points to
consider:
Grammar & Str. 2 /2 Teacher’s Note:
Punctuation & Caps. 0. / 0.5

5
Spelling 0. / 0.5

Grade 5
Vocabulary 3 /3
Convention Specific for genre* 2 /2
Outline 2 /2
Plagiarism Detected 0
Writing grade for this task 0
Teacher’s general evaluation: Excellent work!

Fulya Mahallesi. Büyükdere Caddesi. Dıs kapı no: 42-46 Iç kapı no:16 Istanbul, Şişli

info@engcastle.com