“A Winged Qualm”

Written by:

Royvinze S. Mandilag
Kristia Mae E. Viray
Akmalie A. Imam

SECTION

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THE BEGINNING ACT: INTRODUCTION

SCENE 1: ADAM AND EVE

EXT. OPEN GARDEN FIELD – DAY

Animals roaming the field and birds are chirping. A sudden

burst of 2 lights in the shape of a man and woman that
transformed into Adam and Eve. Adam and Eve start looking
around their surroundings and moved their hands as if
familiarizing themselves with their new body.

NARRATOR (V.O.)
During the beginning and after the creation of Earth, God
tasked some angels to watch over Adam and Eve.

FADE IN:

EXT. GARDEN OF EDEN – DAY

FULLSHOT OF THE GARDEN OF EDEN

NARRATOR (V.O.)
These angels became Adam and Eve’s guardian angels.

The newly tasked guardian angels flew away from the Garden
of Eden to watch over Adam and Eve.

CUT:

SCENE 2: THE FIRST SIN

EXT. OPEN GARDEN FIELD – DAY

Adam and Eve are standing before the tree of the forbidden
fruit, a snake wrapped around Eve’s arm hissing. Eve held
out her hand and grab the fruit and bit into it. Adam
watched in shock but when Eve looked satisfied, Adam bit
into the fruit as well.

NARRATOR (V.O.)
But when Adam and Eve committed their first sin.

CUT:

MEDIUM SHOT – ANGELS BEHIND ADAM AND EVE

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The Angels watch in horror as they enjoyed eating the

forbidden fruit. Suddenly their wings light ablaze with fire
and they fall one by one.

NARRATOR (CONT’D)
The guardian angels failed the task and lost their wings and
became fallen angels where they were forced to live among
the humans.

FADE OUT:

EXT. GARDEN OF EDEN – DAY

God is sitting on his seat with the rest of the angels

around him with worried looks.

MEDIUM CLOSE UP – GOD’S BACK LOOKING OVER THE ANGELS

NARRATOR (V.O.)
God then tasked the other angels who are living in the
Garden of Eden to watch the fallen angels below.

The angels nod their head looking down and can’t meet God’s
eyes.

FADE IN:

EXT. OPEN GARDEN FIELD – DAY

Adam and Eve let go of the half-eaten forbidden fruit as the

animals around them starts walking away to leave them. Adam
and Eve looked at each other, concern on their faces.

DISSOLVE:

SCENE 3: THE FATEFUL MEETING

EXT. OPEN FIELD – DAY

The field is now absent of Adam and Eve’s presence and the
animals. There’s now a small hut in the corner. Hyacinthus,
a fallen angel, lives doing basic survival tasks of planting
and gathering foods. The main character Apollo, an angel,
walks by every day and a mini montage of different scenes
shows up where Apollo is watching Hyacinthus.
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NARRATOR (V.O.)
After ten years, the angels followed the order of God and
continued watching over Adam and Eve and other fallen
angels. Hyacinthus, a fallen angel, chose to live alone
instead of grouping with others. Apollo, a loyal angel of
God, became curious and follow Hyacinthus around frequently.

CUT:

MEDIUM SHOT – HYACINTHUS AND APOLLO

Hyacinthus noticed Apollo and waved at him. Hyacinthus

walked towards Apollo and talked to him. Apollo looked
shocked and awkward while they talk.

THE MIDDLE ACT: CLIMAX

CUT:

SCENE 4: FRIENDSHIP

EXT. HYACINTHUS’ PLACE - DAY

FULL SHOT – HYACINTHUS AND APOLLO

A montage of illustration showing Hyacinthus and Apollo

spending time together in different places talking and
becoming friends. One illustration of Apollo helping
Hyacinthus gardening, one is them laying on the field
looking at the sky and another is them walking together
looking at each other.

NARRATOR (V.O.)
As time went by, Hyacinthus and Apollo grew closer together.
Hyacinthus and Apollo spent a lot of time together and both
felt that there is something between them but Apollo is in
denial.

SCENE 5: CONFRONTATION

EXT. CLIFF SIDE – DAY

Hyacinthus is sitting on the edge of the cliff side ready to

have his picnic with Apollo.
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CUT:

MEDIUM SHOT – HYACINTHUS’ BACK WATCHING APOLLO

Apollo walked towards Hyacinthus and sat down beside him

feeling happy that he can now spend his time with Hyacinthus
after his task. While eating, Hyacinthus has this bothered
look on him. Apollo noticed and asked.

APOLLO
Are you okay?

HYACINTHUS
(nervous)
I’ve been meaning to ask…

APOLLO
What is it?

HYACINTHUS
Am I just a friend to you?

APOLLO
(confused)
What do you mean?

HYACINTHUS
I love you.

Apollo looked shocked didn’t know what to say to Hyacinthus’

hopeful look. There’s just silence for a while. Apollo
avoided Hyacinthus’ eyes and stood up and left without
saying anything to Hyacinthus.

NARRATOR (V.O.)
Apollo felt conflicted and refuse to give an answer because
he knew there is a consequence if he gave an answer. Because
of this, he left Hyacinthus without a word and felt confused
about the whole situation and his feelings.

CUT:

CLOSEUP – HYACINTHUS
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His face, full of shock at how Apollo reacted with sadness

visible.

FADE IN:

SCENE 6: THE AVOIDANCE

EXT. HYACINTHUS’ PLACE – DAY TILL SUNSET

Hyacinthus is shown living alone again, coming from the hunt

and going home, the sun rises and fall behind his hut,
Hyacinthus just sitting outside as if waiting.

FADE OUT:

EXT. OVER THE CLOUDS – DAY TILL NIGHT

OVERHEAD –LOOKING OVER HYACINTHUS’ PLACE

Apollo watches Hyacinthus every day. Arial clear view of

Hyacinthus’ place.

CUT:

CLOSE UP – APOLLO’S FACE

Clear disappointment is shown in his face.

NARRATOR (V.O.)
Apollo is full of doubt and guilt for leaving Hyacinthus.
Apollo didn't know when it started nor when he realized it
was more than friendship he felt towards Hyacinthus.

THE ENDING ACT: RESOLUTION

FADE OUT:

SCENE 7: LOST WINGS

EXT. SKY – NIGHTFALL

MEDIUM SHOT - APOLLO

Apollo is flying on his way home when a sudden realization

happened to him. His flying started stuttering and until it
suddenly burst into flames and he started falling.
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NARRATOR (V.O.)
The moment Apollo realized he loves Hyacinthus and admitted
it to himself, is the moment his wings burst into flame.

CUT:

FULL SHOT – THE SKY

Apollo’s falling figure looked like a shooting star or

asteroid slowly about to hit the ground.

NARRATOR (V.O.)
God forbid romantic relationship with His angels and only
accept those who are loyal to Him.

CUT:

CLOSEUP – HYACINTHUS

Hyacinthus is looking up at the sky, his face is glowing

from the bright fire of what he thought is a shooting star
with which he closed his eyes as if wishing something.

NARRATOR (V.O.)
Once Apollo fell, he immediately lost his connection to God
and couldn’t enter the Garden of Eden.

SCENE 8: THE FALLEN ANGEL

FULL SHOT – HYACINTHUS

EXT. NEAR HYACINTHUS’ PLACE - NIGHT

Hyacinthus started walking home carrying fresh animals he

caught in the wild. While walking, he heard a loud cry and
he started looking for the source.

CUT:

CLOSE UP – APOLLO

Apollo is sobbing, rubbing his eyes and hiccups. He heard

nearby footsteps.

CUT:

FULL SHOT – APOLLO

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This scene shows Apollo with his burnt and almost detached
wings behind him.

CUT:

COWBOY SHOT – HYACINTHUS

Hyacinthus stopped walking and saw Apollo’s state, he looks

like he’s about to cry but held back and ran towards Apollo.

CUT:

FULL SHOT – HYACINTHUS AND APOLLO

Hyacinthus ran towards Apollo and hugged him as Apollo

continued to cry on his arms.

FADE IN:

SCENE 9: WISH FROM THE STAR

EXT. NEAR HYACINTHUS – SUNRISE

Hyacinthus didn’t let go of hugging and comforting Apollo

and waited until he calmed down. Once Apollo calmed down.

HYACINTHUS
(worried)
What happened?

APOLLO
(sad)
I failed God and this is punishment.

HYACINTHUS
Everything will be fine, I’ll help you. You’re not alone.

Hyacinthus stood up, offered his hands and Apollo grabbed it

and stood up, they start walking towards Hyacinthus hut.

CUT:

CLOSE UP – APOLLO

Teary eyed Apollo looks at their holding hands and up at

Hyacinthus’ eyes.
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CUT:

CLOSE UP – HYACINTHUS AND APOLLO’S HOLDING HANDS

A slight squeeze from Apollo’s hand.

CUT:

EXTREME CLOSEUP – HYACINTHUS

A close up of Hyacinthus hazel brown eyes looking directly

at Apollo with a curious look.

CUT:

MEDIUM CLOSEUP – APOLLO

Apollo looked directly at Hyacinthus’ hazel brown eyes.

APOLLO
I love you.

CUT:

CLOSEUP – HYACINTHUS

Hyacinthus looked shocked that turns into happiness and he

hugged Apollo once again.

HYACINTHUS
(happy)
My wish came true.

THE END