 I need to present a clear and direct thesis statement, need a thesis to support my relevant

 subclaims, need to present evidence in a logical matter, need to offer appropriate amount
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 summary, needs to clearly demonstrate that the author understand his/her purpose, fix
 grammar mistakes, need to proofread, need to include topic sentence to each paragraph,
MLA
 corrections, and needs to present the appropriate amount of quotations, paraphrases, and
 summaries