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THESIS EVALUATION FORM

INTERNATIONAL BAPTIST COLLEGE


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CANDIDATE/S: ALFRED CARANOG
TITLE:________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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FORMAT 1 2 3 4
Includes typed final, Includes typed final, Includes typed final, Missing
prewrite or outline, prewrite or outline, prewrite/ outline, prewrite/outline, draft
marked draft, & marked draft, & Works draft, & Works Cited, or Works Cited;
Works Cited in Cited in prescribed but insufficient insufficient editing of
prescribed format format editing of draft; draft or outline;
several errors in numerous errors in
prescribed format format
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS:
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UNDERSTANDING Writing shows Writing shows strong, Writing shows Writing shows little or
unusual insight clear understanding adequate no understanding of
OF LITERATURE/ understanding understanding but text
may be too general
TEXTS or superficial
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS:
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_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________
IDEA Presents fresh thesis Presents an effective Presents a clearly Poorly defined or
in an original manner thesis and development defined thesis, but inconsistent
DEVELOPMENT while displaying using a consistent, the development is development
unusual insight careful manner too general or may of thesis that displays
incorporating examples not be marked by little insight
independent thought
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS:
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TEXT SUPPORT More than Adequate/some errors in Inadequate/several Inadequate/numerous
adequate/correct IBCS format; generally errors in IBCS format; errors in IBCS format;
IBCS format; smooth smooth embedding some faulty ineffective embedding
embedding embedding
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS:
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ORGANIZATIONAL Strong, interesting; Organized; clear Somewhat organized; No attempt at
clear beg/middle/end; clear attempt at organization; lacks
PATTERN beg/middle/end; thesis that is marked on beg/middle/end clear beg/middle/
strong thesis that is draft thesis is weak or end; thesis lacking or
marked on draft unclear - not marked inappropriate - not
on draft marked on draft
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS:
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SENTENCE STRUCTURE Correct/varied Correct, but lacks variety Sometimes incorrect Frequent errors &
& lacks variety lacks variety
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS:
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LANGUAGE Very few (if any) Few errors; generally Several errors; Numerous errors;
errors; very well well proofread requires additional appears not to have
MECHANICS proofread proofreading been proofread
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS:
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SIGNATURE OVER PRINTED NAME OF PANEL:
THESIS EVALUATION FORM
INTERNATIONAL BAPTIST COLLEGE
ibcs.edu.ph
CANDIDATE/S: EMMANUEL LANUGAN
TITLE:________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

FORMAT 1 2 3 4
Includes typed final, Includes typed final, Includes typed final, Missing
prewrite or outline, prewrite or outline, prewrite/ outline, prewrite/outline, draft
marked draft, & marked draft, & Works draft, & Works Cited, or Works Cited;
Works Cited in Cited in prescribed but insufficient insufficient editing of
prescribed format format editing of draft; draft or outline;
several errors in numerous errors in
prescribed format format
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS:
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

UNDERSTANDING Writing shows Writing shows strong, Writing shows Writing shows little or
unusual insight clear understanding adequate no understanding of
OF LITERATURE/ understanding understanding but text
may be too general
TEXTS or superficial
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS:
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________
IDEA Presents fresh thesis Presents an effective Presents a clearly Poorly defined or
in an original manner thesis and development defined thesis, but inconsistent
DEVELOPMENT while displaying using a consistent, the development is development
unusual insight careful manner too general or may of thesis that displays
incorporating examples not be marked by little insight
independent thought
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS:
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________
TEXT SUPPORT More than Adequate/some errors in Inadequate/several Inadequate/numerous
adequate/correct IBCS format; generally errors in IBCS format; errors in IBCS format;
IBCS format; smooth smooth embedding some faulty ineffective embedding
embedding embedding
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS:
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ORGANIZATIONAL Strong, interesting; Organized; clear Somewhat organized; No attempt at
clear beg/middle/end; clear attempt at organization; lacks
PATTERN beg/middle/end; thesis that is marked on beg/middle/end clear beg/middle/
strong thesis that is draft thesis is weak or end; thesis lacking or
marked on draft unclear - not marked inappropriate - not
on draft marked on draft
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS:
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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SENTENCE STRUCTURE Correct/varied Correct, but lacks variety Sometimes incorrect Frequent errors &
& lacks variety lacks variety
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS:
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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LANGUAGE Very few (if any) Few errors; generally Several errors; Numerous errors;
errors; very well well proofread requires additional appears not to have
MECHANICS proofread proofreading been proofread
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS:
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SIGNATURE OVER PRINTED NAME OF PANEL:
THESIS EVALUATION FORM
INTERNATIONAL BAPTIST COLLEGE
ibcs.edu.ph
CANDIDATE/S: EDWARD GAVIN ISIDORO
TITLE:________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

FORMAT 1 2 3 4
Includes typed final, Includes typed final, Includes typed final, Missing
prewrite or outline, prewrite or outline, prewrite/ outline, prewrite/outline, draft
marked draft, & marked draft, & Works draft, & Works Cited, or Works Cited;
Works Cited in Cited in prescribed but insufficient insufficient editing of
prescribed format format editing of draft; draft or outline;
several errors in numerous errors in
prescribed format format
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS:
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

UNDERSTANDING Writing shows Writing shows strong, Writing shows Writing shows little or
unusual insight clear understanding adequate no understanding of
OF LITERATURE/ understanding understanding but text
may be too general
TEXTS or superficial
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS:
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________
IDEA Presents fresh thesis Presents an effective Presents a clearly Poorly defined or
in an original manner thesis and development defined thesis, but inconsistent
DEVELOPMENT while displaying using a consistent, the development is development
unusual insight careful manner too general or may of thesis that displays
incorporating examples not be marked by little insight
independent thought
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS:
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________
TEXT SUPPORT More than Adequate/some errors in Inadequate/several Inadequate/numerous
adequate/correct IBCS format; generally errors in IBCS format; errors in IBCS format;
IBCS format; smooth smooth embedding some faulty ineffective embedding
embedding embedding
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS:
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________
ORGANIZATIONAL Strong, interesting; Organized; clear Somewhat organized; No attempt at
clear beg/middle/end; clear attempt at organization; lacks
PATTERN beg/middle/end; thesis that is marked on beg/middle/end clear beg/middle/
strong thesis that is draft thesis is weak or end; thesis lacking or
marked on draft unclear - not marked inappropriate - not
on draft marked on draft
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS:
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________
SENTENCE STRUCTURE Correct/varied Correct, but lacks variety Sometimes incorrect Frequent errors &
& lacks variety lacks variety
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS:
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________
LANGUAGE Very few (if any) Few errors; generally Several errors; Numerous errors;
errors; very well well proofread requires additional appears not to have
MECHANICS proofread proofreading been proofread
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS:
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_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________
SIGNATURE OVER PRINTED NAME OF PANEL:
THESIS EVALUATION FORM
INTERNATIONAL BAPTIST COLLEGE
ibcs.edu.ph
CANDIDATE/S: LEMUEL HISTORILLO
TITLE:________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

FORMAT 1 2 3 4
Includes typed final, Includes typed final, Includes typed final, Missing
prewrite or outline, prewrite or outline, prewrite/ outline, prewrite/outline, draft
marked draft, & marked draft, & Works draft, & Works Cited, or Works Cited;
Works Cited in Cited in prescribed but insufficient insufficient editing of
prescribed format format editing of draft; draft or outline;
several errors in numerous errors in
prescribed format format
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS:
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

UNDERSTANDING Writing shows Writing shows strong, Writing shows Writing shows little or
unusual insight clear understanding adequate no understanding of
OF LITERATURE/ understanding understanding but text
may be too general
TEXTS or superficial
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS:
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________
IDEA Presents fresh thesis Presents an effective Presents a clearly Poorly defined or
in an original manner thesis and development defined thesis, but inconsistent
DEVELOPMENT while displaying using a consistent, the development is development
unusual insight careful manner too general or may of thesis that displays
incorporating examples not be marked by little insight
independent thought
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS:
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________
TEXT SUPPORT More than Adequate/some errors in Inadequate/several Inadequate/numerous
adequate/correct IBCS format; generally errors in IBCS format; errors in IBCS format;
IBCS format; smooth smooth embedding some faulty ineffective embedding
embedding embedding
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS:
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_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________
ORGANIZATIONAL Strong, interesting; Organized; clear Somewhat organized; No attempt at
clear beg/middle/end; clear attempt at organization; lacks
PATTERN beg/middle/end; thesis that is marked on beg/middle/end clear beg/middle/
strong thesis that is draft thesis is weak or end; thesis lacking or
marked on draft unclear - not marked inappropriate - not
on draft marked on draft
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS:
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________
SENTENCE STRUCTURE Correct/varied Correct, but lacks variety Sometimes incorrect Frequent errors &
& lacks variety lacks variety
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS:
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________
LANGUAGE Very few (if any) Few errors; generally Several errors; Numerous errors;
errors; very well well proofread requires additional appears not to have
MECHANICS proofread proofreading been proofread
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS:
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SIGNATURE OVER PRINTED NAME OF PANEL:
THESIS EVALUATION FORM
INTERNATIONAL BAPTIST COLLEGE
ibcs.edu.ph
CANDIDATE/S: MARTIN AUSTRIA
TITLE:________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

FORMAT 1 2 3 4
Includes typed final, Includes typed final, Includes typed final, Missing
prewrite or outline, prewrite or outline, prewrite/ outline, prewrite/outline, draft
marked draft, & marked draft, & Works draft, & Works Cited, or Works Cited;
Works Cited in Cited in prescribed but insufficient insufficient editing of
prescribed format format editing of draft; draft or outline;
several errors in numerous errors in
prescribed format format
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS:
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

UNDERSTANDING Writing shows Writing shows strong, Writing shows Writing shows little or
unusual insight clear understanding adequate no understanding of
OF LITERATURE/ understanding understanding but text
may be too general
TEXTS or superficial
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS:
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________
IDEA Presents fresh thesis Presents an effective Presents a clearly Poorly defined or
in an original manner thesis and development defined thesis, but inconsistent
DEVELOPMENT while displaying using a consistent, the development is development
unusual insight careful manner too general or may of thesis that displays
incorporating examples not be marked by little insight
independent thought
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS:
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________
TEXT SUPPORT More than Adequate/some errors in Inadequate/several Inadequate/numerous
adequate/correct IBCS format; generally errors in IBCS format; errors in IBCS format;
IBCS format; smooth smooth embedding some faulty ineffective embedding
embedding embedding
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS:
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________
ORGANIZATIONAL Strong, interesting; Organized; clear Somewhat organized; No attempt at
clear beg/middle/end; clear attempt at organization; lacks
PATTERN beg/middle/end; thesis that is marked on beg/middle/end clear beg/middle/
strong thesis that is draft thesis is weak or end; thesis lacking or
marked on draft unclear - not marked inappropriate - not
on draft marked on draft
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS:
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________
SENTENCE STRUCTURE Correct/varied Correct, but lacks variety Sometimes incorrect Frequent errors &
& lacks variety lacks variety
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS:
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________
LANGUAGE Very few (if any) Few errors; generally Several errors; Numerous errors;
errors; very well well proofread requires additional appears not to have
MECHANICS proofread proofreading been proofread
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS:
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SIGNATURE OVER PRINTED NAME OF PANEL:
THESIS EVALUATION FORM
INTERNATIONAL BAPTIST COLLEGE
ibcs.edu.ph
CANDIDATE/S: FIONA MARIÑO
TITLE:________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

FORMAT 1 2 3 4
Includes typed final, Includes typed final, Includes typed final, Missing
prewrite or outline, prewrite or outline, prewrite/ outline, prewrite/outline, draft
marked draft, & marked draft, & Works draft, & Works Cited, or Works Cited;
Works Cited in Cited in prescribed but insufficient insufficient editing of
prescribed format format editing of draft; draft or outline;
several errors in numerous errors in
prescribed format format
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS:
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

UNDERSTANDING Writing shows Writing shows strong, Writing shows Writing shows little or
unusual insight clear understanding adequate no understanding of
OF LITERATURE/ understanding understanding but text
may be too general
TEXTS or superficial
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS:
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________
IDEA Presents fresh thesis Presents an effective Presents a clearly Poorly defined or
in an original manner thesis and development defined thesis, but inconsistent
DEVELOPMENT while displaying using a consistent, the development is development
unusual insight careful manner too general or may of thesis that displays
incorporating examples not be marked by little insight
independent thought
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS:
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________
TEXT SUPPORT More than Adequate/some errors in Inadequate/several Inadequate/numerous
adequate/correct IBCS format; generally errors in IBCS format; errors in IBCS format;
IBCS format; smooth smooth embedding some faulty ineffective embedding
embedding embedding
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS:
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________
ORGANIZATIONAL Strong, interesting; Organized; clear Somewhat organized; No attempt at
clear beg/middle/end; clear attempt at organization; lacks
PATTERN beg/middle/end; thesis that is marked on beg/middle/end clear beg/middle/
strong thesis that is draft thesis is weak or end; thesis lacking or
marked on draft unclear - not marked inappropriate - not
on draft marked on draft
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS:
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________
SENTENCE STRUCTURE Correct/varied Correct, but lacks variety Sometimes incorrect Frequent errors &
& lacks variety lacks variety
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS:
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________
LANGUAGE Very few (if any) Few errors; generally Several errors; Numerous errors;
errors; very well well proofread requires additional appears not to have
MECHANICS proofread proofreading been proofread
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS:
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_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________
SIGNATURE OVER PRINTED NAME OF PANEL:
THESIS EVALUATION FORM
INTERNATIONAL BAPTIST COLLEGE
ibcs.edu.ph
CANDIDATE/S: JHAMIL CASQUIO
TITLE:________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

FORMAT 1 2 3 4
Includes typed final, Includes typed final, Includes typed final, Missing
prewrite or outline, prewrite or outline, prewrite/ outline, prewrite/outline, draft
marked draft, & marked draft, & Works draft, & Works Cited, or Works Cited;
Works Cited in Cited in prescribed but insufficient insufficient editing of
prescribed format format editing of draft; draft or outline;
several errors in numerous errors in
prescribed format format
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS:
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

UNDERSTANDING Writing shows Writing shows strong, Writing shows Writing shows little or
unusual insight clear understanding adequate no understanding of
OF LITERATURE/ understanding understanding but text
may be too general
TEXTS or superficial
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS:
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________
IDEA Presents fresh thesis Presents an effective Presents a clearly Poorly defined or
in an original manner thesis and development defined thesis, but inconsistent
DEVELOPMENT while displaying using a consistent, the development is development
unusual insight careful manner too general or may of thesis that displays
incorporating examples not be marked by little insight
independent thought
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS:
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________
TEXT SUPPORT More than Adequate/some errors in Inadequate/several Inadequate/numerous
adequate/correct IBCS format; generally errors in IBCS format; errors in IBCS format;
IBCS format; smooth smooth embedding some faulty ineffective embedding
embedding embedding
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS:
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________
ORGANIZATIONAL Strong, interesting; Organized; clear Somewhat organized; No attempt at
clear beg/middle/end; clear attempt at organization; lacks
PATTERN beg/middle/end; thesis that is marked on beg/middle/end clear beg/middle/
strong thesis that is draft thesis is weak or end; thesis lacking or
marked on draft unclear - not marked inappropriate - not
on draft marked on draft
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS:
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________
SENTENCE STRUCTURE Correct/varied Correct, but lacks variety Sometimes incorrect Frequent errors &
& lacks variety lacks variety
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS:
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________
LANGUAGE Very few (if any) Few errors; generally Several errors; Numerous errors;
errors; very well well proofread requires additional appears not to have
MECHANICS proofread proofreading been proofread
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS:
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SIGNATURE OVER PRINTED NAME OF PANEL:
THESIS EVALUATION FORM
INTERNATIONAL BAPTIST COLLEGE
ibcs.edu.ph
CANDIDATE/S: DOMINGO PECSON
TITLE:________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

FORMAT 1 2 3 4
Includes typed final, Includes typed final, Includes typed final, Missing
prewrite or outline, prewrite or outline, prewrite/ outline, prewrite/outline, draft
marked draft, & marked draft, & Works draft, & Works Cited, or Works Cited;
Works Cited in Cited in prescribed but insufficient insufficient editing of
prescribed format format editing of draft; draft or outline;
several errors in numerous errors in
prescribed format format
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS:
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

UNDERSTANDING Writing shows Writing shows strong, Writing shows Writing shows little or
unusual insight clear understanding adequate no understanding of
OF LITERATURE/ understanding understanding but text
may be too general
TEXTS or superficial
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS:
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________
IDEA Presents fresh thesis Presents an effective Presents a clearly Poorly defined or
in an original manner thesis and development defined thesis, but inconsistent
DEVELOPMENT while displaying using a consistent, the development is development
unusual insight careful manner too general or may of thesis that displays
incorporating examples not be marked by little insight
independent thought
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS:
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________
TEXT SUPPORT More than Adequate/some errors in Inadequate/several Inadequate/numerous
adequate/correct IBCS format; generally errors in IBCS format; errors in IBCS format;
IBCS format; smooth smooth embedding some faulty ineffective embedding
embedding embedding
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS:
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________
ORGANIZATIONAL Strong, interesting; Organized; clear Somewhat organized; No attempt at
clear beg/middle/end; clear attempt at organization; lacks
PATTERN beg/middle/end; thesis that is marked on beg/middle/end clear beg/middle/
strong thesis that is draft thesis is weak or end; thesis lacking or
marked on draft unclear - not marked inappropriate - not
on draft marked on draft
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS:
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________
SENTENCE STRUCTURE Correct/varied Correct, but lacks variety Sometimes incorrect Frequent errors &
& lacks variety lacks variety
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS:
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________
LANGUAGE Very few (if any) Few errors; generally Several errors; Numerous errors;
errors; very well well proofread requires additional appears not to have
MECHANICS proofread proofreading been proofread
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS:
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_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________
SIGNATURE OVER PRINTED NAME OF PANEL:
THESIS EVALUATION FORM
INTERNATIONAL BAPTIST COLLEGE
ibcs.edu.ph
CANDIDATE/S: CATHERINE SORIA, LORYN ABRINA, DIANE TRIXIE REYES
TITLE:________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

FORMAT 1 2 3 4
Includes typed final, Includes typed final, Includes typed final, Missing
prewrite or outline, prewrite or outline, prewrite/ outline, prewrite/outline, draft
marked draft, & marked draft, & Works draft, & Works Cited, or Works Cited;
Works Cited in Cited in prescribed but insufficient insufficient editing of
prescribed format format editing of draft; draft or outline;
several errors in numerous errors in
prescribed format format
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS:
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

UNDERSTANDING Writing shows Writing shows strong, Writing shows Writing shows little or
unusual insight clear understanding adequate no understanding of
OF LITERATURE/ understanding understanding but text
may be too general
TEXTS or superficial
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS:
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________
IDEA Presents fresh thesis Presents an effective Presents a clearly Poorly defined or
in an original manner thesis and development defined thesis, but inconsistent
DEVELOPMENT while displaying using a consistent, the development is development
unusual insight careful manner too general or may of thesis that displays
incorporating examples not be marked by little insight
independent thought
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS:
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________
TEXT SUPPORT More than Adequate/some errors in Inadequate/several Inadequate/numerous
adequate/correct IBCS format; generally errors in IBCS format; errors in IBCS format;
IBCS format; smooth smooth embedding some faulty ineffective embedding
embedding embedding
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS:
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________
ORGANIZATIONAL Strong, interesting; Organized; clear Somewhat organized; No attempt at
clear beg/middle/end; clear attempt at organization; lacks
PATTERN beg/middle/end; thesis that is marked on beg/middle/end clear beg/middle/
strong thesis that is draft thesis is weak or end; thesis lacking or
marked on draft unclear - not marked inappropriate - not
on draft marked on draft
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS:
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________
SENTENCE STRUCTURE Correct/varied Correct, but lacks variety Sometimes incorrect Frequent errors &
& lacks variety lacks variety
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS:
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________
LANGUAGE Very few (if any) Few errors; generally Several errors; Numerous errors;
errors; very well well proofread requires additional appears not to have
MECHANICS proofread proofreading been proofread
ADDITIONAL COMMENTS:
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SIGNATURE OVER PRINTED NAME OF PANEL:

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