SERENADE

Song by Carl Anthony E. Cadalso and

Lemuel F. Culaste Jr.

Verse #1
Oh, she talks so sweet, like sugar, like hershey’s
Makes me tryna catch a type three diabetes
I like that she dresses oh so simple
Cute li’l waist, uh, and she got the dimples

Chorus #1
I wrote another song thinkin’ about you
I’ve written one whenever I’m missin’ you
And it feels like, oh-oh-oh(acapella)
It feels like this, oh-oh-oh(acapella)

Verse #2
When I see her everyday, oh, I feel like my morning is complete
She’s so beautiful, uh, so sweet as she’s looking
Hell, I know that we’re bad for each other
I really don’t care ‘cause I already want her

Chorus #2
I wanna see the whole damn sky with you, baby
Cuz you could be the one, girl, you’re making me crazy
It feels like this, oh-oh-oh(acapella)
And it feels like this, oh-oh-oh(acapella)

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CARL ANTHONY E. CADALSO

BEST(4) BETTER(3) GOOD(2) NEEDS TO

IMPROVE(1)

KNOWLEDGE The song or The structure The structure To say it

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structure is song is song is good requires
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song. of a poem or a
song.

LYRICISM The lyrics were The lyricism The lyricism The lyric lacks
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they relate to understandable it lacks did not fully
the main theme and expressed consistency express what
of the activity. the point, but throughout the the student is
Shows it could have song. attempting to
consistency been phrased say.
throughout the better.
song or poem

LEMUEL F. CULASTE JR.