Revision Questionnaire

a) In doing your revisions, how much and what exactly did you rewrite?

I wrote around 1200 words, I made my arguments and conclusions

b) Why did you change what you changed?

I changed it to make it more arguementative

c) In what ways did the revision improve the paper?

I felt it it makes it more firm and easily understood

d) Do you think your first draft had a thesis? Do you think the second and third drafts do?

yes

e) Quote the sentence which most clearly says what your thesis is and give its location in
terms of paragraph number.

Praragraph 1 “. However, the film has also been the subject of debate regarding its
depiction of caste and its reinforcement of negative stereotypes. Some scholars have
argued that Court perpetuates harmful stereotypes about Dalits and reinforces the caste
system by presenting a world where Dalits are consistently oppressed and victimized.
These critics contend that the film does little to challenge these stereotypes and instead
reinforces them through its portrayal of caste relations. However, while Court may depict
the realities of caste discrimination in India, it also offers a powerful critique of the caste
system and its injustices”
f) Did you find the peer assessment helpful? If so, in what specific ways did it help?

Yes

f) Do you think your paper is focused? Why or why not?

Yes it is focused

g) Look at the first sentences of all your paragraphs. Is there anything that you promise to
talk about that you don’t talk about in the rest of the paragraph? Does your first sentence
prepare the reader for what follows in the paragraph?
Yes it does

h) List the number and location (paragraph number) of examples from the sources that
you have used in the paper in support of your thesis?

Para 5,6

g) What is the title of the paper? What does it mean?

Critiquing Caste-based Discrimination in India through Chaitanya Tamhane's Film

'Court’

i) What is your Conclusion? Do you think it is a strong conclusion?

Yes it is strong conclusion, it says that there is a need to reform caste system in india

j) Do you have page numbers and paragraphs in your revised draft?

yes