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    The document discusses feedback received from peers on a writing assignment. The author plans to change their thesis statement to be more clear and straightforward, shorten their introduction, and replace a source that was confusing. They will keep repetitiveness of words to maintain clarity, keep their title as it is efficient, and keep their organization of ideas as they are understandable. Remaining work includes replacing a source, thoroughly explaining each paragraph, adding more in-text citations, changing the thesis statement, completing the works cited page, reaching the word count, and revising multiple aspects of the composition.

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    The document discusses feedback received from peers on a writing assignment. The author plans to change their thesis statement to be more clear and straightforward, shorten their introduction, and replace a source that was confusing. They will keep repetitiveness of words to maintain clarity, keep their title as it is efficient, and keep their organization of ideas as they are understandable. Remaining work includes replacing a source, thoroughly explaining each paragraph, adding more in-text citations, changing the thesis statement, completing the works cited page, reaching the word count, and revising multiple aspects of the composition.

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    The document discusses feedback received from peers on a writing assignment. The author plans to change their thesis statement to be more clear and straightforward, shorten their introduction, and replace a source that was confusing. They will keep repetitiveness of words to maintain clarity, keep their title as it is efficient, and keep their organization of ideas as they are understandable. Remaining work includes replacing a source, thoroughly explaining each paragraph, adding more in-text citations, changing the thesis statement, completing the works cited page, reaching the word count, and revising multiple aspects of the composition.

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    Name: Mirelys Z.

    Velez Rivera Date: October 11, 2023


    Working with Peer Feedback
    Directions: In the space provided below respond to these questions.
    What are the three things you’ll change based upon your peers’ responses? Why will you change each one?
    1. Thesis statement, I believe it can be more straightforward and clear.

    2. Introduction, it is too long.

    3. Replace a source, evidence confuses more the reader.

    What are three things you’ll keep despite your peers’ responses? Why will you keep each one?
    1. Repetitiveness of words, I can’t change into other synonyms because it will lose the essay clarity.

    2. Title, seems efficient.

    3. Organization of ideas, they are comprehendible the way they are.

    What work do you have left to do after today to successfully complete the project?

    1. Replace source

    2. Complete each paragraph explanation thoroughly

    3. Add more in-text citations.

    4. Change thesis statement.

    5. Complete the work cited page.

    6. Reach word count.

    7. Re-revise composition.

    8. Re-revise organization.

    9. Re-revise MLA formatting.

    10. Re-revise grammar.

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