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A DISCOURSE ANALYSIS
An Undergraduate Thesis
Presented to the Faculty of the College of Teachers Education
University of Mindanao
Davao City
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In Partial Fulfillment
of the Requirements in Language Education Research 2
(ELT 412 – 4166)
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December 2021
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ABSTRACT
This study aimed to describe the linguistic make-up of the utterances taken from
the 100 feedback done by the teachers in the LMS (Learning Management
System). Through discourse analysis, not only that the politeness linguistic
structures and their associated politeness maxims were unraveled but also the
associated politeness strategies of the maxims. The former involved the following:
politeness marker involved sympathy and tact maxim; playdown involved tact and
agreement maxim; and playdown, and committers involved tact maxim; on the
other hand, sympathy, approbation, and tact maxim involved positive politeness
strategy. In addition, tact maxim also involved bald on-record and off-record
strategy. This study revealed the importance of considering the linguistic structure
feedback being delivered by the teacher in online learning varies on how students
interpret the message of the feedback. The structure of the teachers' feedback
maxims and existing politeness strategies, does not solely contribute to the intent
of the feedback but rather to how the students understood it since these existing
factors and as well as the outside factors concerning the use of the language varies
from culture to culture. One culture may accept the message as polite, but the
PANEL MEMBERS
ACKNOWLEDGEMENT
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The researchers would like to express their appreciation and thanks tothese
Christian Jay O. Syting, our research adviser, for his priceless input and advice
The panel members, Dr. Elleine Rose A.Oliva, and Prof. PhyllJhan E. Gildore,
for their insightful feedback and constructive criticisms, which improved the quality
of this study;
We also want to express our appreciation and gratitude for the participation
and responsiveness of the college students who responded to our need for data for this
research;
Our family and friends for their support and motivation throughout our research
endeavor;
And above all, to the Lord Almighty, the source of knowledge and wisdom,
we thank Him for all the blessings He showered upon us for the success of this study,
most especially the grace of peace and healthy mind and body.
TABLE OF CONTENTS
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Title Page i
Abstract ii
Endorsement Sheet for thesis outline defense iii
Acknowledgement iv
Table of Contents v
List of Tables vii
CHAPTER Page
1 INTRODUCTION 1
Rationale 1
Purpose of the Study 2
Research Questions 2
Theoretical Lens 3
Significance of the Study 6
Definition of Terms 7
Delimitations and Limitation 7
Organization of the study 8
2 REVIEW OF RELATED LITERATURE 10
Politeness 9
Politeness Linguistic Structure 13
Politeness Maxim 16
3 METHODOLOGY 25
Research Design 25
Role of the Researcher 26
Research Materials and Participants 27
Data Collection 27
Data Analysis 28
Trustworthiness of the Study 28
Ethical Considerations 30
4 RESULTS 33
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LIST OF TABLES
Table Page
1 Politeness Linguistic Structure
in Teachers’ Feedback 34
2 Politeness Maxims
in Teachers Feedback 52
3 Politeness Strategies
in Teachers’ Feedback 53
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CHAPTER 1
INTRODUCTION
Rationale
Many academic institutions have shifted from the traditional pedagogical
approach to the online teaching. Several forms of communication are done by the
teachers online. One of them is giving feedback, which is present in almost all the
that the teachers seem to have been struggling to find a good way of delivering
feedback. Some of the struggles they encountered are; how their ways of
and seeking the most efficient strategy to deliver their feedback best. As supported in
Hamid and Romly (2020) study, students prefer explicit feedback rather than implicit
feedback. It simply suggests that more detailed and direct feedback is more effective
than any other form of structuring feedback. In addition, an explicit feedback can only
that can be influenced by how teachers communicate with the students. Without a
doubt, such problems in the classroom may lead to a phenomenon affecting classroom
interaction.
steps in developing interaction between the teacher and students. As stated by Hanum
of their interaction. Through that, the gap between teachers and students will be filled,
thus enabling the instruction to reach its target. Communicating with the students
starts with using a significant tone of voice, as well as the mood of the phrase or
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sentence up to choosing the best words, trying not to offend the students or make
them think that the teacher is someone they can interact with without a feeling of any
discomfort. That is why being careful and wary of what to say is a must-have habit for
teachers. With the online mode of learning, they should be most wary of the structure
communicating with the students has the most significant influence on classroom
reaction from the students, which generally happens in a classroom. This has caused
teachers to find the most suitable and effective method of communicating with the
Febriansyah and Anam (2020) mentioned in their study how teachers' are
becoming more careful in communicating with the student. In that event, it even leads
them to a path of seeking the best, suitable strategy they can incorporate in their way
most efficient methods to incorporate the teachers' feedback is the Politeness Strategy
by Brown and Levinson (1978). Zhang (2009) claimed that classroom interaction
should be practical and polite. It is general knowledge that teachers' duties include
providing critical feedback that should not threaten students' positive and negative
faces.
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teachers towards the learners. Moreover, receiving the information in the feedback
could be used to achieve their best potential in the learning process. However, we
cannot deny that there are feedback misconceptions when it is delivered. In addition,
there are mismatches between the perceived quantity of feedback and adverse
feedback, wherein students often receive insufficient feedback whereas educators give
digitally, considering the means of communication we have right now. This study will
Students who receive effective feedback can achieve improving learning outcomes
and are intrinsically involved in the task, not just thinking of complying with the task.
With the necessary politeness strategies a teacher can use in giving feedback, this will
move a great understanding and success of the learners to be fully equipped with the
acknowledge specific strategies varying in teaching methods, and the most influential
one is language theories such as the politeness strategies by Brown and Levinson
(1978). One of the significant reasons is how the politeness strategy identifies
such as positive and negative politeness give various approaches to the linguistic
structure of the feedback and how it intends to be understood by the students. On the
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other hand, even with the politeness strategy, students still impose different reactions
Even though there are many studies about politeness strategies, we have not
more on face-to-face class situations. According to Widiadnya et al. (2018), there are
learners as politeness creates an efficient teaching and learning process and respected
communication between teachers and learners. At the same time, the cooperation and
interaction of the learners and teachers were found to improve, developing motivation
for the learners and meaningful teaching throughout the learning process. In addition,
teacher language is crucial not only for monitoring the students and classroom
(Fortinasari & Asmara, 2019). More so, the cited studies concern with politeness
strategies in giving feedback. However, the cited studies and researchers' study
creates a gap where researchers explore more politeness strategies in giving students
feedback in blended learning or in an online learning setting in the new normal. Thus,
this study can be used as a future reference for the teachers and administrators in
This study aims to unravel the possible politeness strategies teachers use in
giving feedback to students in an online class setting. More specifically, this study
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will elicit the politeness linguistic structure contained by the teachers' feedback and
Research Questions
2. What are the politeness maxims present in the teachers’ feedback based on the
politeness linguistic structure found?
3. What politeness strategies are present in the teachers' feedback based on the
maxims found?
This study made the following significant inputs to awareness and education
with the sudden transition of the education system due to the challenges in learning
brought by the pandemic globally. More so, this research is an attempt to enhance the
during asynchronous and online learning settings. Thus, the results benefit the
country. With this, the data collected are credible as a reference to the education
politeness strategies integrated with an online setting. Furthermore, there are no local
investigations concerning the same inquiry that have been reported that will help
This study could be used by future researchers who wish to study the same
determining other factors contributing to classroom interaction. There are other ways
teachers and students communicate not just through feedback; they can study those
conducting their study. They can also conduct the study in a different setup to
Lastly, the study is deemed beneficial to students and teachers as the direct
beneficiaries of the study. The data gathered in this study would allow the students to
determine the teacher’s politeness in delivering feedback online. The result would
also allow the educators to improve the means of providing positive and negative
feedback to the students during the online instructional learning process. Hence,
educators may be able to create new strategies that would meet the learner's needs
Theoretical Lens
in 1978. Although widely recognized in the literature, it is a theory that has generated
image of the interlocutor. The word "negative politeness" can also be conveyed in two
advice and disapproval; or 2) satisfying a "negative face" by regard for the rights to
not be enforced by the addressee (Bunker, 2014). At this stage, the definition of
Brown and Levinson's politeness theory will allow researchers to effectively identify
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and interpret the meaning derived from analyzing the practical means of giving
for applying politeness enable investigators to broaden the scope of the data gathered
while lessening the biases. Furthermore, applying the theory in this study provides a
concrete guide for researchers to successfully determine the practical means of giving
CHAPTER 2
METHODOLOGY
gathering, perception of data, and presentation of data. It served as a guide for the
researchers to come up with a result for their study. In addition, this chapter has also
discussed how they could come up with these specific methods and data gathering to
Research Design
will use texts as your data. Instead of using statistical data, you used these words or
texts to unravel the central phenomenon of the study. Using an appropriate text data
analysis with your data can result in a description of individual people or places. Text
Harris (1954) as cited by Kamalu and Osisanwo (2015), is an analysis method used to
beyond the limit of a simple sentence at a specific moment of time. In the meantime,
language scholars have found it challenging to come up with an easier way to define
Discourse analysis analyzes the elements of a text, phrased and sentenced that
contributed to its meaning. In this study, the researchers were able to unravel the
House and Kasper (1981) and Leech's (1983) politeness maxims. The politeness
linguistic structure and politeness maxims were the basis of this corpus-driven study.
wherein the collected linguistic data, known as the corpus, will then be extracted to
The researchers chose the study due to the curiosity if the students' academic
performance in the new standard setting was also affected by their teachers'
interaction with them. Most of the study was based on how the new educational
system affected one's learning process. The researchers found it interesting to study a
particular aspect of linguistics in teaching since the researchers are majoring in the
teaching profession. The fact that there is a potential discovery for the study that
could benefit others who are also majoring in the teaching profession makes it more
like something to consider. As the researchers saw it, the potential discovery from the
future data can lead to new learning for them in terms of linguistic approach.
We are unlikely to pay attention to those small details in the learning process.
It puzzled the mind of the researchers if there were any possible relations or patterns
that a teacher used in their way of speaking or communicating with the student to
produce an interactive rapport between the teachers' and students' sides. The
researchers have analyzed the screenshots of the teacher's feedback using the
politeness theory framework. In collecting data, the researchers have respected the
has helped the researchers easily break down each feedback's context. In the data
Research Materials
The study focused on the words, texts, phrases, and sentences found in the
teacher's feedback in the LMS that served as the corpora. The linguistic corpora for
this study are the 100 feedback from the Blackboard LMS. The study used the
Blackboard LMS since most of the interaction takes place on that platform and the
The criteria in choosing the 100 feedback are based on purely text feedback
with linguistic structure. Any feedback in the LMS that showed only number scoring
was not viable data. Also, feedback that contained less than two words does not
qualify as data for this study since examining those feedback is meaningless and is
limited to a single interpretation. In summary, only pure text and those with linguistic
Data Collection
In this part, the researcher thoroughly presented how they collected the data
needed for this study. It followed a 3-steps procedure. The researchers respected the
confidentiality of collecting the data through the LMS of the private university where
the study was conducted. This is by Republic Act 10173 or the Data Privacy Act of
The first step of data collection begins with the construction of a letter. A
letter of consent has been presented to each targeted individual or, in this case, the
students. The letter consists of the aim and goal of the researchers upon conducting
the study. In addition, the researchers highly respected the students' privacy willing to
help the researchers gather the linguistic data. The second step was the actual
collection of linguistic data. The linguistic data are the 100 feedback that came from
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10 different teachers. That would be ten commentary notes or feedback each from 10
different teachers. To collect the linguistic data, the researchers have directly
collected the data through the LMS of the private university. In addition, the students
who agreed to help the researchers to gather the needed linguistic data have sent a
copy of feedback from the teachers, which also came from their respective LMS
accounts. The students have sent a copy of the feedback in every communication
medium. The third and final step is the extraction of linguistic data. The linguistic
data has been placed in a separate folder. The linguistic data was saved in a
Data Analysis
The study gathered the corpus and then separated those corpora with
politeness elements that have been analyzed as discourse analysis. The process of data
analysis in this study has used the framework of Meadow's and Morse's (2001)
The first step was identifying the feedback with politeness linguistic structure
using House and Kasper's taxonomy on politeness. After that, those feedbacks with
politeness linguistic structure would be put in a separate file. The second step is where
the politeness maxims are identified from the feedback with a politeness structure. To
identify its maxims, there are two vital steps to be included: [1] the politeness
structure in each feedback is analyzed to determine their illocutionary forces; and [2]
the illocutionary forces were then analyzed to determine the politeness maxims used.
The analysis was based on the entire message to which the said politeness structure
was extracted.
In conducting the analysis, the researchers made sure to carefully read and
review the feedback to extract the message of the feedback. The politeness messages
within the feedback were perceived based on the structure that was given by the
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teachers and what illocutionary forces were carried out. Furthermore, the feedback is
of the study answers all the possible questions and efficacy of the research finding,
cite Lincoln and Guba's (1985) Four Evaluative Criteria that were followed
throughout the whole conduct of this study. The Four Evaluative Criteria are;
the findings 'truth' of the findings. Korstjens & Moser (2018) also mentioned in their
study that there are specific strategies to state the credibility of the research finding
observation. However, since the study would only use linguistic data and is
unnecessarily needed to conduct an interview, the only way to prove the credibility of
this study is to collect the linguistic data only from the LMS of the private university
the raw data coming from the respondents (Lincoln and Guba, 1985). The findings of
this study were solely based on the raw data, the linguistic data or the teacher's
feedback. The theories and frameworks were only used as the foundation of the study
and have never affected the linguistic data. In addition, the analysis of the linguistic
data is solely based on the data themselves, which means that what is only present in
the linguistic data are the data that will be used in the presentation of the future
results. In the assurance of the conformability of the study, the researchers provided a
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copy of how the data were extracted starting from the raw data and the process of
concept of showcasing how the research or study can apply to others who might be
interested in the study and the application of the study to another context. The
description," A specified description of how the research was conducted, which will
enable other readers or researchers to identify whether the study applies to their
setting (Korstjens & Moser, 2018). Under this criterion, the researchers have provided
a thick description of the methodology and processes of the study. It contains all the
necessary information of the study, which will give readers and other researchers the
grasp of this study for them to use for their future references.
of the research findings over time, just like its consistency and stability. Dependability
has a strategy called Audit Trail. According to Sim & Sharp (2010), as cited by
Korstjens and Moser (2018), Audit Trail is a transparency state describing the
research steps taken from the beginning up to the development of the study and the
reporting of the results. In this study, the researchers ensured a clear description of the
research conduct and how they could come up with the findings. Furthermore, the
researchers strictly followed the methods and frameworks adopted in this study.
conducted the research thoroughly considering the following ethics in conducting the
study.
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letter of consent to the participants containing the research purpose, benefits them as
the participants, and the confidentiality of the conduct of the study. A letter that is
the study.
the participant in the consent letter is asked to ensure that the participant has
understood the researchers' goal as to why they were conducting the study and asking
them as the participants. Also, the signature will prove that there was no form of force
Privacy Act of 2012. All the data from the participants are strictly exclusive between
the researchers and the participants. Other parties are restricted by the researchers
Justice. To ensure the justice of the research, the researchers did not use other
linguistic data aside from the linguistic data they gathered from the LMS of the
private university where the study was conducted. The result of the study has
benefitted both the students and teachers. Notably, the students can understand how
the feedback was given to them by the teachers. This study helped the teachers
identify how the students perceive their interactions with their students.
study, the researchers ensured that the participants would not be put in a position
where they would harm the conduct of this research. Participants are also free to
withdraw their participation in the study as they may do so. Furthermore, the
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researchers ensure that the guaranteed benefit of the participants is granted to them,
and may they wish to have a copy of this study will also be granted by the researchers.
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CHAPTER 4
This chapter discusses the findings on the politeness strategies found in the
100 feedbacks by the teachers to their students during the online class. The order of
presentation is the same as how the research questions are presented in chapter 1.
One of these strategies is the framework of Brown and Levinsons' (1978) Politeness
ideas, responding, and giving feedback. In this study, the concept of politeness
strategy was used to determine the types of politeness strategies used by the teachers
flows well in the classroom, it most likely comes to a mutual understanding between
the teacher and the student (Manik et al., 2015). AWhen it comes to their profession, a
teacher is granted the access to criticize students' academic efforts and give feedback,
which probably displays threat among the student, positive and negative face
illocutionary force depending on its context. The following are Approbation Maxim,
Sympathy Maxim, Tact Maxim, and Agreement Maxim. Finally, the politeness
maxims that have emerged were associated with politeness strategies. These
Table 1
Politeness Linguistic Structure’s in Teachers’ Feedback
markers. In this study, politeness markers are used in the following feedback:
In the first utterance, the phrase " thanks " or " thank you " is evident. This is
one of the politeness markers that signal the speakers to have something to be great
for. As evident in the feedback, it can be seen that the teacher wanted to show them
being grateful for the student's point. The teacher directly compliments the student for
having a good point and thanking the student who sounded polite to the teacher.
Observing the second utterance began with the phrase. Please, which is evidence for a
politeness marker. In the feedback, the teacher started the utterance with Please to
sound polite and implied immediately/her concern. Directly stating the concern can be
seen as rude, and the feedback will not appear rude in the locution. The use of this
The teachers used these phrases to lessen the degree of imposition on the
addressee (Watts, 2003). According to the taxonomy by House and Kasper (1981), the
phrase "please" portrays politeness markers as this phrase expresses the need for
interlocutors' cooperation. This proves that using the phrase "please" in the teachers'
feedback is intended to ask for the student's cooperation with politeness. In the
context of this study, the teacher used the phrase "please" at the beginning of the
utterance. This implies how the teacher politely asks the students to use their
Mindanao accounts so that they can access the given link. Additionally, as Sajedeh et
al. (2013), using the taxonomy of House and Kasper (1981) state that the most
deference to the addressee, other phrases such as, if you wouldn’t/don’t mind, is also
an example of politeness markers as long as the utterance seeks and bids for
cooperative behavior.
Playdown. This politeness structure is used when the speaker intends to lower
the level of perlocutionary force, making the utterance sound less imposing. It is
divided into four categories according to the tense used, which could be in the past,
present, or future, and the fourth is by the use of an interrogative manner. This
Shown above are the utterances using playdowns. In those feedbacks, words
such as It would have are found in utterances, which help give the effect of the
utterances to bear lesser perlocutionary force. In the first utterance that uses
playdowns, the teachers used the phrase It would, which is a common phrase to use
when one wishes the idea to be heard without too much enforcement on the influence
of persuading. Employing the phrase would help tone down the intended pressure of
imposition upon the listener (student), making the student rely upon their decision as
to whether or not to agree with the given recommendation. The second utterance used
clearly shown above. Thus, it could be seen in the second utterance how the teacher
highly agreed with the student's activity. More so, the teacher politely gives their
acceptance concerning the student's work. The third utterance used the phrase I am
could be seen in the utterance that the teacher asked for more narrative from the
student. Thus, teachers' favor for more narratives was asked politely.
The phrases "it would have" and "I am hoping" represent the use of past tense
phrases as part of the five subcategories when one intends to lower the perlocutionary
effect of the utterance. House and Kasper(1981) divided the use of playdown into five
subcategories these are; use of the past tense (I wondered if . . . , I thought you might .
. .), progressive aspect together with past tense (I was wondering whether . . . , I
thought you might . . .), an interrogative containing a modal verb (would it be a good
The use of play down in the teachers' feedback is represented by the phrase "it
would have" as the teacher lessens the effect of convincing the student into making
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the output into a more desirable outcome by maximizing the blank spaces for the
wherein the utterance is used to avoid any commitment to offense and emphasize
friendliness. On the other hand, the phrase "I am hoping" falls into the first
subcategory of playdown as the teacher uses the past tense in delivering the feedback.
In this context, the teacher implies a convincing effect which was lessened with the
phrase "I am hoping ."The teacher convinces the student to make more good narrative
commitment to an utterance. In the politeness strategies data gathered, below are the
In the first utterance, the use of I believe is seen in the above utterances. This
shows that the feedback used committers as its politeness linguistic structure.
Furthermore, teachers provide certainty about the accessibility of the said topic.
Committer comes into play in the said utterance as it tries to correct the student
reasonably. The second utterance uses the phrase, I think; in this utterance, it can be
implied that the student could have done better if they repeated the song once more.
Politeness, in this context, is seen when the teacher tries to suggest a task to make it
better.
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The use of committers in the teachers' feedback is evident in the phrases "I
believe" and "I think ."These phrases lower the commitment to the utterances'
propositional content. The teacher uses these phrases to impose a lesser commitment
of the suggestion to the student and have the student independently decide on how to
In this study, the teachers' feedback uses the phrase "I believe" about the
students' content as to what it means. On the other hand, the phrase "I think" was used
taxonomy of House and Kasper (1981), phrases such as I think, I believe, I guess, in
maxims followed. Students used the agreement maxim, sympathy maxim, and tact
maxim. In this study, the framework of Leech's (1983) politeness maxims was used to
determine the politeness maxims of each utterance after providing the politeness
linguistic structure each utterance contains. Cutting (2002: 49-50) cites that Leechs'
modesty, agreement, and sympathy. The maxims mentioned above are dependent on
culture to culture. It is believed that what may seem acceptable and polite to one's
culture may be opposite to the other culture. After determining the politeness structure
in the teacher's feedback, several maxims were indicated: Sympathy, Tact, and
Agreement Maxims.
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Table 2
Politeness Maxims in Teachers’ Feedback
Politeness Illocutionary Politeness Utterances
Maxims Force Linguistic
Structure
Sympathy Maxim Informing Politeness Marker I understand, take
it next week.
[PLS:TF3]
between and reinforces emotional sensitivity amongst self and others. The sympathy
shown below:
In this utterance, it can be seen that it uses the illocutionary force informing. Thus, the
feedback of the teachers shows understanding and consideration with regard to the
student's situation. Moreover, it only shows the politeness of the teacher in giving
the self and others and minimize antipathy between the self and others. As supported
by Manik et al. (2015), the sympathy maxim considers the expression of sympathy
imposes politeness, and the expression of antipathy is considered impolite and rude
and imposes one not having proper manners. In this study, the utterance "I
understand, take it next week." falls under the sympathy maxim. This is because the
phrase "I understand" imposes sympathy on the student. In this context, the teacher
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expresses their understanding of why the student was not able to do the deed in the
given time hence the use of the phrase "take it next week."
his data that the teachers have more grasp of how such maxims work as they agree to
use sympathy in their conversation rather than the students being neutral about using
the said maxim. The reason is that the teachers acknowledge their duties and
responsibilities to the students as Leech (2014) mentioned that sharing the feelings of
emotive concern to the hearer which makes the speaker gives higher value to the
hearer.
Tact Maxim. This maxim on politeness is where the speaker directly presents
their order or request without revealing much nuisance. It reduces the expression of
self-benefit and increases the display of benefit to the utterer. The tact maxim
involves participants minimizing the apparent cost to them and exploiting the benefit
The first utterance under tact maxim displays the illocutionary force of
request. Here, the teacher asks the cooperation of their students to use their personal
email accounts in the said university when the students are going to access the google
link. In addition, with the use of polite manner and tact maxim, the teacher was able
to deliver the intention, which reached the student to use the said email. The second
utterance uses the illocutionary force advising. The teacher gave their feedback by
adding some tips on how to improve the students' input for the next activity and how
the students will enhance the readability of their activity. This only shows the tact
maxim where the student was able to receive the feedback with politeness at the same
time unlocking new strategies. The third utterance holds the illocutionary informing.
In this sense, it could be implied the teachers' politeness through letting the students
receive the feedback of the facilitator to hear more about their future masterpieces.
Telling the student to hear more from her only highlighted the idea that she has
excellent work. More so, it only shows the teacher's politeness in giving feedback.
The last utterance uses the illocutionary force advising. In this utterance, it implies
that the teacher gives their feedback by suggesting what to do in the students'
performance which is evident of a tact maxim in which the student receives feedback
in a polite manner.
The expression of a belief that may cost the hearer should be minimized, and
considerate. In this study, the phrase "Please," "It would have been," and “I am
hoping” in the context of the utterance in which they are used imposes the thought of
being tactful. The table where those utterances belong in the tact maxim displays how
the teacher maximizes the belief they consider right is being expressed to the student
in order for the student to benefit from it. The utterance “Please use your umindanao
email to accounts to access the google meet link” was expressed in lieu of the
students getting some confusion on how they can access the given google meet; with
the use of the phrase, the teacher politely instructed the students to use their university
email in order to access the link. The phrase "It would have been better if you
maximize the blank spaces by enlarging the infographic. You know readability".
Imposes the concern of the teacher on the students' output. As the teacher pointed out
how the students can make their output better, this implies an indirect message that
the student should adhere to the suggestion the next time the student will make a
similar output. The last phrase, "I am hoping for more good narratives from you next
time." is also an indirect message that implies the student to make a better narrative
output for next time. By being able to avoid the imposition of a face-threatening act
on the students, the teacher was able to indirectly suggest to the student to be better
Moreover, in the study of Manik and Hutagaol (2015) as their data shows how
tact maxims are dominantly present in the teachers' discourse. The teachers' use of
tact maxims is evident when they indirectly command or request the students, which
shows how the teachers minimize their benefit from commanding and requesting the
student through tact maxim. The reason is that there are phrases when being expressed
indirectly that show more politeness than being expressed directly. In which the
utterances of the teachers directly show how the teacher minimizes its benefit and
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maximizes the students' benefit using indirect speech or, in this case, the illocutionary
forces.
between the speaker and listener. When this maxim is observed, the speaker will
employ strategies that would aid them in achieving mutual understanding with the one
they are speaking with. In this study, the utterance under the teacher's feedback is
shown below:
The illocutionary force that can be seen in this utterance is informing. The
teacher was able to deliver the feedback to be in accord with the student's opinion
with regard to the specific subject. Thus, this only shows that there is a mutual
understanding between the teacher and the particular student. Along with that, there is
The speaker had to minimize the expression of disagreement to the hearer, and
the expression of the agreement should be maximized by the speaker to the hearer.
This connects to the positive politeness of Brown and Levinson "avoid disagreement,
seek agreement." In this study, an utterance displays this attribute. The utterance "I
couldn't agree more, Ms. R! " is an example of an agreement maxim simply because
of the use of the phrase "agree ."In this context, the teacher states that the thought of
the student compliments the thought of the teacher, which results in the agreement
value the interest, needs, and ideas of the students by agreeing. In fact, it is very
evident that most of the time, the teachers and students agree with each other in order
to avoid rudeness and impoliteness. By also valuing the student's interest in the means
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understanding in terms of the subject that they are studying. In addition, Manik and
Hutagaol (2015) express the same thought as the teachers adhere to their utterances
with agreement speech acts. They are able to produce mutual understanding when
Based on the discourse analysis conducted, which is shown in table three (3),
there were a number of politeness strategies discovered in the teachers' feedback. The
following politeness strategies that were found are; positive politeness strategies
negative face, and off-record-strategy negative face. There are several politeness
Levinson (1987) pointed out that the functions of these strategies are to save the
"face" of the hearer. In this context, the "face" means certain respect that someone
gives to themselves. This also strengthens self-esteem in private and public situations.
It is more of not getting a person into embarrassment. Upon conducting the study,
there were four politeness strategies discovered in the teacher's feedback. These are
Table 3
Politeness Strategies in Teacher’s Feedback
Positive
Politeness
Strategy
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Bald On-Record
Strategy Tact Maxim Informing Committers
the hearer's positive face. It aims to address the positive face needs of the hearer and
highlights friendliness and camaraderie between the speaker and hearer. This is
you observe, the teacher expresses their understanding with regard to the students'
concerns. Thus, the manner that the teacher addresses will be a cue to the students that
they may take the activity as they receive positive feedback. In the second utterance, it
is evident that the illocutionary force being observed is thanking. As you can observe,
the teacher expressed gratitude and enjoyment in the statement. In this manner, the
student will become motivated to enhance their writing skills as they were able to
order to disregard sending a message that could offend the hearer's face (Brown and
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Levinson, 1987). In connection, strategies using unique discourse markers such as the
this study, the data gathered shows the utterance "please" in the teachers' feedback
compliments the use of positive politeness. The context of the utterance is that the
teacher as the speaker tries not to embarrass the students; supported by Yuka (2009)
that on a regular basis of communication, the speaker selects strategies that are
appropriate in order to save the hearer's face, thus simply making the usage of positive
politeness in an utterance important. The same goes with the utterance "I understand,
take it next week." which shares the same thought as with the first utterance; however,
in this context, the speaker tries to build common ground with the hearer through
understanding the situation of the student. The phrase "I couldn't agree more, Ms. R!"
displays an example of using nicknames as Brown and Levinson (1987) states that the
following strategies imply positive politeness these are juxtaposing criticism with
tag questions, unique discourse markers (please), and in-group jargon and slang. In
addition, the study of Anam and Febriansyah (2020) concluded that most students
prefer this politeness strategy among the other politeness strategy. The reason is that
the students are more likely to need praise rather than receiving feedback that tells
imposition. In this strategy, the speaker does not make any effort to minimize the
In the first utterance mentioned above, it is evident that the teacher's advice
was stated in a forthright manner. The teacher frankly implied how the student could
do better if they maximize the blank spaces in their work. Through the speaker's
advice, it will improve the students' work. In the second utterance aforementioned, it
is visible that it was stated in a straightforward manner. The speaker firmly implied
that being a journalist requires you to set aside your emotions. With this being said,
this will drive the student to become a better journalist by setting aside their emotions,
Among the politeness strategies by Brown and Levinson (1987), this strategy
is the least polite strategy as it is stated in a direct manner without any intention of
saving the face of the hearer. These are phrases that are usually concise to what is
being implied by the speaker. In this study, several utterances were found with Bald-
on Record Strategy. The utterance "I believe when you are a journalist, you have to
leave your emotions at home" is an example of this strategy. The phrase is clearly
stating that the speaker maximizes the belief, which costs the face of the hearer, as the
hearer may feel embarrassment upon hearing the utterance. The phrase clearly
maximizes the disagreement between the speaker and the hearer (Leech, 1983), thus
making the statement a frank and direct message to the hearer, which results in the
negative face of the hearer. In cases where the bald-on record strategy was used in
delivering, both studies by Anam et al. (2020) and Hartono (2021) mentioned that
teachers did not really mean to embarrass the students upon delivering feedback
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despite the fact that some students admitted to feeling a slight embarrass as they
received feedback from the teacher that adheres to the bald-on record strategy.
pressure on the speaker. This strategy leaves the addressee to judge or interpret the
text. The speaker uses 'hope' as a cue for positive scripting to tell the hearer to
improve their narrative output in the future. The speaker's approach is indirect, and it
indirect expression of the language which denies the premise wherein the speaker is
being imposed by the hearer. This strategy also depends on what the speaker tries to
imply with the utterance. This makes the hearer formulates an interpretation of what is
being said. This is argued by Watts (2003) as he stated that direct statements might
affect the hearers' freedom of action. These direct statement, such as criticisms, is
what makes the freedom to interpret the speakers' implication bring to limit.
In this study, an utterance was found with the characteristic of this strategy.
The utterance "I am hoping for more good narratives from you next time" implies
various interpretations for the hearer or, in this context, the student. This phrase may
be direct or indirect; however, the thought of either the teacher complimenting the
current output of the students or the teacher is unsatisfied with the current, which
makes the phrase indirect. Since it could be interpreted in more than one implication
thus, making the phrase relies on how the hearer interprets the utterance. As supported
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the teachers avoid conflicts by not trying to offend the students. The teachers wanted
to deliver either positive or negative comments, but at the same time, they used
various figurative language to cover up the intent of their feedback, thus making the
teacher not offend the student and at the same time making the students understand
the feedback.
The result of this study will be of great help in elucidating the essence of
politeness in teachers' feedback. To further see its contribution, below are the
providing feedback to the students. These are the politeness linguistic structure:
politeness markers, playdowns, hedges, and committers. The result implies that it is
form a particular structure. This also suggests curriculum integration, and in this
matter, it will unravel how politeness linguistic structure carries a pivotal role in terms
On the other hand, the result of the study also implies that the politeness
linguistic structures are what formed several politeness maxims: approbation maxim,
sympathy maxim, tact maxim, and agreement maxim. This also carries curriculum
integration and can be approached not only in terms of providing feedback in the
classroom but also through hidden curricula such as through seminars, symposiums,
etc. Also, the result of the study can be utilized as a reference for aspiring teachers,
which is of help in providing feedback to the students in their future teaching careers.
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More so, another linguistic structure being observed in this study is the
record strategy, and off-record strategy. Still, this suggests curriculum integration and
carries a significant role in terms of the conceptualization of politeness. More so, this
can be of great use as a reference for aspiring teachers to negate negative feedback.
To further add the contribution of this study, it can be a basis for the teachers to
construct their feedback or messages through online messaging that will not offend
discourse analysis contributes to studying texts and messages. Not only does this
provide more information on the field of linguistics, but it also aids the teachers in
getting to know more inputs on the study of politeness strategies. This then implies
further curriculum integration and exposure to the study of politeness and other
in line with language use. The results of this study will aid the teachers in feedbacking
Concluding Remarks
Committers. The Politeness Markers impose signs of politeness through the words in
the feedback of the teacher. Playdowns on the teachers' feedback use past tense
phrases, which lessens the elocutionary effect on the phrase so students will not take
implication that teachers' feedback is somewhat committed but with the phrases used,
the effect of being committed as the feedback acts as a simple utterance that how it is
being understood and how the student would react is solely dependent on the students'
decision.
On the other hand, after finding out the politeness linguistic structure that is
presented in the teachers' feedback, using Leech's (1937) maxims, this study was able
to determine the present maxims in that feedback. These maxims are; Sympathy, Tact,
and Agreement Maxims. These maxims were also incorporated with illocutionary
forces. The joint illocutionary forces are inquiring, convincing, and informing. It was
also revealed why teachers use such maxims in delivering feedback. Tact maxims are
used by the teachers in this study to indirectly suggest, make the request or command
the students. By applying tact maxim in their feedback, the teachers were able to give
indirectly feedback that, when delivered in a direct manner, sounds impolite and
offending. As with the Sympathy maxim, the teachers' feedback in this study shows
sympathy as the teacher expresses her understanding of the situation, thus valuing and
respecting their student using the sympathy maxim. In this study, the teacher
expresses feedback with an agreement maxim. This is to simply agree with the student
on the subject that they are referring this also reflects how the teacher keeps a healthy
relationship with the student to imply that as a teacher, they are not in any authority
when it comes to learning, but instead they are equal with the student who reflects the
It was revealed in this study that the following politeness strategies were used
by the teachers in their feedback; Positive Politeness, Off Record-Strategy, and Bald -
on Record Strategy. As it was revealed, the most common strategy was positive
politeness with a cheerful face as the teachers used strategies like using the word
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"please" and using nicknames in order to create a common ground with the student.
However, there was feedback that the uses a direct manner which belongs to the Bald-
on record strategy with a negative face as the teacher seems to be least polite with the
concise phrase used in the feedback. There was also feedback that confused the
students, as this feedback has been revealed to be using an Off-record strategy with a
positive face. This feedback allows students to interpret what was being told to them.
It shows that among the existing politeness strategy, only the positive politeness
strategy is more preferred by the teachers to use. This is because how the effect using
this politeness strategy does on the students. By using politeness markers, phrases
such as please, and using nicknames, the conversational manner of the teacher to the
In the conduct of the study, the researchers have found out how important it is
to combine words in order to create phrases. These words should be taken into
communication between the teacher and students may occur, which avoids
unnecessary nuisance. By becoming aware of what we tell others through any form of
self-esteem of the one who receives the utterances and also build rapport. This also
implies when one can familiarize the concepts of using politeness linguistic structure,
maxims, and politeness strategy in our discourse with others, we can maintain a polite
manner of conversing thus without sacrificing any context of our messages to others.
Using any of that politeness strategies can help us converse with others with ease,
although we might have used those strategies subconsciously all this time.
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The things that the researchers have analyzed and discussed in this study do
not signify the end of the topic being discussed. There are restrictions and limitations
in the conduct of this study. It is essential to take note that this study focuses only on
the teachers' feedback by using 100 linguistic data used in delivering feedback in an
e-learning environment. If other researchers would discuss the same study in the
First of all, the environment where the teacher's feedback or linguistic data
were based should be a different environment. As mentioned, the linguistic data or the
teachers' feedback came from an LMS or e-learning setup. Other researchers may
conversing happens all the time. They can also increase the number of linguistic data,
whereas this study only uses 100 linguistic data. The bigger the collected data, the
conduct the same concept but with other relationships such as teachers-teachers
giving. Using these different relationships between the teacher and student can result
Lastly, the researchers may use the concept of this study in order to discover
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Curriculum Vitae
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Appendices
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APPENDIX A
Letter to Adviser
Date
CHRISTIAN JAY O. SYTING, MaEd
University of Mindanao
Matina, Davao City
Dear Sir,
Greetings!
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I hope you are doing well today. In line with this, together with my co-
researcher, we would like to invite you to be our Adviser for our
research study entitled “Politeness Strategy in Teachers’ Feedback:
A Pragmatic analysis”. This undergraduate study is being conducted
in partial fulfillment of the requirements in Educational Research
subject in 1st Term in 2nd Semester, SY 2020-2021.
We hope to hear your positive response soon. Thank you and God
bless.
Respectfully,
Tigbawan, Denver D.
Researcher
APPENDIX B
Letter to Panel Members
May 17, 2022
Dear Sir,
Greetings!
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I hope you are doing well today. In line with this, together with
my so-researcher, I would like to invite you to be our Panel
Member for our research study entitled, “Politeness Strategy
in Teachers’ Feedback: A Discourse Analysis.” This
undergraduate research study is being conducted in partial
fulfillment of the requirements in Language Education
Research subject enrolled from 1st Term 2nd Semester, SY
2020-2021.
Respectfully,
Tigbawan, Denver D.
Researcher
Recommending Approval:
Dear Sir,
Greetings!
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I hope you are doing well today. In line with this, together with
my so-researcher, I would like to invite you to be our Panel
Member for our research study entitled, “Politeness Strategy
in Teachers’ Feedback: A Discourse Analysis.” This
undergraduate research study is being conducted in partial
fulfillment of the requirements in Language Education
Research subject enrolled from 1st Term 2nd Semester, SY
2020-2021.
Respectfully,
Recommending Approval:
Appendix C
Thesis Capstone
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APPENDIX D
Endorsement for Outline Defense
APPENDIX E
Endorsement for Thesis Final Defense
APPENDIX F
Turnitin Originality Result
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Appendix G
Grammarly Report
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APPENDIX H
CTE Research Routing Form
Tigbawan, Denver D.
Villanueva, Rica Mae D.
Nazareno, Zyra Mae D.
APPENDIX I
Proceedings of Thesis Final Defense
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Research Questions/Objectives/Hypothesis(es):
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Conceptual/Operational Definition of Terms:
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Theoretical/Conceptual Framework/Lens:
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Delimitations and Limitations of the study:
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Significance of the Study:
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Review of Related Literature:
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APPENDIX J
CTE Research Clearance Form
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Tigbawan, Denver D.
APPENDIX K
Consent Form for Undergraduate Thesis Utilization for Research Purposes
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Denver D. Tigbawan
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Student’s signature above-printed name
Signed date
(month/day/year) : July 01, 2022
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(month/day/year) : July 01, 2022
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(month/day/year) : July 01, 2022
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Senior Research Fee
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NAME OR NO.
TIGBAWAN, DENVER D 2991544
VILLANUEVA, RICA MAE D. 2991542
NAZARENO, ZYRA MAE D. 2991543
APPENDIX M
Research Title Evaluation Sheet
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APPENDIX N
Research Outline Defense Evaluation Form
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Denver Tigbawan
Rica Mae Villanueva
Zyra Mae Nazareno
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Rica Mae Villanueva
Zyra Mae Nazareno
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APPENDIX O
Thesis Final Defense Evaluation Form
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A Discourse Analysis
Tigbawan
Villanueva
Nazareno
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A Discourse Analysis
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Villanueva
Nazareno
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