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Nowadays parents put too much pressure on their children to succeed

What is the reason for doing this?


Is this a negative or positive development?

In early modern era the idea of “success” is widely accepted as the


main goal of life. Therefore, pushing children in many sides to get
better results in is now becoming a highly controversial trend. I agree
this has bad effects on … . In this essay, I will explain the reasons and
give my ow n opinion whether it is a regressive or progressive way of
living.
As time goes on we see life getting more and more competitive, and
that’s the reason kids feel more and more rushed and tired. The whole
idea of modern capitalist word is based on the rivalry. Most of people
should gain many abilities to survive, and because of AI industry and
new scientific progress most of jobs are taken by machines...so human
being should push up more to live a normal life, and that’s the stress
which parents are forcing to their children.
But what about the kids? Although there seems to be a variety of good
points in forcing children to …., the pressure has been proved to have
regressive effects. Has anybody asked their opinion about that much of
pressure? Based on an article has been published in Azad University of
Tehran most of the children felt anxious and unsatisfied because of the
tension in their life. How to wear uniforms, when to wake up, how
much homework to do etc. they received bad marks in their lesson, and
some of them had to visit a psychologist for a therapy.
In conclusion, I would admit that although pushing children as a
preparation for life competitions seems necessary, it has a bad effect
on their mental health.
Plan
What is the reason?
Your opinion in the conclusion

REASON
1- Capitalist world – support: makes life like a rivalry.

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