Ms Maryam

Part part 2

Short Note Expansion

Communicative
Messi
Ijj
formative
non
formative

essay factual
email
message speech
postcards report
article
review
 common European Framework
CEFR of References
intermediate advanced
beginner's
Al BI Cl
PT spon
Bz C 2
A2

8cm scheme
marking
Email
5m
Language
5m
Communicative Achievement
Organisations 5m
Content Sm
 i punal

advice advice

sheep a
sheep
knowledge a knowledge
a news
news

economies a economics

ADVICE us ADVISE
nouns
verb
menasihati
Gasihat

Syafia advised
Brianna to bake
burnt cheesecake Brianna

took her advice

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PT3 PAPER 2: WRITING

Part 1 15 write
[20 marks]
You should spend about 25 minutes in this part.
5 plan
5 edit
Read the email from your cousin, Brianna.
finalise

Hey,
Emas
Hope all is well on your side! There is a baking competition happening in two weeks! I’ve been thinking about
joining it. Would you participate with me? Also, what do you suggest I make?

I was thinking about baking my Brianna

special brownies benny parlors or

In about 80 words, write an email to Brianna giving some advice. chiffon cake
to use
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you're eneonge
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contract on a short form

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youlet
are
you're
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us 2 let's
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I am a I m
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I will I'll
I have a I've got
to go
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 Savery
Let's brainstorm
oven made
Baking a

Burnt cheesecake Orde ondes

cupcakes Apan Balik

cakes Durian mousse cake

Brownies Milo Dinosaur

Cookies Dodos cookies
nee
doughnuts mango sticky
candor
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Practice Table (110 words)

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don't e do not
Have not haven't
Hi Hey Hello
É Hope you're doing well
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I'm excited
so
E thrilled to hear that
I'm
o I couldn't be more proud
I believe because

É
I
I
think
find that three
convince
I know you'll do great
É I
fun
m sure it's going to be

now
I have to go
I'll talk to you
soon

Let me know how it

goes

Goodbye Bye

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LINKING WORDS

TO SHOW ORDER TO ADD INFORMATION

 After ( selepas)  Additionally (tambahan)

 Previously (sebelum ini)  Finally ( akhirnya)
 Second (kedua)  For example ( sebagai contoh)
 Since( sejak)  Furthermore (lebihan lagi)
 Soon (tidak lama lagi)  In addition ( sebagai tambahan)
 Then (kemudian)  Too (juga)
 While (sementara)  Besides (selain itu)
 Next (seterusnya)  As well as (begitu juga)
 Following (berikutnya)  Another (yang lain)
 Before (sebelum)  Also (juga)
 Along with (Bersama dengan)
TO INDICATE A PURPOSE OR REASON TO CONTRAST

 So that (agar)  However (namun begitu)

 With this in mind ( dengan ini)  Yet(namum)
 In fact ( sebenarnya)  Except (keculai)
 In order to (untuk)  But( tetapi)
 Furthermore (lebihan pula)  Whereas ( sedangkan)
 Because (kerana)  In contrast (berbeza)
 Nevertheless (walaupun begitu)
 On the other hand( selain itu)
 Sometimes (kadangkala)
TO COMPARE TO CONCLUDE

 As(sebagai)  all in all (kesimpulannya)

 compared to (berbanding dengan)  as a result (akibatnya)
 like (seperti)  finally ( akhirnya)
 for the same reason (atas alasan yang sama)  in conclusion (kesimpulannya)
 similar to ( sama seperti)  in summary( secara ringkas)
 similarly (sama)  in brief ( dalam ringkasnya)
 lastly ( akhir sekali)
 overall ( keseluruhannya)
 therefore ( oleh itu)

TO EMPHASIZE TO GIVE EXAMPLES

 absolutely ( sama sekali)  such as ( seperti)

 always (sentiasa)
 in fact ( sebenarnya)
 particularly (terutamanya)
 positively ( secare positif)
 without a doubt ( tanpa keraguan)
 for instance (contohnya)
 evidently (jelas)
 in this case ( dalam hal ini)
 proof of this (ini dibuktikan)

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 Hey Brianna
I hope you're in a

pink of health I'm so

to hear about the

happy
amazing baking competition
I would to join but
unfortunately I've made plans

with parents As for

my
the I believe
competition
should make Orde Orde
you
cheesecake because it has

unique Malaysian flavours

Besides that the judges

will definitely be impressed
of delicious cheesecake
your do well
recipe I know you'll
Let me know how it
goes
I have to go
now

Goodbye Love

fyafia

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NOTES:

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