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Task 1:

- Structure:

Introductory
+
sentence:

The
given provided illustrate(s) WHAT
demonstrate(s)
line graph + the changes in N
compare (s)
pie chart
+

the information on + N
bar chart

table +>
the number of
chart (s)
NGtbl
how
many N(ctb)
=

v
+

illustration(s)
->
the of
amount
diagram (s) Nuctb)
how much
map (s) N(uctb)
+

V
=
+

the
+

percentage of the rate of

->
the of (oil)
consumption (the use of the demandof

the
=

amount of . . . consumed

= 11
used

=
1
needed

everyday /
+
week month year
daily/weekly monthly yearly
=

yearly every year annual

+

WHEN

...
from
+

to between . . .
and ...

periodof...
over
-

a
years, starting in ...

-> until 2040 =

to 2040
up
 Overview statement:

generally 1 In ...
overall
general
from the (t clause)
-> As can be seen
graph/chart, . . . .

It
+

is clear from the graph/chart that.... (+ clauses

clause)
+ The most outstanding feature t he
of
chart/graph table is that . . . .

+ It is obvious that ....

(+ clause)

can 1 :General trends (overtime)

downward trendwhile the opposite was true for se

trend a
overall, I witness (ed) an
upward

Can 2:t h e most outstanding feature:

In addition, among them, it the

saw most significant growth drop

hos s+(be) the most important/popular N

S+(b(e) higher
for
periodshown
than thato f the others the
hoc
-
the
figure over

STRUCTUREF O R
SENTENCE COMPARISON:

1.
Simple sentences:

HIGHER /LOWER of SC, b

SI, with
significantly (slightly than that with the
percentage of
·

a be
,

Sostandatbe a
compared
toin
comparison with b that of Sc
-

exceeded)
S1, with a
significantly that of SC, with b

S2, half three times that of Sc

with a be twice as much
many
sentences
2.
Complex
of b
S. which stand atI , be
significantly/slightly higher/lower than that Sq, with
-

The
percentage 5
of standat while the
figure for sa bb
-

be

Si, which stand

significantly exceeded) thato f Sc, with
-

at
o r,

standing at
o r, s, be twice half/stimes as much
many that of S

Note:i n of
case
equality
The percentage/amount /number of S1 SI (almost) the same, at with number
-

and was

The
percentage/amount number of sy Sa (relatively) similar, hovering at mumber
-

and was

Other
expressions
-

A exceedB by x: Female unemploymentrates exceedthat omales

f
by 15%
 Double
-

The be observed for A

opposite pattern seen
-

can

Fraction
PIE CHART percentage
73% A
large / aroundthree
proportion quarters
66%
good proportion
A

48% Almost a half

25% A
quarter
15% A
s mall number

5% s mall minority
A / An
insignificantnumber (Shedang ke

Approximation
100.005 => about 100
-

60.04010 60%
=> roughly
-

40.50C =>
approximately 410
-

$502,02=) around
$502
less 99,98 => justu nder 100%
-

9,7% => slightly below 10%

more -
100,008 => justover 100

32 F
39,10 => slightly above
-

99,98:nearly 100

S14,7:approaching $15
chinh xa -

32,100precisely exactly 32, 10

SENTENCES STRUCTURE

1, 5+ accountedfor +
X% of the N

occupied
made up

constituted

(chiem

2. The
level/percentage/proportion of N was/stoodat
+

X%
+

4% the A
3, of N
gotol wentt o
4. There was I were 4% of the N who, which that
+
V/ clause
COMBINED TASK Template:
Introduction:

Introductory sentence for both paragraph

Intro 1, and while Intro 2

statement for both (1-2 can)

overview
graphs
-

Iti s clear that OS. Additionally, OSC

Body:
-1st
paragraph:
c loser look at
A (1st), describe...

and
para:
-

to (and), describe . . .
Moving

(giving relevantd etails with the 1st

para
if possible)

PROCESS Template:
Introduction:

the title:
Introductory sentence
paraphrasing
-

The chart / describes /illustrates

diagram how clause

Overview statement:

+ the number of stages

+ how the
process begins and ends

Overall, stages steps of starting beginning

the
there are in
process producing
of in the process

with and ending with

Detail
paragraphs:
1, first step:

First
Firstly
-

To begin (with
-

The firststep is when

first
At the stage of the process
-

2, Middle steps

Then, 1 Next, 1 After that, following that, (backward) -

Before

This, this, -
Prior
(V-ing)
to

forward
 At the following stage,
-

subsequently,
-

At the subsequents tage of the process,

Hoving Vz,
-

3. Last step

Finally, 1 Lastly,
-

The final step is when

for stimultaneous steps

Language
*

Icacbid doing that

During A
happens, B
happens.
-

As (while A happens, I happens.

-

A
happens while B
happens.
-

as

I meanwhile
A
happens. At the time simultaneously, B
happens.
-

same

Current template of mine:

Intro:The diagram illustrates h ow the is/are

V-pp)made/produced/manufactured/created
+

flow-chart demonstrates printed (...)

process explains
Overview: Looking t he it is obvious that
at
process,
This
process includes
steps/phases / stages

Beginning with+
Ving and ending with V-ing
+

N-phr N-phr

Body:To be more
specific, /In details,

Chica ra 5 ctoon, moidtoon van bid

VERB FOR MANUFACTURING PROCESS

-
(be) collected:dowhat (the gone

- (be) inserted:duc cat vao

-
(be) put through:daoc
did
dat

-(be) placedonto under:duc atva o (catdrie

-
(e) transportedto:ds vain chuyerfor

-
(be) delivered to:1
English Matters – Junior IELTS Writing – Lesson 5
Common phrases in natural process
spawn:dotruing
- lay a couple of/ a massive number of eggs: đẻ một vài / một số lượng lớn trứng
- begin life as eggs: bắt đầu cuộc sống là những trái trứng
- hatch within 3 to 5 days: nở trong vòng 3 đến 5 ngày
- hatch into …: nở thành con gì
- the hatching process: quá trình nở
- to be … cm in length/ to be … cm long: dài … cm
- vary in size/colours/shapes: đa dạng về kích thước / màu sắc / hình dạng
- to be termed …/ to be commonly called …: được gọi chung là …
- grow to adult size/ grow to maturity/ turn into an adult: tăng trưởng thành kích thước trưởng
thành/ tới giai đoạn trưởng thành
- make it to the adult stage: đạt tới giai đoạn trưởng thành
- emerge/appear: xuất hiện rearing the process
of breeding
producing young from
=

- feeding grounds: khu vực kiếm ăn animals birds

caring or
they groun
and for them as

- feed on…: ăn cái gì

- grow the hind legs/ the front legs: mọc chân sau / chân trước
- grow quickly in size/ double in size: phát triển nhanh chóng về kích thước / kích thước gấp đôi
- shed their old skin/ shed their outer layer: thay da cũ / thay lớp ngoài của chúng
- moult several times: thay lông vài lần
- breathe underwater/ breathe out of the water: hít thở dưới nước / thở ra khỏi nước
- make mass migration across long distances: thực hiện di cư hàng loạt khoảng cách dài
- the cycle repeats itself/ starts again: chu kỳ lặp lại/ bắt đầu lại
- the life cycle takes/lasts …. days/weeks/…: vòng đời kéo dài …. ngày / tuần / …
- after …days/weeks of development: sau … ngày / tuần phát triển
- normally live for … to … weeks/months/years: thường sống từ … đến … tuần / tháng / năm
- over the course of … days/weeks: trong bao nhiêu ngày / tuần
- to be covered with …: được che phủ, bao phủ bởi …
- build their nests in trees/on the ground: xây dựng tổ của chúng trên cây / trên mặt đất
- under optimal conditions: trong điều kiện tối ưu
- in adverse circumstances: trong các trường hợp bất lợi
- fresh water & salt water

-Open sea = ocean

rocky gravel nest

pepples:soi, soda small stones

-
upper river uperstream
= river

-
fry babyfish/babysalmon
=

dovecs the
-

undergo some
physical changes:tra quaintthey
size from . . . ....
to
grow in

different locationsi nMTno I

-

aquatic environments
7

(nataliers)tolayeggsforthe
-Adultsalmon swim their birth place
back to generonone
next
MAP Template:

1 single map question:m o tail ductionthen ban dohoa so chuing

sant

- Intro:m s to map mientogi

The
map(s) illustrates/presents
-
i sdie
overview:h e chung via diactie
Overall, it can be seen that....

-
Body:s o sant
2. Two
maps question:s o
sant a o
map, aing dia ciei mnain
I #

- Intro:

The maps illustrate the developments/changes/modifications that

have taken place in over the

periodof between and

Overview:

Overall, it is clear that underwent (trailqual hada greattransformation over the period, becoming
noticeably more
congested (tonew stongcuchow)/move developed.
note: they colchical dienra:the
proposedchanges
that are
going to take
place
planneddevelopments
-

Body: so santh
+ icalbithay the mat
Doan 1:n e w

In details, tobegin with,

In addition Concerning the . . .

map
be replaced by be converted transformed(into
sth)

be cleared to... be repurposed:towhode"phalon

i s MA
#

demolished:bi do, bo

knocked down

flattened:bilai phaing
+
Doan 2:they do vekichoot, doiwth

change in size:be extended, be expanded, be widen:domy rong

be kick cor
shrunken:bigiain

Remove:be relocated to somewhere

/

be diverted:bithey doi hong

Trafficwill be divertedinto
m inor roads