Name: Madison Ansari Date: ____10/7 _______________________

Working with Peer Feedback

Directions: In the space provided below respond to these questions.
What are the three things you’ll change based upon your peers’ responses? Why will you change each one?
1. I will change the amount of detail in my essay, I will change it because I need more detail.

2. I can add more references, especially to parts where I talk about scholars and not just a scholar

3.I can add another subtopic. This is so I can break up my essay a little bit more

What are three things you’ll keep despite your peers’ responses? Why will you keep each one?
1. I will keep my topic

2. I will keep my referencing

3. I will keep the detail I have, just add more

What work do you have left to do after today to successfully complete the project?

1. I need to add more detail

2. I need to complete the essay

3. Finish each body paragraph

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