GLOBAL WARMING

Global warming is one of the biggest threats humans face in the

21st Century, and sea levels are continuing to rise at alarming
rates.
What problems are associated with this and what are some
possible solutions.

Major topic : Global Warming

Minor topic : sea levels & humans

-> Global warming problem that related w/ sea levels and humans = FLOOD

Problem : no place to live / displacement of millions of people

Solution : provide temporary shelter

Problem : people cant go to work / government facilities are broken

Solution : day off

Problem : flooding people’s home and businesses

Solution : build flood barrier

Problem : disease from the flood like malaria

Solution : provide medicine

Intro :
1st
● 1st = rephrasement
○ Climate change is among the principal dangers facing people this century,
and ocean levels are increasing dramatically.
● 2nd = outline sentence
○ This essay will first suggest that the biggest problems caused by this
phenomenon are the loss of land and the flooding of homes and then argue
that pollution reduction and building flood protection are the most optimum
solutions.

Body Par:
2nd (PROBLEM)
● 1st = Mention 1st problem & 2nd problems
○ Global Warming that affects humans gives us problems like displacement of
millions and malaria (lebih baik jd example krn spesifik). (1st Example)
○ The foremost problems caused by climbing sea levels are that land is being
lost and peoples’ residences are often flooded
● 2nd = Explain 1st
○ millions of people worldwide live in coastal areas, and if the sea rises by even
a few feet, they are inundated with water and lose their property.
 ● 3rd = Explain 2nd
○ the water is dirty so malaria mosquitoes hatch their eggs everywhere
● 4th = Example (salah satu)
○ The devastation brought about by this was clear for all to see during the 2011
Tsunami in Japan, in which millions of people were displaced

3rd
●1st = Mention 1st solution & 2nd solutions
○
● 2nd = Explain 1st
● 3rd = Explain 2nd
● 4th = Example
4th (CONCLUSION)
○ To conclude/In conclusion/Overall, stemming the rising tides caused by
increasing global temperatures is one of the foremost challenges we face,
and it will ultimately lead to some countries losing landmass and many of the
world’s cities being left underwater, but possible solutions could be to protect
our environment and to utilise the flood prevention techniques already used
by countries like Holland

EXAMPLE 2
Some people think that teachers should be able to ask disruptive children to leave the
class. Do you think it is the best way to deal with them? What other solutions are
there?

Major topic : Disruptive children

Minor topic : Teachers ask them to leave

Problem : they make another disruptive action outside

Solution : put them in counciling room / give them consultation

P = often caused depression

S = call the student parents, or taught them the importance of being discipline

EXAMPLE 3
Many small local shops are closing as they are unable to compete with the larger
supermarkets in the area. How does this affect local communities? How could this
situation be improved?

Major topic : local shops

Minor topic : unable to compete

Problem : few customers

Solution : More branding and advertisement

Problem : the product is too expensive

Solution : finding the right supplier
Many offenders commit more crimes after serving their first
punishment. Why is this happening and what measures could be
taken to tackle this problem?

Problem : unvaluable punishment

Solution : give suitable type of punishment

Problem : uncured habit or psychological issue

Solution : therapy to the psychologist