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Omar Yasser

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Writing Issues
10 Delivery
10 Inappropriate colloquialisms

19 Clarity
4 Intricate text
11 Passive voice misuse
3 Hard-to-read text
1 Wordy sentences

1 Engagement
1 Word choice

4 Correctness
1 Determiner use (a/an/the/this, etc.)
1 Misspelled words
2 Comma misuse within clauses

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Omar Yasser
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Ms. Ola
English
November 21, 2022
The unjust world of 1984
George Orwell once stated, "If you want a picture of the future, imagine a boot
stamping on a human face." Orwell wrote his novel to warn us against the
dangers of a totalitarian world and how it could demolish nations. A bleak world
controlled by total totalitarianism is any society's nightmare; this is what is
displayed in the novel 1984 by George Orwell. An unjust world where people
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cannot even try to fight for their fundamental human rights, a world where your
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mind is imprisoned and manipulated from the day one's born till the day he
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dies. This was evident through his portrayal of propaganda, class division, and
torture.

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The most obvious and striking way to deceive people in the novel is through
propaganda. It was used by the party in order to conceal their corruption and
selfish needs (All Answers Ltd). It leads people to think that the party is on their
side and believe everything the party says (The Use of Propaganda in 1984, by
George Orwell | 123 Help Me). People are working for the party like slaves
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obeying their master, and this is done in various ways; the face of Big Brother

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hanging everywhere to remind people that they are constantly watched; the
slogans of the party that displays the party's obsession with power; the never-
ending ideological wars and their always-changing enemies to keep people
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distracted; the "Two Minute Hate" that is used to stir up the anger of the people
against a non-existent enemy; the constant monitoring of the people through
telescreens and denying them of their privacy to ban any conspiracy; the
mistrusting and loveless relationship built between family members from a
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young age to ensure no feelings are built; and the control of history and events
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happening to keep people in the dark. All these events clearly illustrate how
propaganda is a deadly method used by the party to have total power over
people's minds and souls. Furthermore, the problem is that the party uses
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these very absurd methods, but most people do not even realize how badly they
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are living and that they are brainwashed.

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The class division exists in nearly all societies, even if we fail to see or believe
it. It separates people and creates a boundary between them. It makes people
look down on each other even if it was not their intention. This theme is
demonstrated in the novel and causes Winston, the main character in the story,
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to rebel against the party. The society in the novel is divided into Big Brother as
the leader of Oceania and the one whom people's loyalties should be toward;
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inner party members, the upper-class who make up only 2% of the population,
and are the ones who have power and control over the nation; outer party,
middle class who work for the inner class; and the proles, the lower class, who
make up the majority of the population, and they are uneducated and not cared
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for (StudyMoose).
Moreover, this division shows the unjust world and extreme conditions that the
outer party members and proles live in; even though they work and do their

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jobs, they are treated very differently. They are given the worst kind of food,
clothes, and shelter compared to the inner party members who enjoy privileges
they never share (Orwell). Even though party members always complete their
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work, some are rebels at heart and hate how they are treated. As long as this
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division remains and the middle and lower classes are always looked down
upon, the nation will never prosper, and most people will suffer because of the
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distinction from the minority.

One of the most devastating methods to punish a human being is through

torture, whether it is physical or psychological torture (The Theme of Torture in
1984 by George Orwell - 516 Words | Bartleby). Torture causes pain most people
cannot endure; it can break people and lead them insane. This theme was
represented evidently in the novel, and all kinds of torture were used widely
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and during various times. Winston was physically broken because of the torture
used against him by beating, sleep-depriving, and starving him. These methods
weaken his brain drastically, so they could break him mentally by brainwashing
him into believing anything the party says, even if it is not valid, humiliating him
by stripping him of any self of honor or pride he has and making him face his
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worst fear unwillingly. All these methods led him to go insane and lose hope for
the future of humankind (123helpme.com). O'Brien said, "We have beaten you,
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Winston. We have broken you up. We have seen what your body is like. Your
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mind is in the same state. I do not think there can be much pride left in you."
The torture used against Winston shows the unjust system that the party forces
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upon its people and how severely people are punished for having opposite
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though against the system.

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Even though Orwell warned us against the dangers of a totalitarian world, this
kind of government exists today and in several countries. People are suffering
from the greed for power caused by the people in charge, and it does not seem
like it will end soon. People must always stand up for their rights and freedom
and have a say in their government, or else they might face the same fate or
worse.

Citation:
123helpme.com. "Mental and Mental Torture in George Orwell's 1984." 123
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Help Me, April 30 2021, www.123helpme.com/essay/Mental-And-Mental-
Torture-In-George-Orwells-662580.
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All Answers Ltd. Propaganda in George Orwell's 1984. July 29 2022,
www.ukessays.com/essays/english-language/propaganda-on-1984-by-george-
orwell.php.
Orwell, George. 1984. Intra S.r.l.s., 2021.
StudyMoose. "Class Distinctions in George Orwell's 1984 Free Essay Example."
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StudyMoose, November 16 2022, studymoose.com/class-distinctions-in-
george-orwells-1984-essay.
The Theme of Torture in 1984 by George Orwell - 516 Words | Bartleby.
www.bartleby.com/essay/The-Theme-Of-Torture-In-1984-By-FCW7PF8KFV.
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The Use of Propaganda in 1984, by George Orwell | 123 Help Me.
www.123helpme.com/essay/The-Use-Of-Propaganda-In-1984-By-654765.

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1. your Inappropriate Delivery

colloquialisms

2. one's → one is, one has Inappropriate Delivery

colloquialisms

3. This Intricate text Clarity

4. obvious → apparent, evident Word choice Engagement

5. is done Passive voice misuse Clarity

6. are constantly watched Passive voice misuse Clarity

7. is used Passive voice misuse Clarity

8. are built Passive voice misuse Clarity

9. People are working for the party like slaves Hard-to-read text Clarity
obeying their master, and this is done in
various ways; the face of Big Brother hanging
everywhere to remind people that they are
constantly watched; the slogans of the party
that displays the party's obsession with
power; the never-ending ideological wa…

10. very Wordy sentences Clarity

11. are brainwashed Passive voice misuse Clarity

12. The class Determiner use Correctness

(a/an/the/this, etc.)

13. This theme is demonstrated in the novel and Intricate text Clarity
causes Winston, the main character in the
story, to rebel against the party.

14. is divided Passive voice misuse Clarity

15. make up → makeup Misspelled words Correctness

16. The society in the novel is divided into Big Hard-to-read text Clarity
Brother as the leader of Oceania and the one

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whom people's loyalties should be toward;

inner party members, the upper-class who
make up only 2% of the population, and are
the ones who have power and control over the
nation; outer party, middle class who …

17. are treated Passive voice misuse Clarity

18. are treated Passive voice misuse Clarity

19. As long as this division remains and the Intricate text Clarity
middle and lower classes are always looked
down upon, the nation will never prosper, and
most people will suffer because of the
distinction from the minority.

20. are always looked down Passive voice misuse Clarity

21. was physically broken Passive voice misuse Clarity

22. These methods weaken his brain drastically, Hard-to-read text Clarity
so they could break him mentally by
brainwashing him into believing anything the
party says, even if it is not valid, humiliating
him by stripping him of any self of honor or
pride he has and making him face his worst
fear unwillingly.

23. you Inappropriate Delivery

colloquialisms

24. your Inappropriate Delivery

colloquialisms

25. like Inappropriate Delivery

colloquialisms

26. Your Inappropriate Delivery

colloquialisms

27. I Inappropriate Delivery

colloquialisms

28. you Inappropriate Delivery

colloquialisms

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29. The torture used against Winston shows the Intricate text Clarity
unjust system that the party forces upon its
people and how severely people are punished
for having opposite though against the
system.

30. are punished Passive voice misuse Clarity

31. Me Inappropriate Delivery

colloquialisms

32. 29, Comma misuse within Correctness

clauses

33. 16, Comma misuse within Correctness

clauses

34. Me Inappropriate Delivery

colloquialisms

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