WRITING TASK 2:

It is quite right that top sports people should be paid a lot of money.
To what extent do you agree?
The earning of sports celebrities HAS ALWAYS BEEN A CONTROVERSIAL TOPIC . It is often argued by some that they
DESERVE THESE HUGE SALARIES since they spend the whole of their lives ACHIEVING THAT STATUS. I completely agree
with this notion and THE FOLLOWING ESSAY SHALL FURTHER ELABORATE ON IT.

HAS ALWAYS BEEN A CONTROVERSIAL TOPIC

DESERVE THESE HUGE SALARIES
THE FOLLOWING ESSAY SHALL FURTHER ELABORATE ON IT.

ACHIEVING THAT STATUS

First of all, a major reason for high earings of top sports stars IS THE TREMENDOUS STRUGGLE AND TIME THEY HAVE
INVESTED IN IT. Although the current status of a player seems fascinating to others, THE YEARS OF RIGOROUS TRAINING
AND EFFORTS INVOLVED ARE NOT VISIBLE TO EVERYONE. For instance, a football player has to start training from
teenage TO PERFORM EXCEPTIONALLY WELL and LATER GOES THROUGH TOUGH TRIALS before being selected as a paid
player in a well-known team. Therefore, their high salaries seem well-deserved after considering these factors.

IS THE TREMENDOUS STRUGGLE AND TIME THEY HAVE

INVESTED IN IT
the years of rigorous training and efforts involved are not
visible to everyone
TO PERFORM EXCEPTIONALLY WELL
LATER GOES THROUGH TOUGH TRIALS

Consequently, a star player PUTS HIS PRIVACY AND PERSONAL LIFE AT RISK and have to live a presentable life which
DOES NOT COME IN CHEAP. Once getting famous in a sport PUTS HIM UNDER CONSTANT LIMELIGHT where the fans
focus on EVERY ASPECT OF THEIR LIFE, as a result, their family life gets public and they have to invest a lot to maintain
their status as expected. For example, THE FASHION INDUSTRY AND OTHER MEDIA USE TOP STARS AS THEIR BRAND
AMBASSADORS and people expect them to the same in real-life. Thus, those multimillion annual incomes are inevitable
for them.

PUT ST AT RISK
DOES NOT COME IN CHEAP
PUTS HIM UNDER CONSTANT LIMELIGHT
EVERY ASPECT OF THEIR LIFE
, THE FASHION INDUSTRY AND OTHER MEDIA USE
TOP STARS AS THEIR BRAND AMBASSADORS
multimillion annual incomes are inevitable
In conclusion, the higher earnings of athletes and professional sportsmen are often questioned whether they worth it or
not. This essay has clearly provided the reasons for it and I totally agree that their high pays are justified.

the higher earnings of athletes and professional

sportsmen
their high pays are justified.

Some people feel that entertainers (e.g. film stars, pop musicians or sports
stars) are paid too much money.
Do you agree or disagree?
Which other types of jobs should be highly paid?
Sample Answer 2

It is often said that people in the entertainment industry mint money and they are loaded! Although we cannot generalise
this for everyone who enters the business, it is arguably true. I believe there are several factors to advocate that they
deserve what they earn.  
Entertainment is a very important part of our lives. In our day-to-day mundane routine, it is movies, music and sports that
rescue us from the boredom and monotony. They inspire us, motivate us and it makes us hope for better by giving a vivid
experience which is often larger than life, through films, songs, concerts and games. However, people who bring these
stories to life, who put in months to connect the lyrics and pair it with the right notes and people who go through extreme
training to bring out the best sport for us are often thought to be just ‘lucky’! I honestly believe that the people who strive
to bring quality to our entertainment deserve to be paid well. Besides, usually careers of sportsmen, actresses or musicians
last for a shorter span of time than that of teachers, doctors and engineers. Thus, if they earn more money for the risk they
take, the amount of dedication they put, and the performance they show, seems quite justified to me.  

Having said that, I also think that there are few other professions other than film, music and sports industries in the realm
of entertainment, should also be highly paid. People who devote their lives for their jobs, army officials, for instance,
ought to be paid well as a small appreciation of what they do for the civilians. Also, jobs which involve a high level of
responsibilities and pressure also deserve a  high pay. Professions like doctor, politics and teaching are the jobs that
require people with high level of perception and proficiency. Thus to attract such talent to these jobs, it is important to pay
them well.

In conclusion, all the above points fortify my opinion that people in entertainment business receive a payment that they
deserve. Nonetheless, other professions which involve high risk, responsibilities and skills, should also be paid well so as
to attract and keep the required talent motivated enough to choose these fields as their possible career. 

Sample Answer 3
In the past, the field of entertainment was not developed and hence, people from this field were paid very less. However,
with the improvement in the technology, the income of the celebrities increased to a greater extent. I personally believe
that these people are gaining money in excess. In this essay, we will analyse the reasons for this and also discuss the
professions which deserve such high income.
To begin with, celebrities such as actors, musicians and sports person are been paid based upon their fame among the
people. A good illustration for this is the Bollywood actor Shahrukh Khan who is said to be charging money in crores for
signing a single film. In other words, he is been paid such a huge amount just with the hope that film will run successfully.
But, it is also true that the society will not be harmed even in the absence of such films and actors.

Instead, I feel that people working in the industry with the aim of the well-being of the society should be offered such pay.
For instance, doctors or security personnel’s should be paid good amount because they always help the people of the
country by protecting them. Moreover, they invest a lot of money and the time for obtaining their degrees and once they
receive the degree, they oath to be available for the people at any time of the day. Hence, it is apparent that jobs that focus
on safeguarding the people should be heavily paid.

In conclusion, it is seen that paying huge amounts to the famous personalities is equivalent to wasting the resources which
can be utilised in a better way. Instead, this amount should be paid to the people in life-saving professions such as doctors
or police officers. It is thus hoped that government will regulate the salaries of the people based upon their important and
role played in the society.

Sample Answer 4
Many people believe that actors, athletes and musicians are overpaid nowadays. I personally agree with the statement
since there are other occupations which are more important and vital for human beings. The following essay will discuss
in details about the disagreement and a brief explanation about jobs that should be highly paid.
It is a fact that a lot of entertainers such as movie stars, pop singers or professional sports players are highly paid. It can be
seen from their night lifestyles, luxurious properties and sports cars. A lot of people believe that they are overpaid since
the function of their jobs is only to entertain the public and it is not categorised as vital jobs. There are other jobs which
are more important for societies, and they should be well paid. Firstly, many people do not realise that the existence of
firefighters is crucial for the neighbourhood as they could save many people’s lives. Besides that, their jobs are also
considered as a high-risk job, since they could be seriously hurt or injured.

Secondly, as a leader of a nation, the president or prime minister has a lot of responsibilities. He/she must be meticulous,
prudence and wise in taking decisions, since his/her decisions might have a serious impact on the public. And then,
becoming a country’s leader also faces the terror of being murdered or kidnapped by terrorists. Therefore, these
professions should be well compensated in accordance with the risk and responsibilities.

In conclusion, it is believed that famous entertainers are overly paid these days. I strongly agree with the opinion, since
entertainments are not the basic need of human beings. I do believe that there are other jobs which should be highly paid
since they are high risk and their existences are essential for mankind.

Sample Answer 5
I strongly agree with the notion that entertainers, today, are paid an excessive amount of money. In current times, science
and technology have taken major strides for the betterment of our society. Our focus should be on facilitating such
endeavours rather than on entertainment.
I believe all the biological scientists like pharmacists, biochemists, microbiologists etc. in our society should be paid more
than the people in the entertainment business. These people or as we dub them ‘nerds’ spend valuable hours in their lives
in discovering a new molecule that might be used to make our lives better. Their goal is to discover novel ideas and to
create innovative techniques. Thus, rather than spending their time with their families or an evening in the theatre, they
immerse themselves in their laboratories working night after night too, maybe, discover a new drug. For such sacrifices,
these scientists should get their due remuneration. However, a discrepancy can be seen in our society. We tend to value
people in the entertainment business more than the scientists who might be working on the Ebola virus vaccine.

I do not devalue the hard work by an actor or a football player. They had to reach their stardom after endless practice
sessions and failures. However, if we make an objective comparison, at the end of the day, it is the work of a
microbiologist or a biochemist that helps us to live a healthy and disease-free life. So, our money should be spent on those
individuals who strive to bring about a healthier and comfortable society.

Sample Answer 6
Another controversial issue related to the salaries being paid to different professionals has been aroused among people in
recent years. Some thinkers think that professionals like pop stars, actors or sports person are being paid far higher than
they deserve.  There are several other professions that also deserve a handsome amount of salary. However, this essay will
look into both the aspects before giving a one sided conclusion.
First of all, there is no such profession that is more deserving or higher than the other. Every type of work, either be it
acting, playing or hospitality job is different and valuable of its kind. Talking about the amount of money that is being
paid to entertainers, I think they deserve this. Though they are not serving people, they play an important role in serving
the country. These people work harder and harder each day to master their skills and amuse people. They play for the
country and represent it in the world. For example, our Indian cricket team give its fullest to win the game at national as
well as international level so as to raise the name of the country.  Another example that can be given is, film stars, they
struggle a lot to get into this field and eventually, when they are successful and famous people remember our country by
their names. Therefore, it cannot be said that these jobs do not deserve money. They are paid for their determination and
hard work.

On the other hand, it is undeniable that jobs like doctors, teachers or community workers are paid considerably less
amount in comparison to above professions. These fields of expertise should also be paid generously depending on their
performance and the knowledge they possess.  They are equally important to us as the entertainers.  These people serve
the country not sometimes just physically but, also using their mental capabilities.

To sum up, from the aforementioned, it is totally justified that no work is high or low. Every profession has its own value
and everyone deserves the best. However, I recommend that instead of reducing salaries of the entertainers, people and
government could think of increasing the wages of other professionals too.

Sample Answer 7
There is no denying that entertainers like film actors, pop musicians and sports stars are paid too much money. I really do
agree with this statement. However, some people think, there are several jobs that should be highly paid as well. In this
essay, before presenting my point of view I would like to discuss the job culture.
Nowadays there is news about the celebrities who are earning more money through their profession like acting, singing,
dancing and sports etc. some of the celebrities like sportsmen and actors are earning extra money through advertising and
becoming brand ambassadors of the particular brand. There is no any difference in work like sweeping, machining,
teaching and in medicine, every work required effort and the reason for earning money for the sake of survival.

A person becomes an actor because he likes that profession the same way singer, doctor, designer and scientist. But some
people are unfortunate to get a proper education or because of laziness or because of lack of scope they sacrifice their
dream and doing some different work which society considers it as a low-level work.I think no work is small or big, every
work requires effort and passion. We should respect one another and we should practice equality. My mother always says
us “Big or small, there is no such kind of difference and it is only made by us”.

In conclusion, I do not think any work is big or small, it is the difference created by us and I think now the time has come
to stop differentiating people through their work and everybody should be paid equally for their work.