Name : Icha Novita Sari

NPM : 1923014
Correction of the paragraph
Wonderful Place in Baturaja
Baturaja has a very beautiful and amazing place, people call it Coal Lake. This lake is
very beautiful because it is have blue color.This color is come from because the content in this
lake. People are also call this lake is Love Lake because forming love. Near this lake there is a
waterfall that is noless beautiful.The location of this lake is on Gunung Kuripan village,
Pengandonan sub-district.This lake is about 43KM or 1hour from Baturaja.You can ride
motorcycle if you want to visit this lake, but you can’t ride car because the road to this lake is
narrow and can’t pass by car.You can’t swim in this lake because the contents in this lake can
makes your body burn, so you can only see the beauty of this lake but don’t touch the water of
this lake.This lake is very famous especially a few months ago.Touristis very interesting to visit
this lake.They are visit this lake at weekend with their friend or their family.This place is also
very nice to photography and very instagramable.This lake is very beautiful but until now has
not any attention from government to this lake.We hope government give more attention and
keep this place, so we can see the beauty of this lake for longer. Coal Lake is very beautiful place
if you want to spend your time with your family or your friend, and if you want to upload your
photo on your social media because this lake is instagramable. Besides that you don’t swim in
this lake because this lake can makes your body burn.
Expalanation of the corection in the paragraph above:

 place in title should be capital on the letter P, because it title of paragraph.

 nothing spaces in several senntences after the point.

 add is as a connect beetwen lake and love lake, so that sentence is not stiff.

 coal lake should be capital on the letter C and L, because it name of place.

 nothing point to separate the sentence, example on sentence

This lake is very famous especially a few months agoTourist very interesting to visit this
lake.
should be use point to separate 2 the sentence
This lake is very famous especially a few months ago.Tourist very interesting to visit this
lake.

 use comma after and, because it 2 sentence.

 use point not comma after instagramble, because the next sentence.