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Reflection Essay 3
Reflection Essay 3
Ivy Lara
Trishia Briones
4/18/2023
Reflection Essay 3
Essay 3 was a bit challenging for me because I had used all my ideas for it in essay 2. In this
essay I didn’t really use anything I used from essay one except adding the citations to my article.
I used more of essay 2 to create essay 3 because it consisted mostly of essay 2. I also used six of
my citations from essay 2. Essay 1 was more for an experimental paper which is something I did
not use for this essay. I used most of my essay for essay 3 except for the four other essays I did
not use. It was not applicable for this essay because only needed 8 articles to cite.
I learned in this essay that I need to learn how to annotate and find a way to expand my word
count because I had trouble getting to the word count. I could apply this to a biology research
paper because I have done many this semester. I don’t think that would use MLA for my biology
course, but I do think I will use it in the future. I also have been using more of an APA format for
my other classes.
This essay has helped me make a stance for what I believe in and shows proof that it may be the
best choice. For example, in this essay I made my stance on music helping people and I strongly
believe that. There are also many facts supporting this statement. In the future I may have to
make or stand for something, and I would have to support it with my knowledge and research I
do. This is how it will help in my future as well as helping in other classes. In this writing I came
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upon my writing skills becoming a bit stronger. The strengths that I felt were stronger were my
flow of writing becoming easier and my grammar getting better. My weakness I feel are
becoming less weaknesses and becoming strengths. My weaknesses were grammar and getting
towards the word count or finding things to write about and I felt that got better in the ends of
From my teacher I feel that the criticism for this essay will be my citations, which I have fixed
with an ACE tutor and feel like it is done better as well as my word count. In my citations I made
a mistake with the page numbers and italicizing the journal for the citations, and I have fixed
that. The most challenging part about this essay was adding more information which wasn’t
already added, I did not want to be repetitive with what I said and that is what made it
challenging for me. The least challenging was finding the citations because most of them had
come from essay 2 already and had been cited in my text as well.