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English 1 Prep
Teacher Mayson Ahmad
By Maya Angelou
A. Style
1. Redundancy
2. Wordiness
MECHANICS 3. Word choice
4. Clarity
A. Sentence Structure
1. Fragments B. Strategy
2. Run-ons 1. Use Appropriate Transitions
3. Modifiers 2. Maintain Tone
4. Parallelism 3. Maintain Main Idea
5. Conjunctions 4. Provide Supporting Details
5. Revision Strategies
B. Punctuation
1. Commas C. Organization
2. Semicolons, Colons, and 1. Reorder sentences within a
Dashes paragraph
3. Apostrophe 2. Reorder paragraphs within an
essay
C. Usage
1. Subject-Verb Agreement TIPS:
2. Tense Consistency 1. Answer easy questions first
3. Pronoun-Antecedent because all questions are equal in
Agreement value.
4. Adverbs & Adjectives 2. No penalty for guessing. Predict &
5. Comparatives & Superlatives eliminate.
6. Prepositions 3. ACT does not like redundancy.
7. Idioms Short and clear sentences are the
best.
4. Most punctuation questions are
about commas. Study the three
comma rules.
5. Remember the three kinds of
transitions & the three kinds of
conjunctions.
6. Keep track of your time.
1. FRAGMENTS
A fragment is an incomplete sentence. Watch out for a sentence that begins with a subordinate
conjunction (although, if, despite, since, because, while, after, before, when, where, why, and
how). It begins with a subordinate clause—a group of words that cannot be written as a complete
sentence. The subordinate clause has to be attached to a main clause—a group of words that
can be written as a complete sentence. A fragment has an unnecessary period.
3. The bride and groom drove away in their car. As the children ran behind, shouting
and laughing.
A. NO CHANGE
B. car. While the
C. car, during which the
D. car, as the
4. Although it will always be associated with Shakespeare’s famous literary character. The castle
at Ellsinore was never home to Hamlet.
A. NO CHANGE
B. character, the
C. character; the
D. character.
5. Before she could say much. Juan said that he had already got her parents’ permission.
A. NO CHANGE
B. much. Juan,
C. much, Juan
D. much; Juan
7. They like to visit the Art Museum. Which has some great paintings.
A. NO CHANGE
B. Museum ; which
C. Museum , which ,
D. Museum , which
A comma splice is two sentences joined together with only a comma; a run-on is two sentences
joined together without any punctuation. Separate the two sentences using either a period, or a
semicolon, or a comma and a coordinate conjunction FANBOYS (and, but, or, nor, yet, so, for).
8. Lobsters are cannibalistic and will feed on each other this is one reason they are difficult to
raise in captivity.
A. NO CHANGE
B. other , this
C. other ; and this
D. other . This
10. The college’s plans for expansion included a new science building and a new
dormitory if the funding drive was successful there would be enough money for both.
F. NO
G. dormitory , if
H. dormitory ; if ,
J. dormitory . If
11. There is not much difference between the decision to enter politics and the decision
to jump into a pit full of rattlesnakes in fact you might find a friendlier environment in
the snake pit.
A. NO CHANGE
B. rattlesnakes. In fact,
C. rattlesnakes, in fact,
D. rattlesnakes, in fact
13. Three other kinds of beavers lived around Agate in the early Miocene epoch, but
their bones have never been found in the burrows, in fact, no one knows what they
did for homes.
A. NO CHANGE
B. burrows. In fact, no one
C. burrows, no one, in fact
D. burrows, the fact of the matter is in fact no one
3. MODIFIERS
15. After seeing the movie, the space creatures seemed more believable than ever to all of us.
A. NO CHANGE
B. the space creatures seemed believable.
C. all of us believed more the space creatures.
D. all of us felt the space creatures were more believable than ever.
18. While waiting for the plumber, the hot-water tank began to leak all over the basement floor.
F. NO CHANGE
G. plumber, the hot-water tank begin
H. plumber, the hot-water tank was beginning
J. plumber, I saw the hot-water tank beginning
19. Walking to the pawnshop, Bob’s watch dropped into the sewer.
A. NO CHANGE
B. Bob’s watch fell into the sewer
C. Bob dropped his watch
D. the watch dropped Bob
20. The paramedics covered the boy’s forehead with a cold compress, which was bruised and
swollen.
F. NO CHANGE
G. forehead with a cold compress which was bruised and swollen
H. forehead, which was bruised and swollen, with a cold compress.
J. forehead with a cold compress.
21. At the end of the semester, I realized I only needed tutoring in one course.
A. NO CHANGE
22. Collecting seashells on the beach, the sunset was a beauty to watch.
F. NO CHANGE
G. the sunset was beautiful
H. it was a beautiful sunset.
J. I watched the beautiful sunset.
4. PARALLELISM
Use the same grammatical form to express equal or parallel ideas. Look out for a list of nouns,
verbs, adjectives, or phrases in a sentence. Keep all the items in the same grammatical form.
24. We will lie on the beach, swim in the ocean, and we will sleep under the stars.
F. NO CHANGE
G. sleep under the stars.
H. we will be sleeping under the stars.
J. we would sleep.
26. Parents are either too permissive or they are too strict.
F. NO CHANGE
G. strict.
H. they too are strict.
J. too strict.
27. The grammar exercises are long, difficult, and contain absurdities.
A. NO CHANGE
B. absurd.
C. are containing absurdities.
D. are also absurd.
28. One option the students have is to fail the test; the other is working long hours.
F. NO CHANGE
G. work
H. to work
J. to have worked
30. Every road to the school is either jammed or is closed for repairs.
F. NO CHANGE
G. has been closed
H. is being closed
J. closed
5. CONJUNCTIONS
Subordinate: although, if, because, after, before, since, while, though, as though, as, as if,
as long as, so, so that, in order that, provided that, till, until, unless,
when, where, whereas, that, which, who.
These introduce a subordinate clause and connect it to the main clause.
31. The baby’s hat is made of wool and it really seems to keep him warm.
A. NO CHANGE
B. wool, and
C. wool, and,
D. wool and,
32. However, I don’t have any cash on me, I still want to buy a ticket.
F. NO CHANGE
G. Since,
H. Although
J. In conclusion,
35. She watches the evening news; however, she hates the daytime soap operas.
A. NO CHANGE
B. news but,
C. news, also
37. I had to work and take care of the baby. Since, I should have studied.
A. NO CHANGE
B. baby, since
C. baby. And
D. baby; nonetheless,
1. COMMAS
Commas may be put into three categories: serial, parenthetical, and introductory commas.
The serial comma is used to separate three or more words or phrases in a list or to separate two
or more equal adjectives: Sam brought his bat, ball, and glove to the game on Sunday. The
violent, steely waves menaced the fishermen.
The parenthetical comma is a pair of commas used to set off non-essential words or phrases in a
sentence: The sunset, glowing in the evening dusk, looked like a ball of fire. Teresa, my cousin,
immigrated from France in 1998.
The introductory comma separates an introductory phrase or clause from the rest. It is also used
to set off a beginning subordinate clause or a beginning independent clause: Yes, Mary is
planning to attend the dance this Friday. Although she was good at business, she chose the
profession of a teacher. I enjoyed watching the game, but my father thought it was too long.
38. A bright yellow shining light glowed from the lighthouse to warn travelers at sea.
A. NO CHANGE
B. bright, yellow, shining light
C. bright, yellow, shining, light
D. bright, yellow, shining, light,
39. At the track meet we will sprint hurdle and vault our way towards a victory.
A. NO CHANGE
B. we will sprint hurdle, and vault our way
C. we will sprint, hurdle, and vault our way
D. we will sprint hurdle and vault, our way
40. Among the guest speakers were an author an engineer a CEO and a journalist.
A. NO CHANGE
B. were an author an engineer a CEO, and a journalist.
C. were an author an engineer a CEO and, a journalist.
41. We went to a great concert last night but the music was too loud.
A. NO CHANGE
B. concert last night, but the music
C. concert, last night but, the music
D. concert, last night, but the music
42. To open the door properly you must turn the knob while pressing in firmly.
A. NO CHANGE
B. properly you must turn the knob,
C. properly, you must turn the knob
D. properly, you must turn, the knob
Apostrophes are used either for missing letters (I’m, they’d, It’s raining outside, Who’s coming?)
or to show ownership (Juan’s car, children’s film, many flowers’ stems, Hercules’ victories).
Possessive pronouns do not have an apostrophe (yours, ours, its muffler, Whose idea is it?).
Do not use an apostrophe to make a noun plural.
Semicolons are used to connect two related independent clauses or sentences. (I called Jessica;
she will arrive in thirty minutes.)
Colons are used before a list of items—usually, after expressions like as follows or the following.
(This recipe includes these ingredients: chicken, curry, onions, brown sugar, and sour cream.)
48. Almost all areas on earth have been explored by modern scientists; as a result, they
have now begun research on the floors of the sea.
A. NO CHANGE
B. scientists; as a result they
C. scientists, as a result, they
D. scientists. As a result they
49. Dont’ you remember they’re story about catching twenty-six butterfly’s?
F. NO CHANGE
G. Don’t you remember they’re story about catching butterfly’s?
H. Don’t you remember their story about catching butterflies?
J. Don’t you remember there story about catching butterflies?
1. SUBJECT-VERB AGREEMENT
A verb must agree with its subject in number. A singular verb is used with a singular subject,
and a plural verb is used with a plural subject. Identify the real subject, and ignore the words
that come between the real subject and its verb. Use a plural verb with compound subjects that
contain the word and/both. Use a singular verb with a compound subject connected by or/nor.
51. My sister, together with the other girls, were excited about the trip.
A. NO CHANGE
B. are
C. have been
D. was
52. The answers you write on this test shows what type of personality you have.
F. NO CHANGE
G. showed
H. show
J. has shown
53. The endless days in 100 degree heat was enough to convince us we did not want to
live in the desert.
A. NO CHANGE
B. were
C. is
54. Mike, along with his friends, hope to study graphic design.
F. NO CHANGE
G. have hoped
H. are hoping
J. hopes
56. There in the distance was the remains of the ghost town.
F. NO CHANGE
G. has been
H. is
J. were
2. TENSE
The past and participle forms of regular verbs (work, play, pray, walk, look) are created by adding
–d or –ed to the present form. Irregular verbs (eat, drink, sing, swim, drive), however, do not
follow these rules.
Use the simple past tense when a past time is mentioned (yesterday, last Friday, two hours ago).
To distinguish one past event from another, use the past perfect tense (had gone, had finished)
for the earlier event.
The tense of a verb must be consistent with other verbs in the sentence or in the surrounding
sentences.
58. If you haven’t ate dinner yet, you can have hamburgers with us.
F. NO CHANGE
G. eat
H. eaten
J. not eaten
59. She has screamed at her friends many times, and they had ignored it.
A. NO CHANGE
B. have ignored
C. had been ignoring
D. were ignoring
61. By the year 2050, a person born in 1990 would have lived sixty years.
A. NO CHANGE
B. could have lived
C. will have lived
D. will live
62. Sam is walking down the street when he found a large suitcase.
F. NO CHANGE
G. has found
H. finds
J. had found
63. Although Alice loved to talk about healthy eating, she has died last year of malnutrition.
A. NO CHANGE
B. died
C. had died
D. was dead
3. PRONOUNS
65. Each of the boys was determined they would attend practice everyday.
A. NO CHANGE
B. he would
C. he will
D. them would
67. Although the American bald eagle has been on the endangered species list for years, they
have been sighted in wildlife preserves much more frequently during that past two years.
A. NO CHANGE
B. they are
C. it can be
D. it has been
68.The students, who had been studying the space program, were thrilled to witness the lunar
landing.
F. NO CHANGE
G. about whom had been studying the space program
H. whom had been studying the space program
J. who had been studying the space program
69. Most people have a certain crime that one believes should be ranked as the worst of all
crimes.
A. NO CHANGE
B. that they believe
C. which one believes
D. that you believe
70. Scientists officially call this animal Giraffa Camelopardalis because it considers the animal to
look like a camel with the markings of a leopard.
F. NO CHANGE
G. they consider
H. they are considering
J. it is considered
Distinguish adjectives (melodious song) and adverbs (sang melodiously) from each other by their
position (An adjective comes before the verb, but an adverb comes after the verb) in the
sentence or by their form (-ly for adverbs). An adjective will always fill in this blank: He/she/it is
very _______.
Use the comparative degree of adjectives and adverbs to compare two people or things.
She is quicker than her brother. He talks more softly than his sister.
Use the superlative degree to compare more than two people or things.
She is the smartest girl in the class. He is the tallest in the family.
Avoid double superlatives (That was the most unkindest cut of all, my countrymen!)
6. PREPOSITIONS
A preposition shows the relationship between a noun/pronoun and other words in a sentence.
Certain words require a specific preposition. Avoid extra prepositions. Sentences that end with
prepositions are often awkward.
7. IDIOMS
Idioms are expressions that require the use of a specific word. Notice the correct usage of certain
words often confused. (among/between, beside/besides, angry at/angry with, unless/without).
Notice too that could of, must of, should of, and would of are all nonstandard, but could have,
must have, should have and would have are all right.
Do not say the reason is because, but say the reason is that. Do not say among you and I, but
say between you and me. Do not say being that he is, but say since he is.
97. I didn’t come yesterday the reason is because a car hit me.
A. NO CHANGE
B. the reason is that
C. the reason why is that
D. the reason for it is because
98. You should of gone to the dentist a month ago for a checkup.
F. NO CHANGE
G. should of went
H. should off gone
J. should have gone
100. You can’t make an omelet without you break the egg.
F. NO CHANGE
G. if you break
H. unless you break
J. unless and until you break
*Diction: is the author’s word choice . Based on the surrounding context, an author will be very
particular about the words they use to convey an idea 💡
*Style: is the way the author writes to fit a specific audience or purpose . For example, if they
were trying to address a group of scientists versus a group of teenagers, they would definitely
write differently .
Some ACT English Test questions may ask you to identify or eliminate redundancy or
unnecessary wordiness within sentences. Redundancy is the unnecessary repetition of ideas.
Wordiness is the use of several words when a few can express the same idea more clearly and
concisely.
On the sentence level, in general, less is more. The fewer words you use to get your point
across, the better. Unnecessary words often waste time and cloud meaning. Sentences that don’t
have any words to waste are clear and have impact.
PRACTICE: Rewrite the following sentences to correct any ambiguity, wordiness, or redundancy.
4. While barbecuing our steaks, a hungry dog came into our backyard.
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ANSWERS
2. Word Choice:
One of the trickier concepts that you will be tested on ACT English is your ability to choose the
right word from among many that are not quite right, and to spot when words are being used
incorrectly. Are you confident in your ability to find the differences in a group of similar words?
Can you distinguish what’s needed from the context of a question?
Diction is a fancy synonym for “word choice” - you may have heard your literature teacher talk
about it when analyzing a famous author’s writing style. On the ACT English, there are three
main ways that word choice becomes important:
There is nothing better then (1) waking up to the smell of freshly-brewed coffee. The exciting (2)
smell really gets my blood pumping.
1.
A. NO CHANGE
B. better than
C. better
D. better to
2.
E. NO CHANGE
F. simulating
G. dazzling
H. stimulating
Answers: 1. B; 2. D
B. Strategy: Use Appropriate Transitions, Maintain Tone, Maintain Main Idea, Provide
Supporting Details, Revision Strategies
When you encounter a transition words question on ACT English or SAT Writing & Language,
chances are you’ll have to demonstrate the following:
1. Your knowledge of the transition words in question
2. Your ability to identify the relationship between the ideas in question
3. Your capacity to choose the right transition word to reflect this relationship
As a refresher, though, here is a table of the transition words and phrases high school students
are most familiar with:
Now, it’s important to note that each transition word will show a specific relationship between
ideas. The word “however,” for example, will show a contrast of some kind, while the word
“furthermore” shows similarity.
Take a look at this table, which groups the words and phrases from the previous table into
general relationship categories:
Contrast Similarity / Addition Cause-and-Effect Sequence
however furthermore for this reason first
regardless in fact therefore second
on the other hand moreover consequently third
despite for example as a result finally
nonetheless indeed so previously
whereas and in conclusion next
nevertheless also/too thus eventually
yet in addition hence last
Practice :
1. The process of donating an organ can get quite complicated. Blood types and other
characteristics must match before organs can be transferred. In spite of that, unexpected
incompatibilities may exist, resulting in further medical problems.
A) NO CHANGE
B) Similarly,
C) According to some people,
D) Even then,
2. Although women in cities from New York to Boston demanded equality in academic opportunities,
most East Coast universities did not yield to such demands. In fact, coeducational balance did not
become a prominent issue for East Coast admissions officers until the 1960s.
3. As it turned out, Senator Aldrich did not plan his Jekyll Island trip for relaxation
purposes. Therefore, he confidentially planned the weeklong affair to confer with Wall Street
executives for a specific purpose—to draft a banking reform bill that would create a centralized
American banking system.
A) NO CHANGE
B) Nevertheless,
C) Instead,
D) Afterwards,
4. Some conservatives claim that America was founded as a Christian nation by devout men who
sought to establish a system of law and governance based on the Bible. More secular voices, in
summary, have argued that the ``Christian nation'' concept is a misnomer.
A) NO CHANGE
B) likewise,
C) for instance,
D) on the other hand,
5. The general knew that the price of victory was enormous. Moreover, there would be over a
hundred battles and thousands of deaths by the time the war was over.
A) NO CHANGE
B) Yet,
C) Eventually,
D) Indeed,
The main idea is nothing but the primary purpose of the passage. There are two broad types of
questions on the ACT Reading Test:
1. General questions that ask about broader concepts in the passage. These should be
answered from your initial reading
2. Detail-oriented questions that ask about specific information and/or relationships within the
passage. These can almost always be supported by an explicit (but cleverly hidden) piece of
information or relationship within the passage
Example
European zoos of the late 19th and early 20th centuries incorporated the visual cultures of
their animals’ native homes into ornate buildings - reflections of their nations’ colonial aspirations.
The Berlin Zoo’s ostrich house resembled an Egyptian temple, with large columns flanking the
entrance and scenes of ostrich hunts decorating the exterior. Berlin’s elephant enclosure was
built in the spirit of a Hindu temple; the home for its giraffes adopted an Islamic architectural style.
Zoos in Cologne, Lisbon, Antwerp, and Budapest, among others, created similar exhibits. These
zoos were no home for subtlety: The animals they contained were exotic to most visitors; the
buildings that did the containing reinforced the sensation.
1. Which of the following best states the main idea of the paragraph?
A. Buildings in the late 19th and early 20th European zoos emphasized the exotic origins of the
animals they housed
B. Many buildings in the late 19th and early 20th centuries European zoos were built to
resemble Egyptian temples
C. European zoos in the late 19th and early 20th centuries sought to evoke subtle emotions in
their visitors
D. During the late 19th and early 20th centuries, most of the animals in European zoos came
from outside of Europe
A. Argue that European zoos of the late 19th and early 20th centuries should have made more
of an effort to accommodate their animals’ needs
B. Describe specific ways in which late 19th and early 20th century European zoo buildings
evoked the animals’ home countries
C. Compare the buildings at the Berlin Zoo to zoo buildings in Cologne, Lisbon, Antwerp, and
Budapest
D. Illustrate the importance of housing zoo animals in buildings that recreate their native homes
3. The author mentions “zoos in Cologne, Lisbon, Antwerp, and Budapest” (lines 13-14) in order to
illustrate what point?
A. Buildings in 19th and 20th century European zoos emphasized the exotic origins of the
animals they housed
B. Many buildings in 19th and 20th century European zoos were built to resemble Egyptian
temples
C. European zoos in the 19th and 20th centuries sought to evoke subtle emotions in their
visitors
D. During the 19th and 20th century centuries, most of the animals in European zoos came from
outside of Europe
Solutions
1. The main idea essentially states that European zoo buildings looked something like buildings
in the animals’ native countries. Only A and B mention buildings, so C and D can be eliminated
immediately. Option B states that many European zoos had buildings that resembled Egyptian
temples, whereas the passage only states that the Berlin zoo’s ostrich house resembled an
Egyptian temple. Option A is consistent with both the first and the last sentences: the buildings
“reinforced” the sensation that the animals were exotic. So that fits. Answer A is correct.
2. The most effective way to approach this question is to think about how the paragraph is
organized. The topic sentence presents an idea and the rest of the paragraph is devoted to
specific examples that support that idea. That’s exactly what B says, which makes it the correct
answer.
Add/Delete questions ask you if a sentence should be added or deleted from a specific part of a
passage. Typically, these questions involve two parts: you have to determine if the sentence
should be added or deleted, and you’ll also have to select why the sentence should be added or
deleted.
This is the general construction of an add question:
Delete Questions
Here is how delete questions are constructed:
The writer is considering deleting the underlined sentence. Should the writer do this?
A. Yes, because…
B. Yes, because…
C. No, because…
D. No, because…
Example
One of the most influential niche constructors is the earthworm, an organism found almost
everywhere on the planet. 1 A scientist only concerned with evolution would predict that, in order
to live on land, earthworms would have to significantly change. Earthworms didn’t change their
physiology a great amount, however, instead, they changed the soil to make it more like the
ocean in order to survive. Land with earthworms is less compacted, is more nutrient rich, and
better mixed than land without them – leading to monumental changes in the ecosystem.
Earthworms were originally aquatic organisms that were ill-equipped to survive on land.
Possible Answers:
A. Yes, because it adds information about the roles of earthworms as niche creators.
B. No, because the author does not further address why this fact is important.
C. Yes, because it explains the prediction made in the next sentence.
D. No, because it distracts from the discussion on niche construction.
Correct answer:
Yes, because it explains the prediction made in the next sentence