Li and Bowes et al agree Li and Bowes et al disagree

Li agrees on to striving for the best and

Both encourages on taking the story as a strongest use of English whereas Bowes
personal account. highly recommends on not wasting words on
sentences that could be condense.

Li encourages the reader’s confidence in

adding some mishaps into the article as a
Both of them agrees on the use of personal
sense of humour whereas Bowes strongly
experience, anecdotes and quotations.
disagrees on adding tales of personal
mishaps.

Bowes insists on identifying the people from

Both of them agrees on adding facts along
whom you quote from whereas Li doesn’t
with opinions.
mention about identifying them.

2. The writer’s use of personal experiences and anecdotes of the story appeals a sense to the
reader. With facts comprised with opinions, the writer gave vivid description on the surrounding,
wildlife and the historical as well as geographical features of the place with precision. The story
was written in first person as to reinforce personal feelings and opinions. By utilizing clear
vocabulary and writing structure, it triumphed over portraying vivid imaginary in the reader’s
mind.