Professional Documents
Culture Documents
Roldan S. Cardona
1. Issues
However, there are several things that could improve the paper.
The following are the critical issues I have in the study:
Introduction: This was made too short. Although it covered the scope
and the background of the study, I think it is much more important to
establish the purpose and highlight the importance of the study. The
introduction should lean more into emphasizing why this research
matters in the context of education. If applicable, it is best that the
introduction should also connect to current issues in education to show
a problem with former theories or reveal a gap in current research.
There isn’t research in the traditional sense for this article because the
pandemic just happened, but the author does include many examples of
work written by those who have written on this subject in the past.
Researchers have cited other research studies about how time
management, social media addiction, and the like. These are good, well-
known examples and authors and I think it adds a great deal of credibility
to the piece.
This article isn’t very straightforward in the beginning because it was
very brief and it’s not until the succeeding paragraphs that you realize
where the article is headed. To have more people be engaged and read
the whole article it needs a new, more concise introduction. Once the
reader gets to the good examples that are relevant to the everyday life of
the students, a good portion of the article will be read by a wider
audience because they will find it significant.
Overall, it is a good, well-written research with an important
message for educational administrators, teachers, and learners in the
field. The piece, when taken as a whole, is relevant and very convincing
in theory but starts slow and never lays out a concrete way of
approaching a problem that has a lot of variables to compare. The
researchers should establish the purpose of the study and its significance
to its contribution to the body of knowledge that will help other people
improve learning and productivity of students.
6. References