3. Describe a famous park or recreation area in your home country.

My home city is called Morada Nova and there is different spaces of

recreation. My favorite recreation area was "parque das crianças". It was the
place where the playgrounds stay. It was fun and a happy day when I went.
So, when I grow up this place of recreation let of exist and turn a place
where I played volleyball. Nowadays, it's back a place where the children go to
fun and play. It's wonderful, my niece go to there to jump in the jump-jump and
have a dinner.
Where I live now there is a park called "Parque do Cocó" and I want
visited there but I still don't went. There is also, a aqua park called "BeachPark"
in my new city. When I was younger I want to go, but my father was fear
because I didn't know to swim and could me to drown. So, I never went a
recreation area in this town. I intend go one day, but now I don't want to go.

The correction:
My home city is called Morada Nova and there is are different spaces of
recreation. My favorite recreation area was "parque das crianças". It was the
place where the playgrounds stay. It was fun and a happy day when I went.
So, when I groew up, this place of recreation let of ceased to exist and turn
into a place where I played volleyball. Nowadays, it's back a place where the
children go to fun and play. It's wonderful, my niece goes to there to jump in on
the jump-jump trampoline and have a dinner.
Where I live now there is a park called "Parque do Cocó" and I want
visited to visit there, but I still don't went haven’t been there yet. There is also,
an aqua park called "BeachPark" in my new city. When I was younger, I want to
go, but my father was fear because I didn't know to swim and could me be to
drown. So, I never went to a recreation area in this town. I intend to go one day,
but now I don't want to go.
 Text with correction:
My home city is called Morada Nova and there are different spaces of
recreation. My favorite recreation area was "parque das crianças". It was the
place where the playgrounds stay. It was fun and a happy day when I went.
So, when I grew up, this place of recreation ceased to exist and turn into a
place where I played volleyball. Nowadays, it's back a place where the children
go to fun and play. It's wonderful, my niece goes there to jump on the
trampoline and have dinner.
Where I live now there is a park called "Parque do Cocó" and I want to
visit there, but I haven’t been there yet. There is also, an aqua park called
"BeachPark" in my new city. When I was younger, I want to go, but my father
was fear because I didn't know to swim and could be to drown. So, I never went
to a recreation area in this town. I intend to go one day, but now I don't want to
go.

The best way:

My hometown is called Morada Nova and there are different leisure spaces
in it. My favorite play area was the "children's playground". It was where the
playgrounds were. It was a fun and happy day when I went there.
So, when I grew up, this place of leisure ceased to exist and became a place
where I played volleyball. Nowadays, it has returned to being a place where
children go to have fun and play. It's wonderful, my niece goes there to jump on
the trampoline and have dinner.
Where I currently live there is a park called "Parque do Cocó" and I want to
visit there, but I haven't been yet. There is also a water park called "BeachPark"
in my new town. When I was younger, I wanted to go, but my father was afraid
because I couldn't swim and I would drown. So I've never been to a recreation
area in this city. I intend to go one day, but for now, I don't want to go.