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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large
number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the
advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?"

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C12T2
At the present time, the population of some countries
includes a relatively large number of young adults,
compared with the number of older people. Do the
advantages of this situation outweigh the
disadvantages?"
In some nations, the population comprises fewer elderly individuals
than younger ones, which is considered as having both advantages and
downsides. This essay will show that the advantages much exceed the
drawbacks because young people contribute significantly to the country's
economy while not impeding societal growth.

  The most significant advantage here is that young individuals will

assist in the national economy thrive since their youth, inventiveness,
curiosity, and enthusiasm make them a highly productive workforce. For
instance, the period of 2015-2020 of Vietnam is considered as one of the
strongest development periods of the national economy since it has the
golden population rate with young people accounting for more than 30%.
Another important aspect to emphasize is that young people are less of a
burden on society. Since young people have better health and faster
physical recovery, they demand less healthcare services and financial
assistance from the social welfare fund.

  Despite that, some argue that the overpopulation of the younger

generation will burden the job market and raise the unemployment rate of a
country. This essay disapproved this point since other than domestic
companies, there are countless recruiting foreign businesses for the
younger generation to apply for. Đề ra giải pháp thực hiện chứ không kiểu
chỉ tay 5 ngón.

To conclude, while some argue that having a younger generation

outnumbering an older age in many nations is detrimental to recruiting, the
benefits are incalculable. The vast number of youthful generations can
contribute to a better national economy and an unburdened society in the
future.

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Adv and disadv and do you think the adv outweigh the adv

At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults,
compared with the number of older people
It is often argued that the situation have both positive and negative sites. 
This essay will argue that the benefits of the high population of the youth outweigh the drawbacks
because 
The main adv: 
the young boost up national economy development 
 high productive labour force
 great creativity, curiosity and enthusiasm

Another big positive: young people are less of a burden for society
 require less healthcare services
 of Working age --> pay taxes and contribute to the social welfare fund and infrastructure

Despite this, there are some who believe that this would lead to Competitive job market for young
generation

To this this essay would say that A harsh job market requires employees to constantly develop and strive
to meet the needs of society, so this should only be considered a challenge, not a disadvantage.

In conclusion, although some believe that...., the cost to... is too great. They should …
 ESSAY:
In some nations, the population comprises fewer elderly individuals than
younger ones, which is considered as having both advantages and downsides. This
essay will show that the advantages much exceed the drawbacks because young
people contribute significantly to the country's economy while not impeding
societal growth.
The most significant advantage here is that young individuals will assist in
the national economy thrive since their youth, inventiveness, curiosity, and
enthusiasm make them a highly productive workforce. Moreover, young people
will provide fresh, daring ideas that might lead to innovations that will possibly
advance the nation's economy. Another important aspect to emphasize is that
young people are less of a burden on society since they demand less healthcare
services and financial assistance from the social welfare fund. Furthermore,
because they are of working age, they will be taxpayers, contributing to the
national social welfare budget as well as infrastructure.
Despite that, some argue that the overpopulation of the younger generation
will burden recruitment and lead to a competitive job market. Yet, this essay
contends that a harsh job market encourages people to continually improve and
strive to meet the demands of society, and hence this should be viewed as a
challenge rather than a disadvantage.
To conclude, while some argue that having a younger generation
outnumbering an older age in many nations is detrimental to recruiting, the benefits
are incalculable. The vast number of youthful generations can contribute to a better
national economy and an unburdened society in the future.