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    The student will change three things in their essay based on peer feedback: 1) adding citations in the beginning of paragraphs, 2) adjusting the essay length, and 3) changing the last topic. They will keep the first four topics, use of multiple citations, and organization. The remaining work includes finding a fifth topic, expanding paragraph explanations, adding citations, changing the hook, completing the works cited page, reaching the word count, and further revising multiple aspects of the essay.

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    The student will change three things in their essay based on peer feedback: 1) adding citations in the beginning of paragraphs, 2) adjusting the essay length, and 3) changing the last topic. They will keep the first four topics, use of multiple citations, and organization. The remaining work includes finding a fifth topic, expanding paragraph explanations, adding citations, changing the hook, completing the works cited page, reaching the word count, and further revising multiple aspects of the essay.

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    The student will change three things in their essay based on peer feedback: 1) adding citations in the beginning of paragraphs, 2) adjusting the essay length, and 3) changing the last topic. They will keep the first four topics, use of multiple citations, and organization. The remaining work includes finding a fifth topic, expanding paragraph explanations, adding citations, changing the hook, completing the works cited page, reaching the word count, and further revising multiple aspects of the essay.

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    Name: Mirelys Z.

    Velez Rivera Date: November 15, 2023


    Working with Peer Feedback
    Directions: In the space provided below respond to these questions.
    What are the three things you’ll change based upon your peers’ responses? Why will you change each one?
    1. No citations in the beginning of my paragraph.

    2. Essay length.

    3. Last topic from essay

    What are three things you’ll keep despite your peers’ responses? Why will you keep each one?
    1. First 4 topics of my essay, because I think they are good as they are for my argument.

    2. Citations of different and multiple sources, because they give more trust to my word.

    3. Organization of composition, because I feel like the way is currently organized works the best for explanatory
    reasons.

    What work do you have left to do after today to successfully complete the project?

    1. Find a 5th topic to talk about.

    2. Complete each paragraph explanation thoroughly

    3. Add more in-text citations.

    4. Change hook.

    5. Complete the work cited page.

    6. Reach word count.

    7. Re-revise composition.

    8. Re-revise organization.

    9. Re-revise MLA formatting.

    10. Re-revise grammar.

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