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INTRODUCTION 700 words

- STATE YOUR TOPIC 250 words


- Necessary background

- SCOPE 200 words


- Define a clear research question or statement

- AIMS & OBJECTIVES 250 words


- Overview of the structure
- Statement / discussion you are constructing
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- HIS VISION

METHODOLOGY (STRUCTURE) 400 words

- HOW YOU INTRODUCE 50 words


- Your D aim
- Starting of your D
- Research statement
- Model of your D
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- CASE STUDY 150 words
- Patterns (study, arguments, keys)
- Design of your CS
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- LIMITATIONS 150 words
- Timeline
- Shortcomings of your study
- Justify your limitations
- Value of your limits
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- CONCLUSION BRIEF 50 words
- Key takeaway of this capter(D)

CASE STUDY PRE MODERN 2000 WORDS

- Introduction 300 words


- Study 600 words
- Interesting part 700 words
- Analysis 400 words

CASE STUDY POST MODERN 2000 WORDS

- Introduction 300 words


- Introduction 300 words

- Study 600 words

- Interesting part 700 words

- Analysis 400 words

CASE STUDY PRE MODERN 2000 WORDS

- Introduction 300 words

- Study 600 words

- Interesting part 700 words

- Analysis 400 words

CONCLUSION 900 words

- What the objective of the paper 225 words


- How we study it 225 words
- How it fulfils the purpose of the paper 225 words
- Discuss the leads to conclusion 225 words

Understanding LC’s theories and practices on domestic architecture through an analysis of his built
projects

1- Corbusier’s earliest domestic work – (how he got into it) timeline general opinion or
statements importants stamen villas. general
Philosophy
2- (his life phylosofy how he got into this domestic work from his usual work) his study phyloshy
that got into it, his emotional phylosoy that got into it , his works like photography that got
into it) how his stufy eventually grew and led his to buit villas
◼ LC’s earliest domestic work being different from his other works
3- Understanding domestic modernism of LC works-

like his material uses that chaged the view on traditional domestic spaces with removing the
wall with new materials
- His theories on domestic architecture (what he meant in his works) – matral/ technology
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4- analyze how his ideas and way of designing changed to suit the Modernist tropes we end
up associating him with.
- (a little social aspect) (his interest in technology/ or whatever that got into domestic how he
tried to implient it, his thoughts on women spaces and men space that got into domestic
spaces, his beilf on heigine
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- Some examples general villas
5- LC vision was not spot on -
- Ex on his bad faculties
6- How people readjusted his villas due to liking and repairs and problems
7- SOME EX: Charles Holland ETC…
8- Case studies
- Villa savoy roof leak
- Villa savoy- his theory vs practical problems
- Little chat in Switzerland
9- Analysis FUNCTION, AESTETICS, TECHNOLOGY
10- Do ANALYSIS, CROSS COMPARISON

STATEMENT

Understanding modernist domestic architecture of LC through an analysis of his built projects

Understanding LC’s theories and practices on domestic modernism through an analysis of his built
projects

Understanding domestic modernism of LC’s works

tips

- Reference properly
- Make adequate reference
- Add pictures and talk about them and refer them
- Check grammar , spellings, standard dissertation rules on writing
- 8000 – 8100 word count
- Reference properly
- On time submission

This submission does not fulfil the requirements as set out in the brief. The total word count is below
the minimum of 8,000-10,000

at 5,000. The chosen question here is also very generalised and leads to a very generalised
introduction to your line of enquiry.

From there on, a compelling yet straightforward structure is needed to articulate the development of
your argument on ideas of

technological influence and innovation in Modernist domestic architecture through an analysis of


both writing and built projects of Le

Corbusier.

What’s more, there is no contextualisation of Modernism and its domestic architectural projects, nor
of Le Corbusier. This lack of

situating within wider architectural, social and cultural settings makes it difficult to understand the
influence it had on domestic
architecture.

This submission is essentially based on several highly descriptive reviews of domestic projects by Le
Corbusier. It does not build a

compelling and complex argument around your chosen topic of study. Nor is there any evidence of
sustained analysis based on

original thinking. Any analysis within the thesis is from a small set of references.

The projects chosen as case studies here were of value and interesting, especially as they varied –
with particular emphasis on Le

Corbusier’s earliest domestic work being so remarkably different. There was scope to explore that
and analyse how his ideas and

way of designing changed to suit the Modernist tropes we end up associating him with.

In terms of the references you use, there is a lack of scholarship in highlighting through the use of
quotation marks and in text

citations the passages of texts that are not your own. This is a fundamental academic skill for
everyone to show.

Lastly, whilst you are given credit for the inclusion of some visual material, there was a missed
opportunity by not writing about them

directly.
1- Understanding domestic modernism architecture of LC works
2- How LC earliest domestic works
3- – being so remarkably different – explore that- analyse- ideas & way – of designing
changed to suit the modernist tropes we – end up associating with.
4- How is domest

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