MYSTERY ON THE HIGH SEAS

A Murder Mystery by
Max D.

Screen Script
EXT. SHIP’S POOL – MORNING (RAINING)
Several police and evidence of crime on the outside of the ship,
coast guard at the side.
EXT PART – LEFTOVER DRINKS AROUND THE PLACE/A BODY COVERED WITH
BLOODSTAINS/STANDARD DECORATIONS
A police officer warns for the detective at the crime scene.
The detective writes down some information with his notepad.
POLICE OFFICER
Sir, we found a few more bodies inside the ship.
DETECTIVE
Okay, take me there, please.
POLICE OFFICER
Come with me.
They walk towards the entrance of the interior of the ship as
the camera follows them.
INT. SHIP – LIVING ROOM / PARTY ROOM / BATHROOMS / CRIME TAPES
The place is with some police and photographers taking some
pictures of the bodies. The ship is without energy, and with a
lot of blood around.
POLICE OFFICER
Just be careful not to ruin the photos, please.
DETECTIVE
It looks like it was pretty violent right here.
POLICE OFFICER
You have no idea. The bodies were deformed when we found it.
DETECTIVE
Survivors?
The police officer keeps walking while the detective follows
him.
POLICE OFFICER
We’ll talk about that in a moment. The investigations are
complex but it seems that this time it wasn’t difficult to find
out the truth.
DETECTIVE
Hmf.
The detective finds a HARPOON on the ground next to the wall.
 DETECTIVE
Have you reported this?
POLICE OFFICER
If it’s off like that, probably not. Leave it there,i’ll let
them know.
DETECTIVE
How long did you guys been here?
POLICE OFFICER
Forty minutes, i presume.
The detective looks on with disgust and he snorts, tired.
POLICE OFFICER
So... what do you think?
DETECTIVE
What i think? Well... i think they smoked weed as fuck.
The detective says this while lighting a cigarette.
Close-up to the detective’s face, very small indeed.
CUT TO: Title card, on black.
THEN TO:

EXT. BEACHSIDE – MORNING (11:43 AM)

SCORCHING SUN EXERCISES THE LOCAL – BEACH WITH FEW PEOPLE/SNACKS
EVERYWHERE AND LOTS OF BEACH CHAIRS/SHIP WAITING AT SEA
The camera follows the a digital influencer called AMANDA KESLER
walking along the beach and recording a STORIES for her
instagram account, She uses a pink and white bikini. (Brown
girl)
AMANDA
Hey Guys! I know I’ve been off the grid for a long time but the
reason is... Im going to a CRUISE! I don’t know exactly why they
invited me but anyway... What matters is that im going! And i
think i’m going to be more offline this weekend because i want
to enjoy it as much as i can with my friends and stuff, you
understand, right? Well, i’m going to party a lot, take a rest
because i really need it, it’s going to be... really great. And
i promise that when i come back i will do several surprises for
you! Bye, love ya!
Amanda finishes her recording and her expression changes
drastically.
Amanda walks towards a girl with short black hair called GWEN
KEARNEY, she wears a black bathing suit and is smoking a
cigarette. (White)
GWEN
Hey! I-
AMANDA
Give me a drag.
Amanda takes the cigarette from Gwen’s mouth and takes a drag.
GWEN
Why are you stressed?
AMANDA
Why aren’t you?
Amanda hands the cigarette back to Gwen.
GWEN
We’re going to have this fucking weekend and you’re already like
this?
AMANDA
We don’t have the same problems, okay? I’m full of work and it’s
literally squeezing all of my happiness.
GWEN
Try to rest, it will help you.
Amanda adjust her bikini and her brown hair putting her hand on
her face.
AMANDA
That’s what i came here to do.
Amanda sees the other characters arriving.
AMANDA
Oh fuck put it down!
GWEN
Shit!
Gwen throws her cigarette into the sand and buries it with her
foot.

GWEN
Are you ready?
 AMANDA
For this? No fucking way.
Gwen and Amanda stares the group walking towards the place.
Gwen and Amanda go to the group.
The rest of the ship’s crew arrives.
ANDREW DRYSDALE
White, A boy with auburn hair wearing a low-key cop trop and a
black chort.
JACOB CRAIG
White, A blond boy in a white tank top and beige pants.
FELICE MCGREGOR
White, A middle-aged woman in tacky glasses and a flowery beach
dress. Brown hair.
ROWAN MCGREGOR
Black, Middle-aged man,(Felice’s husband) gray hair and a beer
gut. He wears a blue tank top and a flowered short.
REY MCGREGOR
White, Daughter of Felice and Rowan, a skinni girl in white
dress and pink stockings.
MADELYN DRYSDALE
White, Andrew’s mother, in her late 40s, trim and blonde, wears
a brown dress and a ponytail.
MARKUS DRYSTALE
Brown, Andrew’s father, a mittle-aged man who looks old and has
fake brown (dyed) hair, wears a black shirt and black shorts.
----------------
As Markus and Madelyn walk together, they hold hands, standing a
little apart from the others.
MADELYN
Sweetie. God... be careful with that walet almost out of your
pocket!
MARKUS
Oh, sorry babe.
Markus adjust his wallet.
MADELYN
Please, don’t embarrass me in front of them.
 MARKUS
Do you really care about that?
MADELYN
Shut up.
Madelyn walks towards Felice with a fake smile.
MADELYN
Felice! How are you? Thank you very much for the invitation, we
really needed it.
FELICE
No wonder! It’s been a while since we met like this. And the
kids didn’t see each other much either.
REY listens to the conversation nearby, while fixing her
suitcase.
REY
Actually... they were.
FELICE
What do you mean?
REY
Nothing, but you should pay more attention to us.
Rey finishes her sentence and takes her bags inside the ship. –
Her momentary appearance ends.
MARKUS
Well, at least now we have time to get together.
MADELYN
Yea! That’s great, i guess.
FELICE
Absolutely.
Felice pulls Rowan close to her.
FELICE
Rowan, come here honey.
Rowan was distracted with his cellphone.
ROWAN
What, love?
Rowan notices the awkwardness and turns to Markus and Madelyn
and greets them.
 ROWAN
Oh, hey guys. Glad Fliss got us together, right?
MARKUS
Certainly! We really needed to have a beer like the old days.
FELICE
There is a bar on the ship. But take it easy, i don’t want both
of you drunk on the first night.
MARKUS
If that’s the case, we’ll be in the early hours.
Madelyn laughs to herself in na awkward way, her smile fades
linearly.
CUTS TO ANDREW AND JACOB
Andrew is texting SOPHIE (Andrew’s friend)(from message 4)
WHATSZAPP MESSENGER
Messege time – 11:47 AM
SOPHIE
Are you seriously going to abandon
me to spend this weekend with these
people?
ANDREW
Relax, you know i just came for Jake,
And i can’t wait to se Gwen!
SOPHIE
I miss her. Say hi for me.
ANDREW
Okay. And calm down,I will send
You several pictures as well.
SOPHIE
So are you going to throw your great
Weekend in my face? Okay...
Andrew grins.

ANDREW
Stop! You asked for it. Im going to
Get off the phone, bye soph!!
SOPHIE
Make sure you take the first step with
Jake Andy.
----------------
Jacob notices that Andrew is texting someone.
JACOB
Who are you talking to?
ANDREW
Sophie. Remember her?
JACOB
The one with the pink hair, right?
ANDREW
That one.
JACOB
What were you walking about?
ANDREW
About these days. It will be cool, i guess.
JACOB
Only if Rey doesn’t bother us like the other times.
ANDREW
Don’t even tell me. And Gwen still hates her.
Amanda walks in, on the phone.
AMANDA (ON PHONE)
Look, i don’t have time for this shit, stop bothering me and
tell Kevin i’ll pay him later.
Pause for a few seconds, Amanda gets stressed.

AMANDA (ON PHONE)

Jesus Christ mom, leave me alone! You can handle this, fuck.
(Hangs up)
Shit.
Amanda brings her hand to her forehead, wearily.
Andrew and Jacob just watch Amanda, with arms crossed.
ANDREW
Wanna bet how much she freaks out the first night?
JACOB
I know i would lose.
(Andrew laughs)
Lindsey leaves the ship and takes the bags to take to the rooms.
Lindsey is blonde and work for Felice. She’s a waitress.
She takes the others’ bags and walks over to Jacob and Andrew.
LINDSEY
Do you want me to help with the bags?
JACOB
No need, we’ll take it.
LINDSEY
Okay, I’m Lindsey, nice to meet you guys.
ANDREW
I’m Andrew .
Andrew tries to greet her but realizes that her hands are busy
with the bags.
JACOB
And I’m Jacob.
LINDSEY
All right, see you on the ship!
Lindsey returns to the ship.
ANDREW
That was... shameful.
Jacob laughs.

JACOB
Yeah, really was.
INT. SHIP’S EXTERIOR
It has several beach chairs, umbrellas, and a large swimming
pool in the middle of the place.
Sunny and happy weather, typical cruise travel.
Gwen is sitting at one of the chairs in the place, listening to
music.
Andrew appears and nudges her, as her eyes are closed and she is
just sunbathing.
Gwen opens her eyes.
GWEN
ANDY! God i can’t believe you’re here!
ANDREW
You... haven’t seen me with everyone?
GWEN
Shut up and give me a hug!
Gwen stands and hugs him. After she sits back in the chair.
ANDREW
How long have we not seen each other?
GWEN
Since you stopped talking to me?
ANDREW
I haven’t... stopped talking to you. It’s just that i met
someone. And i don’t know if there might be something going on.
GWEN
Wait, did you get unstuck?
Andrew looks around sheepishly.
GWEN
Who is it?! Do i know?
ANDREW
Um... He’s here. And i don’t know if you know him.
GWEN
HE’S HERE? FUCK!
ANDREW
What?!
(Andrew laughs)
 GWEN
How long have you been with him?
ANDREW
I’m not with him, it’s still a little early...
GWEN
When?
ANDREW
three weeks.
GWEN
You’ve been talking to him for three weeks and i just found out
NOW? I thought we’re friends!
ANDREW
Sorry! I was busy...
GWEN
Busy with fucking him, you don’t fool me!
ANDREW
Shut up!
(Andrew laughs)
It’s nothing serious for now. And he’s know to Rey. Not that
they’re friends or anything.
GWEN
If he’s Rey friend it’s already a big read flag.
ANDREW
Relax, he hates her.
GWEN
Everyone hates her, i still don’t know how I’m going to endure
spending two days putting up with her.
ANDREW
But we have to pretend we like, otherwise Felice will be pissed
off with us.

GWEN
Felice is also an idiot. The whole family actually.
ANDREW
 (Andrew laughs)
At least they will pay.
GWEN
Yeah.
Amanda arrives at the outer part of the ship along with Jacob.
AMANDA
ANDREW? IS IT YOU OR AM I SEEING A MIRACLE?! (She screams)
ANDREW
Hey Amanda.
Amanda runs to hug Andrew.
AMANDA
Only Jake to convince you to leave your house!
ANDREW
You know I’d rather stay at home.
AMANDA
Im glad you’re here.
JACOB
Hey, i’m Jake. I think we’re haven’t seen each other yet. (He
greets Gwen)
GWEN
I’m Gwen.
JACOB
Yeah, i know. Andy told me about you.
Gwen notices that Jacob used the nickname Andy, wich is only
used by people close to Andrew.
She looks at Andrew, asking with her eyes if it’s him.
Andrew says yes without saying a word.
Gwen looks back at Jacob.
GWEN
Oh, that’s nice! I hope he said nice things about me.
CUTS TO THE ‘’MIDDLE-AGED’’ GROUP.
INT. SHIP’S BAR
Several chairs and reddish lighting, with candles in the
corners. It has a long hallway at the back.
BAR STYLE PLACE FROM ‘’THE SHINING’’
The bar girl Jennisse Lloyd is filling a drink for Markus and
Rowan.
MARKUS ROWAN
Thank you. Thank you.
MARKUS
What have you been doing? To avoid me like that, just something
fucked up.
Markus drinks.
ROWAN
Fliss hasn’t even let me step out of the house, man.
MARKUS
Why not?! As far i remember she was crazier than you.
Markus laughs.
Rowan, while laughing, lights a cigarrete.
ROWAN
She started that ‘’trading’’ things, you know? Then the fun side
of her just ended. At least that’s how we managed to pay
everyone here.
MARKUS
But you were always rich.
ROWAN
We broke for a while, we weren’t poor but she saved us, man.
MARKUS
And Rey? It looks like she’s liking that boy... What’s his name?
ROWAN
Jacob?
MARKUS
That one! Did they... you know.
ROWAN
I almost don’t see them together. Rey is kind of away from them,
actually. I don’t know why.
The rest of the middle-aged group arrives at the scene.
FELICE
Oh, you’re here.
 MADELYN
Why didn’t Ann come too?
ROWAN
She’s... Hospitalized.
FELICE
Another relapse.
MADELYN
Fuck... How did i just find out about this now?
ROWAN
I just think about how Gwen must be...
Rowan smokes the cigarrete.
MARKUS
Gwen has been through much worse.
ROWAN
Even so, she must be really sad...

INT. SHIP’S EXTERIOR

Upbeat 2000s music starts playing.
The scene cuts to the ‘’teenage group’’ dancing.
Gwen is smoking a cigarrete while dancing.
Back to – Middle-aged group.
INT. SHIP’S BAR.
The song stops abruptly.
FELICE
I don’t know, they weren’t even close to each other.
MARKUS
Gwen hates her mother.
ROWAN
How do you know that?
MARKUS
I was the closest to Ann in the group.
Madelyn rolls her eyes.
FELICE
We haven’t seen each other for months and the first conversation
is about the daughter of a woman who isn’t even here? Jesus,
we’re really off topic.
MADELYN
I need a beer.
FELICE
Me too.
MARKUS
Let’s drown our rich frustations in beer and pounds of weed,
please?
ROWAN
Jenn, get us the weed, please.
Jenisse
Sure, Rowan.
FELICE
Rowan?
Jenisse
What?
FELICE
It’s sir for you.
Jenisse
Oh... Okay, sorry, sir. I’ll get the weed...
Rowan does not show emotions, he’s silent.
Jenisse leaves the scene.
INT. DOOR TO THE SHIP OUTSIDE.
Lindsey is watching the teenagers from behind the (glass) door.
Jenisse appears and hugs her from behind.

JENISSE
Hey sweetie. What’s wrong?
LINDSEY
Nothing. I just miss when i was a teen, you know?
JENISSE
Me too, at least i don’t have to use a fake ID anymore.
 LINDSEY
Yeah...
JENISSE
Do you know where Felice and Rowan keep the drugs?
LINDSEY
Same place where they keep the gun.
JENISSE
Back room?
LINDSEY
Yep.
JENISSE
Okay, thank you. Bye!
Jenisse leaves the scene. Lindsey continues to watch the group.
INT. SHIP’S BACK ROOM.
Closed place with only one white light. The wall is a faded
white color and full of moss in the corners. Several shelves
with fishing items and tools.
Jenisse looks for the drugs and finds a HARPOON (important),
searching furtherm she finds a safe on the wall (Place where the
gun is also). (SHE KNOWS THE PASSWORD), she opens it, takes the
weed from inside, close it again and leaves the room.
INT. CAPTAIN’S CABIN.
The ship’s captain is in his chair on the phone.
TONY (ON PHONE)
Linda, i know. Alright, i understand it’s important to you but
I’m on duty right now, okay? We’ll talk about it later.
(Pause for a few seconds)
Just try to understand, there’s no way i can talk to Marta right
now. When the office is over, i’ll solve everything you need.
I’ll se you later, all right? Send a kiss to Julia. Love you.
Tony ends the call and places his cellphone on the table.
Tony approaches the table and turns on the microphone to speak
over the loudspeaker.
TONY (ON LOUDSPEAKER)
Ladies and gentlemen, please get organized, i will be starting
our route now.
The ship starts to move.
CUTS TO THE SHIP’S EXTERIOR
AMANDA
Finally.
The group sits down.
Gwen’s favorite music starts to play.
GWEN
Fuck, that’s my music!
ANDREW
You only put this one when we hang out.
GWEN
Obviously, this is the music of the century.
ANDREW
Okay...
Amanda takes a drag on her cigarette and takes a few selfies.
AMANDA
Group photo?
JACOB
Let’s go!
AMANDA
Hide this shit, i don’t want our parents coming to bother me.
ANDREW
Sorry.
The group gets together and takes a picture together.
Madelyn appears on the scene.
MADELYN
Hey guys, lunch is ready.
The group goes to the main room.
As Gwen walks, she observes the walls and details of the ship.
GWEN
Dude, this design is really cool.
JACOB
I’ve never seen one like that.
The group sits at the table in the main room along with the
entire crew.
AMANDA
Hey!
MARKUS
What is that smell?
(Smell of cigarette)
AMANDA
Probably smell of weed you guys smoked.
REY
Did you smoke weed?
FELICE
No.. No! Of course not, sweethart.
AMANDA
Um... Yeah they smoked.
FELICE
And how do you know Amanda?
Andrew laughs, but the laugh ends embarrasingly.
ANDREW
Sorry...
GWEN
We’re on vacation, what’s the problem?
MADELYN
Did you smoke?
Gwen looks away, embarrassed.
REY
Why didn’t you call me, Jake?

JACOB
Sorry, i forgot.
Lindsey arrives with the food and serves them.
GWEN
Thank you.
Lindsey goes to Felice’s plate and spills some of the tomato
sauce on her clothes.
FELICE
FUCK!
LINDSEY
Oh... My god, I’m so sorry Ms.
Shit...
FELICE
Get the fuck out of here!
ROWAN
Felice! Calm down, okay?
Rey sips her coke silently.

LINDSEY
I better i go...
FELICE
Definitely, get your foot out of here.
Rowan puts his hand on his face, embarrassed.
MADELYN
Um... How about we talk about good things, huh?!
AMANDA
I have a hundred and twenty thousand followers on instagram.
GWEN
Is that the happiest thing you could think of?
AMANDA
It’s the best achievement of my life...
MARKUS
What is Instagram?

GWEN
Oh my god...
MADELYN
Gwen, did you get that role in your school teather? Andrew told
us about!
GWEN
What role?
MADELYN
The one from... That girl... Hansel and Gretel!
GWEN
I lost the role two years ago.
MADELYN
Oh...
Andrew looks at Madelyn, a look of subtle anger.
MADELYN
My god i never get it right. – Madelyn whispers.
Gwen eats some of the food.

MARKUS
What about your mother, Gwen?
GWEN
What?
Gwen asks with her mouth full.
MARKUS
You know, your mother. We don’t have much news about her.
GWEN
Yeah, me too...
FELICE
Do you have any idea if she’s okay?
GWEN
Huh? I thought you guys knew she’s in rehab.
FELICE
Yeah, but you don’t even talk to her?
GWEN
You know very well why i don’t talk to her, Felice.
ANDREW
 Guys, stop please...
Andrew whispers.
MADELYN
We know, but we thought that-
Gwen interrupts Madelyn.
GWEN
Why are you asking me about her? I don’t talk to her, i don’t
know what the fuck she’s doing right now and she’s a bitch and i
hope she rots in fucking hell.
Na awkwars mood hangs over the room, and nothing is heard for a
few seconds.
The weather in the sky starts to get rainy.
Felice notices the sound of rain and looks to the closed window.

FELICE
Lindsey, open the curtains.
LINDSEY
Sure, Ms.
Lindsey opens the window curtains on the wall.
AMANDA
It’s raining! I love those moments where nothing matters, just
that little sound of the drops falling.
ANDREW
Maybe it’s because your ex broke up with you in the rain...
AMANDA
SHUT UP.
ANDREW
(Laughing)
Sorry..
AMANDA
What are you laughing, huh?
ANDREW
Nothing, sorry!
(laughing)
 MARKUS
Have you guys... Always been like this?
AMANDA
Been like what, Markus?
MARKUS
Being passive aggressive with each other.
Andrew drinks some Soda.
AMANDA
I don’t know, why don’t you ask the time i found you and Rowan
making out in the bedroom?
Andrew spit out all the soda in surprise.
MADELYN
WHAT?!
MARKUS
What the fuck are you talking about, Amanda?
AMANDA
God...
ROWAN
Look, i-
Madelyn interrupts Rowan.
MADELYN
Shut up, Rowan. That’s truth?
MARKUS
No!
MADELYN
Amanda...
AMANDA
I’m done.
Amanda gets up from her chair.
Rey puts her hand on the hand, embarrassed.
MADELYN
Are you going to abandon us without explaining the bomb you just
said?!
 AMANDA
Um... Yes?
Amanda leaves the scene through the wall corridor.
Gwen, Jacob and Andrew look at each other, saying without
saying, that they also left there.
Them both left the scene.
The camera follows them leaving as the others start fighting.
MADELYN
Mark, if you don’t explain yourself i swear i’ll throw you off
that ship like those FUCKING pirates!
INT. GWEN’S BEDROOM – Perfectly tidy place, with Gwen’s bags
properly stored. (IMPORTANT) There’s a window in the middle of
the bedroom wall.
Gwen enters the room and goes to her bathroom. She looks in the
mirror and wipes her face.
Someone knocks on the door. It’s Rey.
REY
Hey, can i enter?
Gwen looks at her in the mirror’s reflection.
GWEN
Hmf.
REY
Thank you for coming.
GWEN
I didn’t come for you.
REY
Yeah, i know... i thought we could sort this out now.
GWEN
Rey, there’s nothing to sort, okay? I don’t wank to talk to you.
In fact, nobody wants to.
Gwen walks to the door.

REY
God, Gwen, i already apologized!
Gwen turns to her.
 GWEN
Apologies are worthless, Rey. My mom still hasn’t recovered, and
you threw it in my face, you’re a fucking asshole!
Rey is speechless and just stares.
GWEN
Just... Leave me alone.
Gwen leaves the scene.
CUTS TO:
Andrew’s bedroom
INT. ANDREW’S BEDROOM – Perfectly tidy place, with Andrew’s bags
properly stored. (IMPORTANT) There’s a window in the middle of
the bedroom wall.
A song (‘’the cramps’’ style) starts to play from Andrew’s
bedroom.
Andrew is with JACOB in bed.
Andrew is watching the rain through the window.
ANDREW
How long do you think the rain will last?
JACOB
I don’t know, why?
Andrew gets up and just sits on the bed, he looks at JACOB.
ANDREW
Shall we go outside?
JACOB
But it’s raining.
ANDREW
Yeah?
JACOB
Hm, okay.
ANDREW
Yes! Thank you.
Them both get up from the bed and leave the room and go into the
hallway, finding GWEN.
INT. HALLWAY
ANDREW
 We’re going outside,do you want to come?
GWEN
To get wet all over?
ANDREW
Yes.
GWEN
(Gwen laughs)
What’s the point of that?!
JACOB
Why must it be really cool to get rained oon a cruise in the
middle of the sea?
Amanda appears behind them.
AMANDA
Oh my god... You’re going to get rain like you do in my house?!
ANDREW
Yes, Mandy.
AMANDA
Fuck yeah, let’s go!
CUTS TO:
EXT. SHIP’S EXTERIOR
The characters start having fun in the middle of the rain. Gwen
sits and just watches the group. Andrew and Amanda open their
mouths to the sky, drinking the rain. Jacob sits next to Gwen.
JACOB
Hey.
GWEN
Hey!
JACOB
You and Andy are... Good friends, right?
GWEN
Sometimes, yeah...
JACOB
How do i... You know, actually get to him?
GWEN
 (Gwen Laughs)
Are you serious?!
JACOB
Yes, i am!
GWEN
Look, what i can tell you is that he’s into you too. Just...
Endgame him, you know?
JACOB
Endgame?
GWEN
Kiss him.
JACOB
We already kissed once... But it was kind of weird, we wanted to
but... it was at the wrong time in the wrong place.
GWEN
I understand. I’ll tell you something but it’s just between us,
okay?
JACOB
Okay, sure...
(Jacob smiles)
GWEN
I had a case with Rey.
JACOB
WHAT?!
(Jacob screams)
GWEN
Yeah, i know. Weird as fuck, but i do liked her.
JACOB
Tell me everything.
GWEN
Everytime we tried to get together, her mother got in the way...
It was really annoying... Until that shit happened that you
already know.
JACOB
What?
 GWEN
You don’t know?
JACOB
Gwen i joined the group much later...
GWEN
We had a big fight and she told everyone that my mother had
overdosed, detail, i had just told her.
JACOB
Jesus, what a bitch!

GWEN
Yeah, fucking totally. The worst thing is that now all our
parents treat me like a fucking child. But through it all, i
learned a lesson. Always take the first step, otherwise you’re
not going anywhere.
EXT AND INT. SHIP’S EXTERIOR AND REY’S ROOM. SAME DESIGN AS
GWEN’S ROOM.
The camera shows Rey watching them through na upstairs window on
the ship, her face is sad and angry at the same time. She
decides to go down there.
BACK TO: SHIP’S EXTERIOR.
AMANDA
What are you gossiping about, huh?! It’s about me?!
Amanda and Andreew sit with Gwen and Jacob.
GWEN
(Gwen laughs)
Do you really think we were gossiping about... you?
AMANDA
If all the gossip pages don’t take my name out of their mouths
why don’t you?
ANDREW
But what were you really talking about?
(Andrew sits while he talks)
GWEN
Nothing serious...
ANDREW
 It’s something bad about us?
GWEN
What? No!
Jacob laughs.
The scene cut to Rey entering the ship’s exterior.
REY
Hey guys!
(She says while walking)
AMANDA
Fuck. It’s Her.
(Amanda whispers to Gwen)
GWEN
I knew she would come...
(Gwen whispers to Amanda)
JACOB
H-Hey.
(Jacob answers her embarrassingly)
REY
What happened?! Let’s do something! Break this mood.
AMANDA
Freaked out? We have nothing to do with you.
REY
Okay, look, i know i fucked up, okay? But at least try to
forgive me!
AMANDA
Forgive you? Are you fucking crazy? We tried to ‘’forgive’’ you
three hundred times!
REY
I know, i-
AMANDA
Go back to your mommy and don’t bother us.
ANDREW
Mandy, come down.
 REY
Did you forget that she’s paying for you to be here?
AMANDA
I don’t care.
REY
I really want to see what she gonna do when she finds out what
you said...
AMANDA
You wouldn’t do that...
REY
Oh i would, i fucking would.
GWEN
Rey, don’t fuck up this again, please.
REY
I just heard Amanda’s insults and you’re on her side?!
GWEN
Um, yes? I’m on the side where you aren’t.
(Jacob laughs)
REY
You don’t want me here? Fine, fuck everyone.
Rey walks out of the ship’s exterior.
Amanda points the middle finger at Rey.
AMANDA
God, that bitch's ego is bigger than mine.
ANDREW
Nobody’s ego is bigger than yours.
Amanda smiles.
GWEN
Okay, let’s not waste our vacation on this neurotic girl, let’s
have a goot time, you know, together.
JACOB
You right.
Gwen gets drinks for everyone in the room and offers a toast.
 GWEN
Let’s have the best fucking night of out lives.
AMANDA
Fuck yeah!
All characters toast.
The camera moves towards the sky and gets away from them giving
a wide view of the ship.
CUTS TO: MARKUS AND MADELYN’S ROOM.
Extremely tidy place and bigger than teenagers’ rooms, typical
chic suite. The room has a back door across the hall and large
windows in the walls.
MADELYN
Okay, explain this story to me. What the fuck happened?
MARKUS
Nothing happened! I swear!
MADELYN
You’re fucking lying.
MARKUS
I’m not- Just.. I’m not.
Madelyn looks suspiciously at Markus and does not say anything
for a few seconds.
MADELYN
Are you gay, Mark?
MARKUS
I’M NOT GAY, MADELYN, FUCK!
MADELYN
IT’S OK TO BE, OKAY? IT’S NORMAL TO STAY IN THE CLOSET,
SEXUALITY IS JUST A SPECTRUM OF FEELINGS THAT INTERSEE INTO
EMOTIONS!
MARKUS
WHAT THE FUCK ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT?!
MADELYN
WHY WERE YOU FUCKING ROWAN?
MARKUS
I WASN’T!
 MADELYN
AMANDA SAID!
MARKUS
WHY ARE YOU GOING TO BELIEVE A GIRL ADDICTED TO COCAINE AND
CHEAP BEAR AND NOT IN YOUR HUSBAND OF YEARS?
MADELYN
YOU JUST DESCRIBED YOURSELF!
MARKUS
FUCK!
A few more seconds of silence.
Madelyn looks directly at Markus, serious. No blinking;
MADELYN
Amanda never hid our secrets. Remember the time she threw it in
Ann’s face that she asked Andrew to put the beer in her room
before Gwen arrived?
MARKUS
We still don’t know how she discovered this.
MADELYN
Exactly.
Markus looks at Madelyn.
MADELYN
Our marriage is shit and Isn’t from today. So at least tell me
te truth one last time.
A few more seconds of silence.
MARKUS
We were drunk. Just happened.
A few more seconds of silence.
MARKUS
I’m sorry-
Madelyn interrupts Markus.
MADELYN
When we get back home, it’s over.
Madelyn leaves the scene.
MARKUS
 Fuck.
He whispers.
Madelyn walks through the halls while lighting a cigarrete.
CUTS TO: ROWAN AND FELICE’S BEDROOM.
Rowan is in bes looking at the ceiling.
Markus enters the room.
MARKUS
Hey.
ROWAN
Hey…
MARKUS
Madelyn broke up with me.
ROWAN
Wait, what? When?
MARKUS
Now. Amanda ended the fucking marriage.
ROWAN
Man, you know things were bad before that.
Markus sits on the bed next to Rowan.
MARKUS
How did she find out? Like, she wasn’t even there.
ROWAN
Amanda knows everything. It was probably in the other room.
MARKUS
Amanda is such a cunt. Like, what the fuck, why she said that?!
In front of everyone?!

ROWAN
She’s a spoiled and arrogant teen, what did you want it?
MARKUS
It’s unbelievable. Soon she will get what she deserves.
ROWAN
What do you mean?
 MARKUS
If she continues like this, eventually she will suffer the
consequences.
ROWAN
You’re right…
A seconds pause happens.
MARKUS
I’m so tired… Of everything.
ROWAN
I can take care of it…
Markus and Rowan look at each other, with sexual intent.
The two embrace in bed and kiss for a few seconds, the camera
slowly moves out of their view to the door, showing JANESSE
peeking in, shocked and laughing internally.
She leaves silently and walks the halls.
CUTS TO: THE SHIP’S BAR.
Lindey is lying on the beanbag, taking some pictures.
Janesse enters the room.
JANESSE
You won’t believe what I just saw.
Lindsey pulls her attention away from her cellphone and looks at
Janesse sitting on another beanbag.
LINDSEY
What?!
JANESSE
Markus and Rowan making out!
LINDSEY
No way! Where did you find them?!
JANESSE
In Rowan’s bed. Man, I didn’t expect that one.
LINDSEY
Actually, I do. When everyone was having lunch the brunett girl
said out of nowhere that she saw them making out once.
JANESSE
A CASE? God, that’s better than fucking Big brother.
 LINDSEY
Yeah! The only thing that makes me hate this job is the fact
that I have to do everything for these fucking rich people and
put up with that bitch Felice.
JANESSE
She’s such a cunt, god! I hate her so badly.
LINDSEY
Me too…
JANESSE
But it still has some nice ones. The one with the eyeliner, you
know?
LINDSEY
Gwen?
JANESSE
Yes! Gwen. She looks nice.
LINDSEY
I don’t know, for me everyone deserves to go to hell.
JANESSE
(She laughs)
You’re iconic.
LINDSEY
(She laughs)
JANESSE
What time is it?
Lindsey look in her cellphone.
LINDSEY
It’s 16:32 PM.

JANESSE
It’s still early. God, I can’t take it anymore…
LINDSEY
Me too. I fucking hate this job.
JANESSE
Well, I’ll be at the bar.
 LINDSEY
All right, I’m going to wander around.
JANESSE
Bye, babe.
LINDSEY
Bye!
Janesse goes to the bench and Lindsey leaves.
CUTS TO: PLAYROOM.
Well it place with a TV, sofas in several corners, Kitchen
(small), and a pool table where the characters are.
AMANDA
Okay, I’m bored.
ANDREW
Did your cellphone run out?
AMANDA
Yeah, but that’s not why.
ANDREW
So, Why?
AMANDA
I want to do something!
JACOB
Let’s… Play a game?
GWEN
What game?
The characters are silent for a few seconds, thinking about some
game to play.

AMANDA
Oh, Truth or dare!
JACOB
I was going to say this one.
AMANDA
Yeah but you didn’t.
 ANDREW
Whad did I do to deserve this Jesus…
GWEN
C’mon Andrew, it’s going to be cool!
ANDREW
The only problem with this game is that someone always leaves
crying.
AMANDA
That’s the fucking fun, Andy! It’s a competition.
ANDREW
Okay, I’m it.
GWEN
Nice!
The characters form a circle in the middle of the room.
GWEN
Okay, who starts?
AMANDA
My idea, I start.
JACOB
Sure.
Amanda drinks the entire bottle of beer and puts It in the
middle of the circle.
ANDREW
Don’t overdo it, Mandy.
AMANDA
Go fuck yourself.
(Andrew laughs)
Amanda spins the bottle.
The bottle spins to JACOB.
AMANDA
Jacob… Truth or dare?
JACOB
Truth.
 AMANDA
Managed to escape this one, fucker.
JACOB
(Jacob laughs)
Yeah.
AMANDA
Do you ever… Kissed someone?
Andrew and Gwen look at each other.
JACOB
Um… yeah.
AMANDA
Boy or girl?
JACOB
You only have one question, Amanda.
Amanda rolls her eyes.
JACOB
(Jacob laughs)
AMANDA
Your turn.

Jacob spins the bottle.

The bottle spins to GWEN.
Gwen smiles.
JACOB
Truth or dare?
GWEN
Um… Truth.
JACOB
Um… What did you and Rey do, exactly?
GWEN
(Gwen laughs)
What do you mean?
JACOB
 Dou you ever had sex with… Rey?
(Jacob and Andrew laugh)
GWEN
THAT’S SO EMBARASSING!
(Gwen laugh)
Yeah, I gues… was not like… real sex. Just, you know…
JACOB
I got it.
Gwen spins the bottle.
The bottle spins to AMANDA.
AMANDA
YES! ME!
GWEN
Mandy, truth or da-
AMANDA
Dare.
GWEN
Okay… I dare you… Kiss Andrew.
ANDREW
WHAT?!
GWEN
(Gwen laughs)
ANDREW
I’M NOT GOING TO KISS AMANDA!
ANDREW
That weird as hell, no!

AMANDA
Come here Andrew!
Amanda kiss Andrew’s forehead.
(Jacob and Gwen laugh)
ANDREW
Never do this to me again.
 AMANDA
(giggling)
Okay.
Let’s back to the game.
AMANDA spins the bottle.
The bottle spins to JACOB.
AMANDA
Again?! Okay. Truth or dare?
JACOB
Fuck it, dare.
AMANDA
I dare you kiss Andy.
JACOB
You’re very predictable, Amanda.
AMANDA
Just kiss him.
JACOB
Sure.
Jacob craws sensually over to Andrew and kiss him for several
seconds.
GWEN
FUCK, Jake you’re fire!
AMANDA
Yes! That’s the fucking spirit!
Jacob finishes kissing Andrew and returns to his position,
wiping excess spittle from his mouth.
ANDREW
Wow.
Gwen drinks her beer.
ANDREW
Okay, i’m next.

Andrew spins the bottle.

The bottle spins to GWEN.
GWEN
Truth.
ANDREW
Again?
GWEN
Yeah, I’m not dumb.
ANDREW
Okay, huh… How many girlfriends do you had?
GWEN
I don’t know… 3?
ANDREW
What a catcher!
GWEN
(Gwen laughs)
That isn’t a lot.
JACOB
Yes it is? Like, I had one.
GWEN
Had?
JACOB
Shut up.
GWEN
(Gwen laugh)
AMANDA
I had 4 boyfriends, isn’t that much…
ANDREW
Yeah, cause you’re straight. For us is way more difficult.
AMANDA
I know.
GWEN
Lindsey enters the room and stands in the doorway.
LINDSEY
 Hey.
AMANDA
Hey?..
JACOB
What’s up.
Lindsey approaches and sits on the wheel.
LINDSEY
May I stay here?
AMANDA
Only if you don’t tell Felice what we say here.
LINDSEY
Relax, I don’t like her too. Like, not even a little.
GWEN
Does anyone really like her?
ANDREW
Why are we talking about Felice?
GWEN
(giggling)
Yeah.
LINDSEY
So… What are you guys playing?
AMANDA
Truth or Dare.
JACOB
Do you wanna play?
LINDSEY
Sure.
LINDSEY spins the bottle.
The bottle spins to GWEN.
LINDSEY
Gwen… Truth or dare?!
GWEN
Truth!
 AMANDA
Again? You suck!
GWEN
Shut up.
LINDSEY
Um… What’s the worst thing you’ve ever done?
GWEN
I don’t know… Maybe… Lying to get away with it several times.
LINDSEY
Like what?
GWEN
(Giggling)
I don’t know if it’s good for me to say.
AMANDA
Oh, c’mon! You just said that lying about these things was bad,
now, redeem yourself.
ANDREW
Now I’m curious too.

GWEN
Fuck, okay. Once I lied to my best friend that I hadn’t seen her
boyfriend cheat on her, because I didn’t want that weight on me.
I didn’t lie for her and then she found out by him, but he said
that I knew too, so we’re not friends anymore.
AMANDA
Wow. I’m… Sorry? I guess?
ANDREW
You don’t know how to use the expression I’m sorry?
AMANDA
Do you have a problem with me?
ANDREW
(Andrew laughs)
LINDSEY
I’m sorry too.
 GWEN
It’s Okay.
AMANDA
Okay, who’s next?
GWEN
Me.
GWEN spins the bottle.
The bottle spins to ANDREW.
ANDREW
Truth.
Gwen was about to ask when ANDREW interrupted her.
ANDREW
Gwen, if you ask me anything sexual again, we’ll kick you out of
the game
GWEN
(giggling)
Okay, sure! Friday the 13th…
JACOB GWEN
Remake. Original.
Gwen looks at him, chllenging him with her gaze.
GWEN
The original Wrong Turn or the requel…
JACOB GWEN
Both! Both!
Gwen and Andrew smiles.
GWEN
The new texas chainsaw massacre is…
JACOB GWEN
Awful. Stupid.
GWEN
That’s why I love you.
Them do a ‘’high five’’.
LINDSEY
 (She whispers to Amanda)
They’re always like this?
AMANDA
All the time.
JACOB
That’s cute.
ANDREW
(Giggling)
Shut up.
ANDREW
I’m next.
ANDREW spins the bottle.
The bottle spins to LINDSEY
ANDREW
Truth or dare?
LINDSEY
You decide it.
ANDREW
I’m out of creativity, so… Truth.
LINDSEY
Sure.
ANDREW
What’s the worst thing YOU’VE ever done?
LINDSEY
Using my question?!
ANDREW
There’s no rules here!
LINDSEY
Okay… I guess… When I was a teen and very stupid I always wanted
to be seen, so I did a lot of bad things to be know… It’s very
weird but it left a mark on me and today i just… hate being the
center of attention.
AMANDA
I thought it was going to be worse..
 ANDREW
Shut up.
LINDSEY
(giggling) Who’s next?
GWEN
Not me, I’m going to rest a little bit.
JACOB
Yeah, me too.
ANDREW
I’m going with you, thought.
LINDSEY
I’m coming back to work, then.
AMANDA
Are you guys going to leave me here, Okay, fuck it. Bye.
GWEN
(Gwen laugh)
Bye guys.
ANDREW AND JACOB
Bye!
Them leave the playroom and walks through different halls.
BLACK SCREEN – 10 HOURS LATER (ON WHITE)
CUTS TO: THE SECOND FLOOR OF THE HALL
The camera follows Lindsey fixing her hair and walking through
the halls, she goes down the stairs until she goes to the first
floor and after a long time she hears REY screams outside the
ship. Everyone hears the scream. (All dark)
BATHROOM: Madelyn (while crying) hears the scream and stops
crying.
MARKUS’S BEDROOM: Markus wakes up and hears the scream.
AMANDA: As she snorts cocaine on her arm, she hears the scream.
AMANDA
What the fuck?
Everyone forgets and stops caring about the scream, including
Lindsey.
Now, The camera follows Amanda Walking to her room. After a few
minutes, she goes up the stair, until GWEN screams higher. She
and goes see what it is.
BATHROOM: Madelyn (while crying) hears the scream and stops
crying again, she leaves the bathroom and goes see what it is.
MARKUS’S BEDROOM: Markus hears the scream and goes see what it
is.
HALLS: Lindsey hears the screams again and goes see what it is.
Lindsey and Amanda meet.
LINDSEY
What happened?!
AMANDA
I don’t know, I just heard a scream.
AMANDA
Where did it come from?
LINDSEY
How I was supposed to know?!
AMANDA
Jesus, Lindsey.
They walk a little further throught the halls and see that the
exterior door of the ship is open.
LINDSEY
Come outside…
CUTS TO: THE SHIP’S EXTERIOR. 2 AM
Lights on the ship’s exterior are on and on the door to enter as
well.
(RAINING)
Gwen is standing looking at the dead bodies of ROWAN and REY on
the floor. Rowan was killed with his head cut off in the middle
of the place near the pool, Rey was stabbed to death in the neck
a little to Rowan’s side, further forward.
Amanda approaches Gwen and sees the bodies, Lindsey sees from
afar and don’t approach.
AMANDA
OH MY FUCKING GOD! WHAT… WHAT HAPPENED? GWEN?! WHAT!
Gwen turns and sees them two.
 GWEN
I… Don’t know… I just found…
AMANDA
GWEN, THEY’RE FUCKING DEAD!
LINDSEY
Oh god…
Lindsey runs into the ship and leaves the scene.
Madelyn, Jacob, Markus and Andrew enters the scene.
MADELYN
What was that scream guys I just woke up-
Madelyn, Markus, Jacob and Andrew see the bodies.
MADELYN
What the…
Amanda starts to cry.
MARKUS
FUCK! WHAT HAPPENED? GWEN, AMANDA?!
AMANDA
WE JUST FOUND OUT!
ANDREW
FOUND OUT?! TWO PEOPLE DIED HERE WHAT THE FUCK?!
AMANDA
I WENT TO SEE WHAT IT WAS AND FOUND GWEN STAND IN THE RAIN!
GWEN
I WAS SHOCKED! I DON’T KNOW WHAT IS HAPPENING I HEARD A SCREAM
AND I WENT TO SEE WHAT IT WAS TOO AND I FOUND THIS!
MARKUS
We need to call the police, literally NOW!
Markus runs inside and the power goes out, along with the
signal.
MARKUS
Fuck.
MADELYN
WHAT?!
Andrew picks up his cellphone and sees that has no signal.
ANDREW
No signal…
GWEN
FUCK!
AMANDA
WHY IS IT WITHOUT SIGNAL?!
MADELYN
I DON’T KNOW!
Felice appears.
FELICE
What is that screams?! God, I wanna sleep!
Felice sees the dead body of her daughter and husband.
FELICE
What?
FELICE
REY?! ROWAN? NO…
She runs to her husband’s body
FELICE
WHAT DID YOU DO?! WHAT DID YOU FUCKING DO?!
The characters just stare at her, crying and scared.
She goes to Rey’s body.
FELICE
WHY, GOD?
(She stare the characters)
WHAT THE FUCK DID YOU DO TO HER?! YOU ALL ARE GOING TO HELL! TO
FUCKING HELL!
FELICE
You will regret what you did… ALL OF YOU!
Felice walks to the ship’s exterior entryway.
MADELYN
Felice, please-
Felice slaps Madelyn making her fall.
 AMANDA
FUCK!
Felice leaves the scene.

JACOB
WHAT IS GOING ON?!
AMANDA
WE’RE FUCKING ALONE…
MADELYN
WE NEED TO TELL THE OTHERS!
AMANDA
TELL THE OTHERS?! WHAT THE FUCK ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT? WE DON’T
KNOW WHO DID THIS.
GWEN
Amanda’s right. The only ones present here on the ship are us
and the employees.
ANDREW
What’s your point?
GWEN
That means it was one of us…
The camera zooms in on the characters looking at each other.
MARKUS
No. It couldn’t have been one of us. Why would anyone do that?
It must be a mistake.
AMANDA
Mistake? Rey had her throat cut and Rowan is without a fucking
head. WE’RE THE ONLY ONES ON THE SHIP.
Madelyn looks down at Rowan’s body, disgusted.
MARKUS
Okay, it could have been one of the employees, and where’s the
captain?!
AMANDA
WE DON’T HAVE TIME FOR THIS!
GWEN
 SHUT UP AND LET US THINK!
AMANDA
Gwen, NEVER tell me to shut up.
GWEN
Fuck off.
JACOB
Can you both stop fighting, please?
GWEN
I’m not fighting, she’s the one screaming and not letting us
concentrate!
AMANDA
Well, I’m desperate and you were the first one to see the
bodies.
GWEN
What are you insinuating?!
AMANDA
Nothing, it’s just weird.

GWEN
Look, Amanda, I don’t want to fight with you.
AMANDA
I don’t want it too!
GWEN
SO STOP FUCKING SAYING THOSE THINGS!
AMANDA
STOP FUCKING SCREAMING!
A few more seconds of silence.
JACOB
WHY WE’RE TALKING ABOUT THIS?! IT’S LITERALLY THE WORST HOUR!
MARKUS
Jacob’s right, stop you both, let me think.
AMANDA
God.
 MADELYN
Okay. I’m done. Andrew and Markus, let’s go to our room.
ANDREW
What?!
MADELYN
Let’s go to our room, now!
ANDREW
WHY?!
MADELYN
WE’RE GOING TO LOCK UP AND BE ALONE UNTIL FUCKING DAWN!
ANDREW
BUT-
MADELYN
NO BUT! NOW.
Madelyn pulls Andrew and Markus by the arm and they leave the
scene.
A few seconds of silence.
AMANDA
Great, now there’s only us. We’re na easy target.
GWEN
We have to turn the power back on. There’s no emergency boat
here, is there?
AMANDA
Of course it does. But there’s not enough room for everyone to
get in.
JACOB
Let’s turn the power back on first then.

GWEN
Amanda, where’s the gun?
AMANDA
At the back of the ship...
GWEN
Let’s take the gun before someone does first.
 AMANDA
Wait, how do you know how to use guns?
GWEN
My dad... He taght me.
AMANDA
How to use... guns?
GWEN
...Yeah?
JACOB
Can we just go, please?
GWEN
Shit we don’t know where the generator is...
JACOB
You take the gun, i’ll look for it, okay?
AMANDA
Fine...
GWEN
Be careful.
JACOB
You too...
The trio splits up, heads back inside the ship, and heads off in
different directions.
CUTS TO:
INT. SHIP’S BAR – RAINING A LOT AND THUNDERING
JENISSE is fiddling with the knives in the bar (Just like
‘’Casey Backer’’ in Scream), then she notices the ship’s lights
slowly going out, until the bar slowly goes out too.

JENISSE
Fuck. Ms Felice? What happened?!
Jenisse grabs a flashlight from under the counter and starts
walking around the bar.
JENISSE
(Screams)
 Ms Felice?! Hello?!
Felice is startled when she hears a lam falling from the shelf
outside the bar.
JENISSE
Shit. Hey?!
She starts walking towards the exit door of the bar.
JENISSE
Lindsey, if this is a fucking joke i’ll break your nose!
A deep voice starts playing over the speaker (wireless)
MAN
This isn’t Lindsey, Jenisse.
Felice starts scouroing the bar looking for Lindsey.
JENISSE
(giggling)
Huh, ok. Really scary but the party is over. And how did the
captain let you get the speaker? Don’t tell me you’re fucking
him!
MAN
Let’s say the captain is no longer here.
JENISSE
Okay, so you behead him to scare me? Do you think I’ve never
watched Scream, Lindsey?!
MAN
(giggling)
He’s not going to be the only person i’m going to behead,
Jenisse. Things will get worse with you.
JENISSE
Worse? Sure. Now I’m the hot dumb girl who dies at the start? At
least try to be creative.
MAN
So you understand the clichés? Interesting.
JENISSE
Lindsey, you know i’m a film student. . I need to know this
shit.
MAN
 If you’re a film student, why are you working for a bunch of
idiots?
JENISSE
It’s temporary, you know that.
MAN
You should be ashame, Jenisse, of this shitty boring life, why
haven’t you grabbed a knife and slit your FUCKING throat?!
Jenisse walks to the bar’s exit door.
JENISSE
Fuck you, Lindsey, when i find you i’ll hit your face.
KILLER
I ALREADY SAID I’M NOT LINDSEY, YOU FUCKIN’ BITCH!
As he speaks, Jenisse opens the bar exit door and is faced with
a person wearing a dark red outfit and na emotionless theather
mask, with a huge spear slung from his back. He is holding a big
red swithblade.
JENISSE screams.
The killer stabs her in the stomach (not fatal) with the
switchblade, then, quickly, Jenisse closes the door in his face
and locks it. She walks away from the door. Jenisse starts
bleeding out,then she squeezes the wound, trying to stop the
bleeding.
JENISSE
Fuck... Fuck...
Jenisse, without saying a word, starts looking around looking
for something to defend herself with, she goes to the workbench
and takes one of the knives, while limping a little.
She takes out her cellphone and tries to call 911, but there is
no signal.
The killer then starts kicking the door several times, trying to
get in.
Jenisse screams.
Jenisse goes to the back hall of the bar, she goes to the door
to the stairway hall, but someone has locked it.
The killer keeps kicking the door, getting harder and harder.
JENISSE
No, no, no, no....
Jenisse finds a way to escape through the pipe in the hall, she,
after a loth of effort, removes the door and enters, crawling.
But, the killer manages to break down the door, and goes to the
back hall of the bar.
He finds her trying to flee, and stabs Jenisse in the leg, then
grabs her by the foot and pulls her out of the pipe.
JENISSE screams.
Jenisse drops to the floor back in the hall and stands up, with
the killer in front of her.
Jenisse starts to wals back in fear.

JENISSE
PLEASE, DON’T TOUCH ME!
The killer, with one hand, picks up the voice changer.
KILLER
Your time is up, Jenisse.
He pockets the voice changer and picks up the spear.
JENISSE screams ‘’NO!’’.
BAM!
The killer IMPALES the spear in the middle of her belly and
begins to climb her body up the spear, making her body slide
down to the tip of the spear. Janesse begins to bleed profusely
and liters of blood come out of her belly and mouth.
The killer then releases her body from the spear, throwing her
to the ground, dead.
The camera then shows the killer looking down at the body,
looking ‘’proud’’ but not saying anything, as Jenisse’s body
bleeds more and more.
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