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Students: Samagra Bhattarai, Srikar Lutukurthi, Dharshan Prabakaran

Evaluation
Conference: SCDC

Event: Independent Business Plan - Entrepreneurship Events

Scoring Category: Written Judge 1

Chapter ID: 128H-24668

Chapter Name: Concord High School

Chapter Address:
481 Burrage Road
Concord , NC 28025

Advisor Name: Gordon Thacker

Phone: (704) 260-6000

Email: gordon.thacker@cabarrus.k12.nc.us

Advisor Address:
481 Burrage Road
Concord , NC 28025

Evaluation Completed: 02/18/2023

Students:
Samagra Bhattarai - 1260001
Srikar Lutukurthi - 1260004
Dharshan Prabakaran - 1260003

Final Judges Comments:

The paper is very organized and is very informative on the business. The main thing that could be improved is the repeating of some of the
information. There are a few parts that have some of the same exact information, which is not necessary. There is a lot of information in th
e executive summary, which is good, but it could be narrowed down a little. I would add a little more information on how exactly the compa
ny works and leave out a little bit of the information that can be found in the rest of the paper.
Students: Samagra Bhattarai, Srikar Lutukurthi, Dharshan Prabakaran

INDEPENDENT BUSINESS PLAN


INDEPENDENT BUSINESS PLAN - EIB
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EXECUTIVE SUMMARY
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One- to three-page description of the


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business model

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PROBLEM
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Description of the top problems the


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product/service is addressing

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CUSTOMER SEGMENTS
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Description of target customers 0-1 2 3 4 3

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UNIQUE VALUE PROPOSITION
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Description of the single, clear,


compelling message that states the 0-1 2 3 4 3
unique value proposition

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SOLUTION
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Description of the top features of the


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product/service that solve the problem

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CHANNELS
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Descriptions of the pathways to


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customers

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REVENUE STREAM
VALUE EXPECTATIONS EXPECTATIONS EXPECTATIONS SCORE

Description of the revenue model and


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life time values
Students: Samagra Bhattarai, Srikar Lutukurthi, Dharshan Prabakaran
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COST STRUCTURE
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Explanation of the customer


acquisition costs, distribution costs,
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human resources costs and any
additional costs

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DETAILED FINANCIALS
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Projected income and expenses and


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proposed plan to meet capital needs

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KEY METRICS
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Explanation of the key activities that


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must be measured

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COMPETITIVE ADVANTAGE
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Explanation of why the


product/service cannot be easily 0-1 2 3 4 4
copied or bought

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CONCLUSION
VALUE EXPECTATIONS EXPECTATIONS EXPECTATIONS SCORE

Specific request for financing,


summary of key points supporting the 0-1 2 3 4 3
financial request

WRITTEN ENTRY TOTAL POINTS (60) 54

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