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    1) The student will change their introduction to be more informative and attention-grabbing without being too long since they did not receive peer feedback on their draft. 2) They will reword part of their second body paragraph to improve the flow. 3) Their concluding paragraph will be condensed to avoid being wordy while still recapping the importance. They will keep the complex information about their topic and examples used to help readers make connections, despite lacking peer feedback. The only remaining work is to submit the project.

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    1) The student will change their introduction to be more informative and attention-grabbing without being too long since they did not receive peer feedback on their draft. 2) They will reword part of their second body paragraph to improve the flow. 3) Their concluding paragraph will be condensed to avoid being wordy while still recapping the importance. They will keep the complex information about their topic and examples used to help readers make connections, despite lacking peer feedback. The only remaining work is to submit the project.

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    1) The student will change their introduction to be more informative and attention-grabbing without being too long since they did not receive peer feedback on their draft. 2) They will reword part of their second body paragraph to improve the flow. 3) Their concluding paragraph will be condensed to avoid being wordy while still recapping the importance. They will keep the complex information about their topic and examples used to help readers make connections, despite lacking peer feedback. The only remaining work is to submit the project.

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    Name: Alma Ramirez Date: 4/ 11/ 2023

    Dr. Jason Dew

    ENGL 1302-280: English Composition I

    Working with Peer Feedback

    What are the three things you'l1 change based upon your peers’ responses? Why will you change

    each one?

    1.With all respect honestly no one responded to mine this is not the first time. I would first

    change a bit of my introduction. Since itis the attention grabber and it need to be sufficiently

    informative without a life lesson or big paragraph.

    2. Body 2 rewording is needed to keep the flow.

    3. Last paragraph summary condensed to not be wordy and recap the importance,

    What are three things you'l1 keep despite your peers' responses? Why will you keep each one?

    1. I would keep the complex information of my topic as it has relevance.

    2. I will keep the examples used so people can make the connections.

    What work do you have left to do after today to successfully complete the project?

    1. Nothing else other than submit.

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