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1. Part of the lette. r numbered 1-3.

Part 1 is the greeting part. This part contains salutation and name of the reception.
Part 2 is the body of letter. In this part sender explain the intention of the letter. Also,
this part could have more than 1 paragraph.
Part 3 is signature block. In this part sender can attach his signature. In old days, this can
be a wet signature or wet stamp. Nowadays, these are already replaced with the
electronic one.
2. 3 errors in the letters:
#1. “Thank U”, considering this is a formal letter, this shall be written Thank you.
#2. 4 juli. “J” in July has to be written in capital considering that this is name of month.
#3. First sentence in the first paragraph the body of email is supposed to has no
question mark. Instead, the sender can explain the background of the letter for example
with closed-confirming sentence.

3. Dear Biskuit Amor Customer Service Department

I would like to have your attention to your Biskuit Amor packages that is sent to me
fulfilling order number 007. I have found that all Biskuit Amor packages is already
expired in 2021. It had impacted our garden tea party plan that supposed to be held in
Istana Bogor last Saturday night. We must reschedule our plan as consequence of this
finding. Unfortunately reschedule will charge us penalty.

Refer to the agreed term and condition, seller has obligation to ensure that Biskuit Amor
package have passed quality check prior to going out for shipment. Otherwise, seller will
send new Biscuit Amor as replacement for any quality related findings.

4. Dear Mr. Elon


Thank you for your enormous support in our Kera Putih Foundation charity event last
night. That was the highest donation amount we received for the charity program. The
donation had ensured all projects under the charity program managed in skillful way.
All in Kera Putih Foundation would like to convey appreciation for your kindness.

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