SỬA BÀI WRITING FCE

TÙNG
There are a lot of benefits in the mordern (sai chính tả) world, especially (sai chính
tả) in the big city, the places to entertain will be found and enjoyed. This essay will
prove and provide for you a number of sites to join (thiếu dấu chấm câu)
Firstly, our eyes could be satisfied (sai chính tả) because of some exhibitions there.
We can be able to appreciate the cinematography here which draw inspiration and
easily access a world of knowledge. It really conciliate (sai ngữ pháp) for your
stressful in daily working or studing. (sai chính tả)
Secondly, if you are a person who keen on ourdoor (sai chính tả) activities and doing
some charity business, taking part in a charity organization which always published in
Periodical. You can do it because of your kind (sai từ loại) or maybe it is have (sai
ngữ pháp) high impact on the public
Finally, it is said that you will boost your mood and enhance work and study
productivity if you go to some forum or stand-up comedy show. There is the place
which help you catch up the latest trend and current affairs and convey humanity
messages through a great deal of wise jokes. In VietNam (sai dấu câu) we can
consider about Saigonteu group.
There are a lot of places to entertain so you should not skip them because it will
maintain a well-balanced life and cheer yourself up when you feel blue (thiếu dấu
câu)

HẢI
Transportation in big cities has been a problem for years. In this essay, I'll mention
about 3 difficulty (sai ngữ pháp): residents' consciousness, road system and roads
quality. I'll take example and all data in TPHCM. (cái gì đây?)
The first side of all problems is residents' consciousness. They don’t like to wait in a
traffic jam or ride after someone. In that case, somebody choose to hustle so that may
cause an accident, or a serious accident. Moreover, some millennials ride on
motorbikes and go over the speed limit is also a reason that makes transportation in
big cities more dangerous.
Secondly, the raise of population in big cities makes the number of transportation
raise. So that the width of the streets won’t be enough for now and in the future. For
example, at the cross of Truong Chinh street and Cong Hoa street there'll have terrible
traffic in the rush hours in weekdays. The problems haven’t been solved for while
there are so much complaints about lt.
The last thing is the roads quality. Some of the streets have some cracks on it that
increase the accident happen chance. More than that the streets surface's material is
not so good to last for more than 10 years.
All of my opinion are not all the sides of the problem but it's the most 3 important
ones. The government have to (sai ngữ pháp) have some solutions to solve this soon
before it's worse.