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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard

enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?
In some nations, one of the most vital issues in contemporary society is young people ought to
make their best endeavours in order to reach goals. This essay will explore the pros and cons of
this phenomenon before providing a logical conclusion.

On the other hand, there are also handicaps involved in this trend. Worryingly, the most serious
threat is that when children cannot receive the desirable outcome despite backbreaking effort,
they might lose their enthusiasm and end up suffering from exhaustion. This leads to they have
tendency to fall into depression and self-blaming. Another negative aspect is children can be
under pressure; in other words, being repeatedly told by grown-ups that hard work can attain
success could lead to overload themselves. But at the same time, life is becoming ever more
stressful, bringing on many suicides each year.

On the one hand, it is undeniable that the merits of hard work are abundant. The first and perhaps
the most significant benefit is that youngsters are able to gain problem-solving experience as
well as confidence to achieve their dreams; indeed, unless people put effort into their work, they
can never accumulate the appropriate knowledge owing to some barriers. Another upside point
would be the sense of competition could be encouraged. With the efforts that have been achieved
currently, children can go through all the trauma with an everlasting belief in the brighter future.
Such strenuous effort usually guarantees a greater chance of success. As a result, if children
invariably study thoroughly to get good grades among their peers, they will strongly believe in a
power of hard work and devotion.

In summation, it seems to me that youngsters can achieve their objectives with hard effort may
boost their motivation. Nonetheless, it also has some notable demerits of mental health.

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