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    Vélez Rivera 1

    Mirelys Z. Vélez Rivera

    ENGL 1302-208

    Dr. Sharity Nelson

    April 18, 2023

    Week 14 Homework

    Questions “Revision Strategies”:

    1. From the comments you received from me on your first essay, list the revisions you need

    to complete.

    a. For my first essay I needed to provide more citations and more sources because I

    had only used half of what I was supposed to.

    2. Do the same for your second essay.

    a. Second essay I needed to fix the wording to make it sound even more proper, it is

    already in the third person, and in a formal speech, but it could be better.

    3. Do the same for your third essay.

    a. I need more citations and organization. My topic needs to be clearer.

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