Name: __Isabella Ramos____________________________ Date: ___________________________

Working with Peer Feedback

Directions: In the space provided below respond to these questions.

What are the three things you’ll change based upon your peers’ responses? Why will you change each one?

1. Write a more clear and focused thesis statement. My thesis is towards the middle of mypaper and adding it to the
intro will make my essay more clear

2. Fix grammatical errors and format issues. This will make my essay easier to read

3. Make my essay longer to fall within the guidelines of the essay.

What are three things you’ll keep despite your peers’ responses? Why will you keep each one?
1. Nothing, all the comments given to me were meant as feedback and I feel like each one would make my essay
better, so there is nothing that I will keep despite my peers’ responses.

What work do you have left to do after today to successfully complete the project?

1. Add extra details

2. Make my essay longer (way too short)

3. Fix my grammar mistakes

4. Fix my thesis statement

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