2. Can television (or videogames) influence your behavior? How?

I don't play videogames so I will write about television. The television is a increble
invention, it changed a whole generation. The television of that way, influence people about
everything, for example, it tells about how dress it, how cut your hair, how behaviour with
other people and so many things. I believe that yes, it can influence the behaviour.

I would like to write more about it, but this subject is kind of boring to me. Now, series
it's exciting. If series was associate with television I can about it. I continue believe that can
influence the behaviour and it show so many things in the world. With its can I learn about
differents subjects. Some series shows me about investigation and the police work, some
series shows me about houses and decoration, other about friend and kindness and some
series shows me about problems of society and how can I change some things in myself and
help the world to be better.

That way, television is a bad thing if you don't have a discerniment to distingue and
separate that is good for you and that isn't, however is a good thing to learn more and help
you to be a better human be.

The correction:

I don't play videogames so I will write about television. The television is an incredible
invention, it changed a whole generation. The television of in a that way, influences people
about everything, for example, it tells about how to dress it, how to cut your hair, how
behaviour with other people and so many things. I believe that yes, it can influence the
behaviour.

I would like to write more about it, but this subject is kind of boring to me. Now, the
series it's exciting. If series was associated with television I can about it. I continue to believe
that can influence the behaviour and it shows so many things in the world. With its can, I learn
about differents subjects. Some series shows me about the investigation and the police work,
some series shows me about houses and decoration, others about friend and kindness and
some series shows me about problems of society and how can I change some things in myself
and help the world to be better.

That way, television is a bad thing if you don't have a the discerniment to distingue and
separate that is good for you and that isn't, however, is a good thing to learn more and help
you to be a better human be.
The text with a correction:

I don't play videogames so I will write about television. The television is an incredible
invention, it changed a whole generation. The television in a way, influences people about
everything, for example, it tells about how to dress it, how to cut your hair, how behaviour
with other people and so many things. I believe that yes, it can influence behavior.

I would like to write more about it, but this subject is kind of boring to me. Now, the
series it's exciting. If series was associated with television I can about it. I continue to believe
that can influence behavior and it shows so many things in the world. With its can, I learn
about differents subjects. Some series shows me about the investigation and the police work,
some series shows me about houses and decoration, others about friend and kindness and
some series shows me about problems of society and how can I change some things in myself
and help the world to be better.

That way, television is a bad thing if you don't have the discerniment to distingue and
separate that is good for you and that isn't, however, is a good thing to learn more and help
you to be a better human be.

The best way:

I don't play video games, so I'm going to write about television. Television is an
incredible invention, it has changed an entire generation. She, in a way, influences people in
everything, for example, how to dress, how to cut their hair, how to behave with other people
and so many other things. I believe so, it can influence people's behavior.

I would like to write more about it, but this subject is kind of boring to me. Now, as for
the series it's an exciting subject. If the series is associated with television, I can talk about it. I
still believe that TV can influence behavior and also show many things in the world. With
television, I learn about different subjects. Some shows show me about investigation and
police work, some shows show me about houses and decoration, some shows about friendship
and kindness and some shows show me about problems in society and how I can change some
things about myself and help the world to be a better place.

So to her, it's a bad thing if you don't have the discernment to distinguish and separate
what's good for you and what's not, however it's a good thing to learn more and help you be a
better human being.