English for The Arts Product Summary Report UBI2032

Product Summary Report

Peer Edit Response Form

Your Name:
Product:

Kindly tick  the appropriate sections.

 The writing meets the requirements of the assignment. If not, please state
areas of improvement that need to be done.
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 The title has capital letters where needed.
If not, write down the words that are not correctly capitalized.

Introduction

Body 1

Body 2

Body 3

Body 4 (if
more than 4
paragraphs)
Conclusion
English for The Arts Product Summary Report UBI2032

INTRODUCTION

 Hook is well-developed @ explained.

 The topic sentence is clearly stated.
 Thesis statement is clearly stated.

BODY PARAGRAPHS

 Each body paragraph contains topic sentences.

 Each body paragraph contains supporting details.
 Each body paragraph contains examples.
 Supporting information is adequate.
If not, state what can be added in.
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 The supporting paragraphs are relevant and well organized. If not, state
what can be added in.
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 Transitions and other linking devices are used in the sentences.
 Examples for each body paragraph are stated. If not, state some examples
that can be used in the sentences.
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 The content is interesting and thoughtful.
 Suggest areas to be improved to make this report more interesting.
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CONCLUSION

 The conclusion is well paraphrased.

 The conclusion contains topic sentence
 The conclusion contains supporting details and concluding sentence.
 The conclusion is effective.
 The conclusion provides a sense of closure.
 The conclusion can be written better by
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OVERALL FORMAT
 The paper has complete sentences.
 The sentence length and structure vary.
 The paper has correct spelling.
 All sentences and proper nouns begin with a capital letter.
 Each sentence has end punctuation.
 The paragraphs are indented.
 The paper has bibliography / references / attachments / testimonials.

Finish the following statements as best you can. Remember, your job is to
help the writer.

1. One thing I really liked about the writing is…

2. One thing I think the author can improve upon is…

3. Something I would like the author to tell me more about is…

4. One last comment…