Faculty of Letters & Humanities Composition II

Department of English Studies Semester 3

Pr. Zahra EL AOURI

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Practice of the writing process worksheet

Topic: Football is the most popular game in the world of sports. Write a
five paragraph essay in which you explain the most important motives
behind a successful football team. Use strong ideas and examples.

Pre-writing stage
• Brainstorm ideas for the topic using a mind map (try to follow
the mind map presented on the second page)
• Select ideas from the brainstorming and Outline your essay
While-writing stage
• Write the first draft
Post-writing stage
• Revise and edit your final draft
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• Introductory paragraph:

• Hook
• Connected information to the topic
• Thesis statement

• Body paragraphs

• First motive: Cooperation among players can lead to positive results.

• It is clearly obvious that cooperation widely contributes in the

success of a team.

• This latter does not come on the spur of the moment but
 rather it comes at a price. As a matter of fact, it is the manger's
duty. Importantly, the manager should make tremendous
efforts to make the players cooperate with each other inside
the field.
Supporting details
• Moreover, cooperation is not only about the interaction
among players inside the football field, but also about the
aesthetic performance that players seek to perform whether
they lose or win the game. This aesthetic and professional
performance that a team performs can make the fans' less mad
in case the team gets defeated.

• Not to mention, the importance of cooperation in terms of the

environmental background of the team.

• Cooperation has the ability to aid every single player to

promote the feeling of being productive among the team which
can give them a high self esteem toward themselves.
Supporting details
• consequently, these aforementioned benefits will lead players
to acquire the confidence that they will surely bring it with
them at the day of the match.

• Second motive: The power of rewards can be really practical

incentives in terms of motivating the team for the actual
performance.

• Significantly, Rewards can have a huge positive impact on players.

This latter can push the team forward especially the financial
rewards.

• Financially speaking, money can be the best motivator for all

people. That is to say that players will manage to do their
utmost to gain a specific amount of money from the team's
administration
Supporting details
 • As a result, players will raise the fighting spirit during the game.
Thus, the power of money can make the team successful and
players motivated.

• On the other side, the recognition of the team can augment

players' spirits and make them feel proud of themselves.

• Morally speaking, when the fans and the president of the team
intensely appreciate the players for their tremendous efforts
during the sport season. This can be sometimes adequate
more than money. However, some players prefer the financial
rewards than the gratitude one.
Supporting details
• Nevertheless, the power of gratitude can be really impressive
very often. Similarly, when players feel the recognition from
their fans, they will put much more efforts to live up to their
expectations in the upcoming seasons.

Third motive: The Fan base is the most crucial factor which can
determine to a large extent whether a club is successful or not.
• These effects can personify as an adequate motivator either on
the financial side or on the psychological side of players. However,
its existence can beget a fighting spirit among the players.

• on the financial side, a sheer number of supporters are able to

assist their club only through purchasing an admission ticket.
That is to say, the more supporters who join, the more tickets
will be sold.
• Supporting details
• Consequently, the fane base can help their club indirectly in
order to bring good players to defend for their color club T-
shirts.

• On the psychological side, fans can hand their club an additional

 motive forward.

• To exemplify, the voice of the audience has the ability to make

the players motivated. This latter leads them do their best and
perform a good match.
Supporting details
• What is more, the words that the fans utilize to cheer their
team up can have a huge psycological influence on the players.

• Concluding paragraph:

• Summarize the main points of the essay

• Restate differently the thesis statement

Your first draft

It is obvious that cooperation contributes in the success of the team

cooperation is not only about the interaction of players inside the football
field, but also about the aesthetic performance that players perform to
perform whether they lose or win the game. This aesthetic and proffessional
performance that a team performs can make the fans' less mad in case the
team gets lost.

these afterementioned benefits will lead players to get the confidence that
they will surely take it with them in thematch day

on the moral aspect, when the fans and the president of the team thank the
players for their efforts during the sport season. This can be sometime
sufficent more than money and some players prefer the financial rewards
than the gratitude one.
for example , the sound of the audience has the ability to make the players
motivated. This latter leads them do their best and perform a good match

Your revised and edited draft

• It is clearly obvious that cooperation widely contributes in the
success of a team.
• Moreover, cooperation is not only about the interaction
among players inside the football field, but also about the
aesthetic performance that players seek to perform whether
they lose or win the game. This aesthetic and professional
performance that a team performs can make the fans' less
mad in case the team gets defeated.
• these aforementioned benefits will lead players to acquire the
confidence that they will surely bring it with them at the day
of the Morally speaking, when the fans and the president of
the team intensely appreciate the players for their
tremendous efforts during the sport season. This can be
sometimes adequate more than money. However, some
players prefer the financial rewards than the gratitude one.
match.
• To exemplify, the voice of the audience has the ability to make
the players motivated. This latter leads them do their best and
perform a good match.