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Written by
Sushil Lawaju
Dattatraya, Bhatkapur
9860200848, shusillawaju@gmail.com
FADE IN:
BIMAL
Saala camper...madarchod..bhosidike
aaija 1 vs 1
Yestai khatey haru le garda ho game
bigrine
BIMAL (CONT’D)
La arko match suru gardai gar, ma
yek mut hanera aauxu
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MOTHER
Jailey bahira matra ghar ma k vaira
kei ko wasta xa..
Kailey ko..kailey ko...kaile ko
sathi ..kaile tyo nakchari
sanga...malai tha hudaina
vanthanya..
2.
Hearing the word nakchari ,he looses his temper and shout at
her.
FATHER
Feri ka bata kt ko kura aayo..kati
vanne office ko staff ho vanera
FATHER (CONT’D)
Tyo kt ko kura nikalne haina
hai...aile yei glass le handinxu..
K pura garena maile yo ghar ma..gas
kindekai xu,chamal kindekai xu
MOTHER
Aba aayera gas kindina vayo? Mero
lagi kindeko..ma yeklai le khana
khanxu yo ghar ma? Tmlai ta tei kt
sanga mitho mitho khaye pugi halxa
ni
FATHER
Ajha karauxas.
BIMAL
Tyo raksi ko taal ma kina
hero..haat kina chalaunu parne
MOTHER
Pitnu...pitnu...kina Pitne matra,
mari diye ni hunthyo.
Father doesn’t give damn to bimal instead shout at mother and
push her chair with his legs. Mother fall down in floor.
FATHER
Royera dekhayera xora lai ni saath
ma liyeu haina
BIMAL
(in rage)
Nachalnu vanya basnu tya khurukka
3.
FATHER
Tw chai kina hero ni
Bimal too get pissed off by getting slap from father. So, now
he pushed his father hardly and raise his hand to beat.
BIMAL
Raksi ko taal ma nakaraune
Father gets on floor now. Bimal just raise his hand but
stopped quickly.
MOTHER (O.S.)
(cring)
Babu...xoda ...pitnu hunna..baba
lai pitnu hunna...nagara yesto kaam
BIMAL
Wulle chai pitnu hune..hamle chai
nahune
FATHER
Aaja aayera tw haat uthana sakne
vaisakis.
Yekjana matra santan vaye pugxa
vanera arko santan janmaune soch
pani rakhne..aba aaja aayera tei
yeuta chora ko ni kutai khanu parne
din aayo...aba yo sansar ma mero
koi ni xaina vanera bujheni
vayo...ma mare ni vayo aaba
Hearing such words from father, Bimal’s anger gets down too.
He don’t have any words to say. He is just starring at his
father as an statue.
CUT TO:
4.
Father rinse his face with water and get out from there. He
walks towards his room.
Bimal come out of his room, take 3,4 steps to follow him to
his room but seeing bimal, mother give a signal to stop and
go to his room.
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Bimal enters his room and sits in his bed. He didn’t close
his door neither he hears the closing sound of door of his
parents room.
BIMAL (V.O.)
Sano huda kheri ti aaula samatdai
hidthye ma, tara aaja khai k vayo
kunni aafnai aaula uchalna badhye
vayexu , sayed paristhiti nai
yestai vayo ki paristhiti lai
bujhna sakina maile, yek hisab ma
yeuta bhul garexu maile ki buba
mathi jawaf farkaye , yeuta sano
kura ma aaula dekhaye, aba feri ti
aaula kasari samatau ma, jun
hatkela mero mukh variyo anna le ti
mukh le kasari vannu ki buba malai
maaf garideu ma bata bhul vayo.
BEGINS FLASHBACK:
6. Mother crying.
ENDS FLASHBACK:
As the voice over ends, we see Bimal eyes with full of tears.
A drop of tear shed from his eye with which his pillow gets
wet.
CUT TO BLACK.
6.
BIMAL
(in loud)
Ba..
BIMAL (CONT’D)
Ba...patrika
BIMAL (CONT’D)
Baba khai...aaunu va xaina aile
samma
MOTHER
Aako xaina..aaja khai kata
gayo..aru bela vaye agi nai aaune
time vaisakyo morning walk bata
Bimal stays quiet for while and ask mother money to buy
recharge for him.
BIMAL
100 rs dinu ta...recharge card
kinnu paryo
Mother is facing backward. She lows the power of gas and take
out money from her pocket and starts counting the money 10,
20, 50.
MOTHER
Hijo nakarau vanya haina tmlai..
MOTHER (CONT’D)
Pugena ma sanga...baba aayesi maga
BIMAL
Hyaa dinu na xito
MOTHER
J vayeni tmro baba ho..gaali
gareni, piteni chup lagera basnu
parthyo
At the same time father enters from the door. Seeing father,
Bimal keep quiet and go from there without taking money.
CUT TO:
CUT TO:
BIMAL
Niski sakey k ma...pugna lagyo
BIMAL (CONT’D)
(in low voice)
Lala 5 min ma pugxu aba
Bimal ends the call and go near the door to wear shoe. He
doesn’t face father and go like he doesn’t see him.
BIMAL (CONT’D)
Mumy....500 Rs dinu ta
MOTHER (O.S.)
Xaina..agi nai xaina vanya haina
talai
FATHER
Ka jana la?
BIMAL
(in low voice)
Swimming
After this, father takes out wallet and put money in the
table. He make a sound on table indicating Bimal to take that
money.
FADE OUT.