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Research Paper Peer Review Draft
Research Paper Peer Review Draft
18 April 2023
ENC 1102
Professor Gonzalez
“Water cooler talk.” It’s a common phrase known to most people as a nice way to say
“gossiping”. Workplace chitchat is not a new concept, as long as humans have been around there
has been drama. However, small talk is not the only kind of communication done in the
workplace; there are serious emails, board meetings, and phone calls that all contribute to the
environment of a company. Through reading and analyzing multiple case studies and articles as
well as conducting my own interviews on the topic, I have become very educated on the subject
After extensive searching I have found some sources that have educated me on the topic
of workplace environment and communication as well and given me examples of how I could
conduct my own research on the topic. All articles, books, and journals that are cited in my
research paper were found on Google Scholar and they are all scholarly, peer reviewed, articles.
There is a common theme in the articles I have found, they all discuss how workplace
environment has an effect on both communication and work ethic within the workplace.
Additionally, I have pulled at least one idea from every source that will help me as I model my
distributing and analyzing 314 surveys. Although I will not be using surveys in my own research,
I will be conducting interviews, the questions in the surveys were asked on a Likert scale which
was helpful because it showed me different type of questions, I could ask to get data. The second
(Borkowski, et al., 2021). Similar to my first source, this article discusses different types of
communications that take place in the workplace, specifically those between managers and their
employees. This article was very helpful to me because I interviewed subjects in both entry level
jobs and those in higher managerial jobs so the analysis of relationships between managers and
employees was beneficial when formulating my questions. These two sources are similar because
they provided me with important information about employee engagement and communication.
The final three sources I analyzed are all case studies and although they are from different
people, countries, and years they all provide similar results. The first study, “Impact of
2012) presents the analysis of working environment of a foreign private bank in Turkey and
examines the relationship between the workplace physical conditions and employee’s
productivity. The results of this study essentially show that poor work conditions (including poor
and worth have a “significant part to play in developing and maintaining optimal employee
work environments and vice versa. All the studies I analyzed sing a similar tune including my
final source used, “Factors of Workplace Environment That Affect Employees Performance: A
Case Study of Miyazu Malaysia.” (Naharuddin, et al. 2013), which analyzes workplace
environment and its effect on employees performance. A large factor of both workplace
managers.
From reading and analyzing the sources above I have learned so much more about the
effects communication, workplace environments, and employee performance have on each other.
After reading these articles and studies I was able to formulate my own questions and conduct
my own interview in the most efficient and professional way possible. If I had not read these
sources first, I would not have been able to conduct my interviews as well as I did and my
from different jobs, ages, and backgrounds. I believe that interviewing multiple different types of
people was the most effective way to get the most diverse and accurate data for my research as
opposed to having people from similar backgrounds as a control. All of my interviewees were
over the age of 18 and consented to the interviewing process, no real names will be used in this
paper. In my interviews I asked four open-ended questions and one closed-ended, multiple
choice, question. I created my own questions based on what I believed would be the most
beneficial to answer the question I presented in my research proposal; “How does one’s work
For the purpose of remaining anonymous, each person I interviewed will have an alias. I
interviewed Mackenzie (age 20), Brooke (age 18), Carl (age 54), Alden (age 29), and I will be
using my (age 20) own personal answers to the interview questions as well. Although all the
interview questions were created by me, some were based on research I found in my sources. For
example, the one closed ended question asked subjects; “In your opinion which relationship do
Organizational Behavior in Health Care (Borkowski, et al., 2021) which focuses on the
relationships between managers and their employees. The results to this question seemed to be
based off age and job status, Mackenzie (age 20), Brooke (age 18), and myself (age 20) all
agreed coworker relationships are more important whereas Carl (age 54) and Alden (age 29) said
employer-employee relationships are more important. Besides from the age of those interviewed,
the job statuses of those with similar answers are also similar, Mackenzie (age 20), Brooke (age
18), and myself (age 20) all work entry level jobs in the food industry where Carl (age 54) and
Alden (age 29) both have managerial positions at their respected companies.
A total of five questions were asked during the interviews, the first open ended question I
want to focus on is “From the jobs you have had explain the best work environment you have
experienced and why you think it was good.” I was very surprised that all interviewees answered
similarly, all subjects said their current job has the best work environment of any they’ve ever
worked. This shows that regardless of age or work status, employees will stay at a workplace that
they believe has a good work environment longer than one that doesn’t. In addition to all subjects
agreeing they enjoy their current job more than others, when asked to elaborate on their answer
they all said something about how their coworkers are what make the company an enjoyable
place to work. More specifically, Carl (age 54) said (of current company) “It’s like a family; the
people are nice, and everyone gets along with no drama.” and Brooke (18) said “The managers
and employees are very nice and personable which creates a good environment to work in.” Both
of these responses show that coworkers are what make the work environment enjoyable. I would
like to note that this was the first question asked in the interviews and I did not tell the subjects to
comment on their coworkers, they created these answers fully on their own based on the
My second open ended question asked was “From the jobs you have had explain the
worst work environment you have experienced and why you think it was bad.”
The next two questions I asked subjects relate to the communication aspect of my
research; the first question related to this that I asked was “What are the most common forms of
communication you use with your coworkers? (Formally or informally? Verbal or nonverbal?
Explain.)”
The fifth and final question asked during the interviews was “Do you believe that the job
environment that you are in changes the way you communicate with your coworkers?” The
answers to this question were surprisingly similar to the results from the first question asked.
Mackenzie (age 20), Brooke (age 18), and myself (age 20), all agreed that work environment
does change the way we communicate with coworkers. More specifically, Mackenzie (age 20)
said “working in a bar has a much different environment than a normal restaurant (for example a
nicer restaurant).” On the other end, Carl (age 54) and Alden (age 29) both said that work
environment does not affect communication with coworkers. Carl (age 54) said “treat everyone
with kindness and respect regardless of the environment.” I believe that job status plays a bigger
part in these answers than age. Both Carl (age 54) and Alden (age 29) are at higher, long term,
positions at their companies, because of this they answered differently because regardless of
what job they go to they still have a high reputation to uphold. On the other hand, Mackenzie
(age 20), Brooke (age 18), and myself (age 20) are all in entry-level positions and do not plan on
staying with those companies indefinitely. As a result, we can be more relaxed at our jobs and
communication will change based on whether or not management is around and the physical
Nancy Borkowski and Katherine A. Meese, Jones & Bartlett Learning, 2021, pp. 71–102.
Pilot Study.” Public Relations Review, vol. 41, no. 1, 2015, pp. 129–131.
Bank in Turkey.” Journal of Business, Economics & Finance, 2012, pp. 38–49.
Naharuddin, Nina, and Mohammed Sadegi. “Factors of Workplace Environment That Affect