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Many believe that pain is beneficial for our body, others argue that

it’s not necessary and on the other hand, it’s harmful. Discuss both
views and give your own idea.

PLAN
Pros
- Make life meaningful. Why? Chllenges it gives us. Example or
result.
- Make immune system of our body more powerful. Result? Less
prone to diseases. Example.
Cons
- Psychological: cause trauma and anxiety. Result: suicide
commitment. Example:

Introduction.
The definition of pain has been under strong alteration in the history of
mankind. In 21st century, many illnesses have found treatments, thanks
to cutting-edge technologies, and yet many still believe that pain could
be beneficial for our body. On ther other hand, there are ones who think
the contrary. In this essay I will examine both views, and I will provide
my own opinion in the conclusion.

Body 1
Perhaps the first reason many are of the view that pain could be
beneficial for our body is that ……. . ….. . for example … . As for the
second reason, …. . …. . example.
Body 2
on the contrary, there are those who are in favor of this concept that pain
is rather a detrimental …, particularly on the brain. Perhaps the main
reason is that ….

Conclusion
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In this topic we will argue about how pain influences people ordinary
lives! .it seems there are two different points of view about suffering.
Some people believe pain have benefits and others find it detrimental. In
this essay we will review both sides of the argument to discover which
one makes more sense!

But how could be pain useful? the first answer refers to the meaning of
life, physiological studies have shown that many people who have been
involved in major … painful moments such as cancer experiences, heart
attacks, etc. finds aching challenging! and by soothing in treatment
progress they describe themselves as a hero of their own life. The second
answer to the question refers to biology: as some scientists reason that
our body safety system can become more powerful by experiencing
illness which causes pain. So pain could be useful as it teaches our body
how to fight too.

But how could be pain harmful? One again we have two main reasons,
the first answer refers to our mental health! some people experienced
trauma and anxiety during the time they had racked with pain. There are
colossal number of people who have committed suicide even after their
pain had been subsided. And finally we should be aware that relieving
pain is a time-consuming matter. sometimes a minute and sometimes
decades! Therefore, pain could damage our lives by taking our time.

In conclusion, Pain could be beneficial because …. , while it also can


have its detrimental effects. In my view, the benefits of pain can
overweigh its drawbacks. If people learn to understand pain, they can
find a better way to treat their illnesses.
pain could be useful for our life in spite of I never advise anybody to
inflict pain to others or him/herself.

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