As we know that differences in religion, culture, language even skin colour are

referred to diversity, but now I will talk from different points of view...
Hi I’m Cok Diah Pradnya Parameswari from SMAN 6 DENPASAR .
One of the first things that I noticed, people have only seen and debated differences in religion,
culture, language, and skin colour at all times. But what about people who have different
disabilities in terms of their physical appearance or social-emotional disabilities. We should be
aware that we must acknowledge their differences as you would acknowledge anyone else
uniqueness and support their strength points. Do not talk to them literally and figuratively. The
number of people with disabilities in Indonesia reaches more than one million people. Have you
ever thought about how to be them? That’s why we have to increase our respect for them. First of
all, for my friends around the world with disabilities I just want you to know that being different
is not your mistake. You have to start thinking that you are more than what you thought. I was
beginning to understand that for some people it takes courage and time to show a respect. The
point is that respecting diversity is not just about respect for different religions and cultures but
also for people with disabilities, because people with disabilities feel they are left behind. And
through this speech, I have a mission to make sure everyone can access the same opportunities,
and why respect for diversity is important, because when you respect other people's differences
you demonstrate that you understand not everybody lives according to their views and experiences.
Guys, if we respect each other, we will be in line with our slogan Bhineka
Tunggal Ika.

NB:
Hi cokdi! ^^
1. You may change the red one into “special needs” it is better bcs we respect them rather
than “disabilities” don’t you think so?
2. If you agree with number 1, please delete the green word as well
3. I put blue on the words “acknowledge”, bcs in my POV is better to use
“appreciate” but its okay if your purpose is for “mengakui” rather than “ menghargai”
4. I changed some sentences and did corrections on your writing, you may compare it if you
don’t agree with this yaa..
5. Lemme know if there’s something left. Good luck!