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The most important thing is that you practise making your own sentences, not only in Task
1, but also in Task 2, which will result in your score being higher than you expected, as long
as you use the examples accurately, ensuring that each one is 100% correct so that when the
examiners read your essay, they will jump for joy despite the fact that even though your
Of course, this is far too long, but it shows a few of the simple ways you can extend and develop your
sentences to make your writing more complex, formal and academic.
The following examples outline 10 different ways of making a simple sentence more complex.
1. Make comparisons
This sentence is slightly more complex than the previous one.
2. Make contrasts
Some people argue that zoos are educational, whereas others are of the opinion that keeping
animals in cages is cruel.
Sales of e-books have increased dramatically, while sales of paper books have plummeted.
Proponents of GM food claim that it will eradicate famine. However, others believe it
threatens the food chain.
3. Give reasons
4. Show purpose
The factory was demolished in order to make way for more housing.
The factory was knocked down so that more houses could be constructed.
Many people argue that keeping old buildings and repairing them is better because by doing
this, the character of the town will be preserved.
5. Show concession
Inversion: Had the gov acted more quickly, the situation could have been avoided.
Starting a sentence with a noun/’ing’ form can make your writing more formal.
Selling food in bulk could be one way of reducing plastic packaging.
Being easily contactable has real advantages for business people and for working parents.
9. Add emphasis
One of the main reasons why people disagree with zoos is because of animal welfare.
The most powerful argument in favour of mobile phones is that they can be used to call for
help in the most inaccessible places, for example when a car breaks down in a remote area.
There are many creative professions where clothes convey a sense of style, which is very
desirable in many companies.
People prefer to shop online, where they can find everything they need without having to
leave the sofa.
You can also extend your points with ‘for example’ and ‘such as’, and ‘like’.
11. Inversion
Not only does the profit help to maintain the company, but it is also essential for employees to ensure their
living cost.
Not only is Phuong handsome but he is also generous.