Name: Barbara Ramirez Date:_ 3/5/2024 _

Working with Peer Feedback

Directions: In the space provided below respond to these questions.
What are the three things you’ll change based upon your peers’ responses? Why will you change each one?
1. I will eliminate some quotes that are not so relevant to the information that I have in my paragraphs.

2. I’ll change my topic sentence to make it sound more clear and straight to my point.

3. I will check the links for my 1st and 5th article.

What are three things you’ll keep despite your peers’ responses? Why will you keep each one?
1. I will keep the way I wrote my thesis statement because I was told that it is good as it is now.

2. I am going to leave all my sources. This is because I already know what topics each one talks about.

3. I am going to leave one of my block quotes because I feel that one has relevant information.

What work do you have left to do after today to successfully complete the project?

1. I need to finish the paragraphs that I left pending.

2. I will revise the sources to see if the links of each one are working.

3. I will go to my tutor to see if I could make some additional changes to the paper.

4. I will revise the grammar of my essay.

5. I need to revise if I follow the requirements of the paper.

6. I will revise the connection of my ideas and the author’s ideas to see if the essay makes sense.

7. I have to work on my conclusion because I feel that I could improve it with more information.

8. I will be sure to be using just the necessary amount of quotes.

9. I will check if the formatting of each part of the essay is well written.

10. Finally I will download my Final Draft, and I will be sure that the format did not change.