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Subject: Employ a freelancer
Dear Mr. Zia (HR Manager) Hope you are doing well! My name is Hadia Afzal and I have been appointed and therefore, working at Visual Designing Company on the position of senior manager. Actually, Now-a-days our company is looking for a tech/computer whiz to hire who can serve with their skills as a freelancer. Basically our company is at the brink of making different projects visible for their clients and consumers. He must be aware of the fact that we urge to improve the already week image of the company in accordance with restructuring the idol systems. Despite of the fact that there are a lot of skilled people working in the organization who are working day in and day out to uplift the image of the organization but the reality is we still are looking forward for someone meeting the above mentioned skill-set and credentials. Your company’s services have been published in the newspaper publicly and I have gone through the advertisement in a newspaper about your company’s services so this email is being written to you. That particular person should be creative, know about visual image developing, logo design, web design, and content development and also have an art to present to clients. Kindly refer some freelancers to our company so that we can schedule an interview with them and further guide them about our company policies. I shall be highly thankful for your cooperation. Thanking you! With best regards, Hadia Afzal (Senior Manager) Business Communication BY Nasir Ullah Khan
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Subject: Employ a freelancer
Dear Mr. Zia (HR Manager), Hope you are doing well! This is Hadia Afzal working as senior manager in visual designing company. Presently, we are looking for the position of freelancer as our company is responsible to engage with some diversified clients. He has courage to uplift the image of company with some unique ideas. However, we have the talented resources with us who work for the strategic achievement of the company but we would appreciate individuals who meet with above mentioned skill-set and credentials. We found your services published on the newspaper that allowed me to write this email to you for the talented pool of individuals who has the well knowledge of visual image developing, logo design, web design, and content development for our client portfolio. Please arrange some endowed individuals for interview and guidance of policy procedure with in our company. Your consideration is highly appreciated. Thanks with regards, Hadia Afzal (Senior Manager)