Name: _Juan_Guerrero_________________________________ Date: _7/18/2023_________________

Working with Peer Feedback

Directions: In the space provided below respond to these questions.
What are the three things you’ll change based upon your peers’ responses? Why will you change each one?
1. I will add the missing citations like my peer advised. The reason for doing so is obvious, it’s a requirement.

2. I will elaborate and add the immediately relevant information of the participants to the experiment. It will make
explaining any issues there was easier to explain.

3. My peer said that I needed to elaborate on the time of the experiment, not sure how, but I will try to make it so.

What are three things you’ll keep despite your peers’ responses? Why will you keep each one?
1. My structure for the paragraphs works as I intend it to, and works with the paper.

2. I don’t think I require more citations than necessary, as the information that builds off of them is relating to my
experiment.

3. The conclusion does a good job of ending off the essay and circling back to the findings of the project, so I do not
think it need further rewriting.

What work do you have left to do after today to successfully complete the project?

1. Complete the second draft.

2. Finish the work I still need to complete.

3. Complete the InQuizitive assignment.

4. Make sure to proofread the second draft.

5. Make sure that there is no plagiarism.

6. Turn in the second draft

7. Do 1-6, but for the final draft.

8. Make sure the final draft is not missing anything that I promised to add later.

9. Re-read the final draft one last time before turning in.
10. Turn in the final draft.