The document provides examples of good and bad responses to a task comparing two photos and discussing what might be good or bad about traveling in the ways shown. The bad response simply describes the photos without comparing them and does not discuss any positives or negatives. The good response compares the settings and people in each photo, then discusses potential positives like exercise and cost for bicycling versus expenses and lack of health benefits for motorbiking. It also weighs safety and speed factors for both modes of transportation.
The document provides examples of good and bad responses to a task comparing two photos and discussing what might be good or bad about traveling in the ways shown. The bad response simply describes the photos without comparing them and does not discuss any positives or negatives. The good response compares the settings and people in each photo, then discusses potential positives like exercise and cost for bicycling versus expenses and lack of health benefits for motorbiking. It also weighs safety and speed factors for both modes of transportation.
The document provides examples of good and bad responses to a task comparing two photos and discussing what might be good or bad about traveling in the ways shown. The bad response simply describes the photos without comparing them and does not discuss any positives or negatives. The good response compares the settings and people in each photo, then discusses potential positives like exercise and cost for bicycling versus expenses and lack of health benefits for motorbiking. It also weighs safety and speed factors for both modes of transportation.
asked you to describe them! You are asked to compare - there's a big difference. Describing has ONE element - This man is riding a bike. Comparing has TWO elements - This picture shows a man riding a bike while this one shows a motorbike. If you forget a word or make a mistake, don't worry. Just keep talking. You have to talk for one minute. Mistakes are normal. Keep going! How about an example? Compare the two photos and say what might be good or bad for the people traveling in these ways. BAD: There is a man riding a bicycle. He has a helm. Um... helm. Hat? Helmhat? Helmet! Yes, he has a helmet. This man is on a motor bicycle. There is a yellow taxi behind him. Um... I finished. (Problems: described the photos - didn't compare - wasted time on one word - didn't say what might be good or bad.) GOOD: Both pictures show men on their own. In the picture on the top there's a man on a bicycle while in the other picture the man has got a motorbike. In the first photo he's out in the countryside somewhere, maybe even close to a mountain. In contrast, the other man is in a city and it looks quite dusty and polluted. Here in the first image, though, we can see it looks clean and the air seems fresh. I think there are good things about traveling by bicycle - it's good exercise and it's very healthy. And cheap! On the other hand, riding a motorbike doesn't have any health benefits and it's much more expensive because you have to buy petrol. What about the downsides of cycling? I suppose it isn't very safe because especially on the road drivers don’t pay attention to you. But sometimes this happens if you travel by motorbike too. Oh, the bike is quite slow - much slower than the motorbike. That's the really good thing about the motorbike - the speed, and it's easy to find a parking space!