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Review
❖Understand the revision
process and its importance in
academic writing.
❖Learn strategies for revision
Objectives including appropriate
questions to ask.
❖Understand the peer-review
task for the SRP.
Is necessary
The
revision Not the same as editing.
process
An integral and critical
aspect part of any good
writing process.
The revision of your scientific
research paper should be a
well-structured exercise.
Revising
the SRP
All members of the team
should participate.
Decide on the
strategies that your
How will team will use.
your team
proceed?
See the following
slide for some
suggestions:
Do individual “read alouds” of your team’s paper.
This is a very effective strategy .
specific
strategies Check how you integrated information from
sources.
• Content
• Analysis
• Organization
• Sentence structure
• Evidence/Integration of information from
sources
Your team should ask
some important
questions to guide the
revision process:
Is the thesis statement solid,
logical and fluent?
Introduction
Does your introduction create a
strong background to your paper?
about
❖Are the paragraphs internally
paragraph coherent?
development
❖Are the paragraphs externally
coherent? (That is, did the team
make appropriate transitions
from paragraph to paragraph?)
❖Organization-Is there a logical flow
of the information?
Ask
questions ❖Analysis-How did the team make
comments on information cited from
about sources?
organization
and analysis ❖How did the team connect the
ideas throughout the paper?
Did we develop a paper that
reflects the narrowed topic that
our team formulated?
Your team
should ask Did we write to achieve the
more intended purpose?
questions
Did we consider what was
suitable for the intended
audience?
❖Is the conclusion appropriate for the
kind of writing you used to compose
your paper?
❖colons - :
Ask
questions ❖semicolons-;
about
❖commas- ,
punctuation
❖parentheses- ()
❖Apostrophes –’
Peer
review
Peer review is a process in which
writers (“peers”) evaluate the
quality of other scientists’ work.
What is
peer
review? The purpose of peer review in
FOUN1014 is to provide an
opportunity for students to
critically engage in the assessment
of the scientific research papers
❖The peer review process is
seen as the gold standard
in science because it
ensures the rigour, novelty,
and consistency of
academic outputs.
The Peer- Typically, through rounds of
Review review, flawed ideas are
eliminated and good ideas
Process are strengthened and
improved (Spicer & Roulet,
2018, para. 13).
Some students believe that
peer review is a waste of
time.
Misconceptions
Some students expect their
about peer peers to correct their
review papers.
Analysis
You may
comment on
Organization
any of the
following:
Sentence structure
Evidence/Integration of information
from sources
Each member of your team
should review papers written
by other teams
You are required to write ONE review for
grading.
Peer Review in 3 Minutes
• https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rOCQZ7QnoN0
https://serc.carleton.edu/sp/library/peerreview/tips.html
Conversation. https://theconversation.com/explainer-
what-is-peer-review-27797