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Contents 1

NHÓM CHỦ ĐIỂM 1: BUSINESS 4

Advertising 4
Advertising 2 4
Copyrights 5
Relocating businesses 5

NHÓM CHỦ ĐIỂM 2: CRIME 6

Educating prisoners 6
Prisoners giving talks 6
Prison vs Education 7

NHÓM CHỦ ĐIỂM 3: CULTURE AND social cohesion"TOURISM 8

International tourism 8
Local vs World History 8
Museums and Historical sites 9
Universal Language 9

NHÓM CHỦ ĐIỂM 4: CHILDREN & PARENTS 10

Children and television 10
Delayed parenthood 10
Grandparents and Childcare Centres 11
Indulging children 11

NHÓM CHỦ ĐIỂM 5: EDUCATION 12

Criticising teachers 12
Gap year 12
Home and Dormitories 13

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 Science Education 13
Early Education 14
Class Size 14
Handwriting 15

NHÓM CHỦ ĐIỂM 6: ENVIRONMENT 16

Environment and Technology 16
Natural Resources 16
Fuel cost 17
Individuals and Environmental problems 18
Car-free days 18
Nature 19

NHÓM CHỦ ĐIỂM 7: GOVERNMENTS 20

Supporting Artists 20
Helping developing countries 20
Tax on Fast food 21
Banning dangerous sports 21

NHÓM CHỦ ĐIỂM 8: INDIVIDUALS AND SOCIETY 22

Sports stars as role models 22
Lack of respect 22
Luck and Success 23
Zoos 23

NHÓM CHỦ ĐIỂM 9: TRANSPORT 24

Bicycles 24
Public Transport 24

NHÓM CHỦ ĐIỂM 10: TECHNOLOGY 25

Digital Communication 25
Digital Communication 2 25
Inventions 26

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Space 26
Space 2 27
Animal Testing 27
Storing user information 28

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NHÓM CHỦ ĐIỂM 1: BUSINESS
Advertising
Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we
really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new
products that may improve our lives.

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In conclusion, advertising used to be a means of getting the market to know

about new and useful products, but now it is primarily used as an selling tool
for many businesses whose primary goal is profit. It is recommended that
companies should think about customers’ needs before launching
advertising campaigns for any of their products.

Advertising 2
Consumers are faced with increasing numbers of advertisements from
competing companies. To what extent do you think are consumers
influenced by advertisements? What measures can be taken to protect
them?

In summary, many businesses use advertising to gain an edge over their

competitors rather than to fulfil customers’ needs, which results in people
buying unnecessary goods. The best remedy for this issue is censoring all new
advertisements before airing them in order to safeguard consumers against
overstated information.

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Copyrights
Modern technology has made it easier for individuals to download
copyrighted music and books from the internet for no charge. To what
extent is this a positive or a negative development?

In summary, despite the belief that the public can reap the benefits of free
access to intellectual content, disrespecting copyrights is undoubtedly a
negative development that poses an alarming threat to society. It is
recommended that all forms of copyright infringements are prohibited so
that copyright holders earn what they deserve and are motivated to
continue their work.

Relocating businesses
With many problems of transport and accommodation in cities, some
governments are encouraging businesses to move to rural areas.
Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

All the aforementioned points, including the amelioration of accommodation

shortage in the city and job creation and economic development in rural
areas, provide a compelling argument in favour of an urban-rural business
relocation policy, despite some potential drawbacks such as the difficulty for
city-based workers in commuting to and from their workplaces. It is
recommended that governments should offer financial assistance and tax
reduction for companies who choose to relocate to the countryside.

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NHÓM CHỦ ĐIỂM 2: CRIME
Educating prisoners
Studies show that criminals get a low level of education. Some people
believe that the best way to reduce crime is educating people in prison
so they can get a job after leaving prison. To what extent do you agree or
disagree?

In conclusion, although educating prisoners is an effective way to reduce

crime, it is not the best solution, as there are more preventive and sustainable
measures such as education about at school and stricter punishments for
criminals. It is recommended that all of these solutions should be taken

Prisoners giving talks

Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later. Some
people think that having these people to give a talk to school students is
the best way to tell them about the dangers of committing a crime. Do
you agree or disagree?

In conclusion, talks by ex-prisoners may keep students informed of the

dangers of carrying out a crime. The government, however, should adopt
stronger measures such as introducing criminology as a school subject and
showing students documentaries about the lives of prisoners. It is
recommended that

Prison vs Education
In most countries, prison is the most common solution to the problem of
criminals. However, a more effective way is to provide better education so
that they do not commit crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

In conclusion, prison has a strong deterrent impact on would-be criminals.

However, there are more compelling reasons to use education as the main
crime prevention method in society. It is recommended that both of these
solutions are implemented, with educating children being prioritised.

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NHÓM CHỦ ĐIỂM 3: CULTURE AND
social cohesion"TOURISM
International tourism
Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their
country. What are the reasons? Solutions to change negative attitudes?

In conclusion, the fact that local citizens may perceive international travel as
an adverse trend could be ascribed to cultural misunderstandings and the
loss of social cohesion in the area. This negative perception can be properly
addressed by a new tax on services for tourists and cultural-exchange
activities.

Local vs World History

It is more important for schoolchildren to learn about local history than
world history. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In summary, the study of local history should always be parallel to that of

world history. This practice would guarantee that children learn history more
comprehensively and be able to tighten the bond with migrant workers in
their country.

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Museums and Historical sites
The main visitors to museums and historical sites are tourists, not local
people. Why is it the case? What can be done to attract local people to
these places?

In summary, there are a few reasons why historical sites and museums are
uninteresting to local citizens, including the fact that locals might be too
familiar with these places. There are some solutions to encourage more locals
to visit such destinations, such as providing more media coverage on them.

Universal Language
Scientists say that in the future humanity will speak the same language.
Do you think this is a positive or negative social development?

In summary, one may conclude that the use of one international language is
not necessarily disadvantageous. There are clear advantages of having a
universal language, such as the growth of international trade and the
development of a stronger intellectual workforce in every country.

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NHÓM CHỦ ĐIỂM 4: CHILDREN &
PARENTS
Children and television
Studies have suggested that children watch much more television than
they did in the past and spend less time on active or creative things.
What are the reasons and what measures should be taken to encourage
children to spend more time on active or creative things?

In conclusion, there are obvious reasons why children watch too much
television and spend little time on more stimulating activities. This negative
trend could be tackled by a number of remedies, such as activating the
parental control mode on television sets.

Delayed parenthood
Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their
life. What are the reasons? Is this a negative or positive trend?

In summary, the tendency to have children at a later age is caused by a

number of factors, such as the competitiveness of the job market for young
adults. Although there are a few benefits of this trend such as the prospect of
children getting better education and young parents having more working
time, the drawbacks including the health risks of the mother are far more
significant for couples to consider.

Grandparents and Childcare Centres

Nowadays, many families have both parents working. Some working
parents believe other family members like grandparents can take care of
their children, while others think childcare centres provide the best care.

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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In conclusion, even though childcare by grandparents may guarantee more
attention for the children and help the parents save money, kindergarten is
the right place for a greater all-rounded progress of a child. It is
recommended that all young children are sent to a proper childcare centre.

Indulging children
Parents often give children everything they ask for and do what they like.
Is it good for children? What are the consequences when they grow up?

From the issues outlined above, one can conclude that overindulgence may
produce a number of unfavourable effects on children, including the delay in
gaining crucial life skills such as self-feeding and the long-term consequence
of lacking the ability to cope with problems as adults in the future. It is
recommended that no parents should overindulge their offspring.

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NHÓM CHỦ ĐIỂM 5: EDUCATION
Criticising teachers
Many people argue that in order to improve educational quality, high
school students are encouraged to make comments or even criticism on
their teachers. Others think it will lead to loss of respect and discipline in
the classroom. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In conclusion, the educational method of encouraging high school students

to judge their teachers will undoubtedly lead to enhanced academic
achievements, despite the possibility that some classes may experience some
initial instability in the form of disrespect or lack of discipline. It is
recommended that schools should adopt this approach so that education
quality can be increased.

Gap year
Some students prefer to take a gap year between high school and
university, to work or to travel. Do the advantages of this outweigh the
disadvantages?

In summary, there are some serious drawbacks associated with a gap year
such as letting fresh school-leavers encounter overwhelming difficulties too
soon and the prospect of future intellectual labour shortage. These
drawbacks far outweigh the potential gains, including the chance for
students to acquire cultural knowledge, working skills and experience.

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Home and Dormitories
It is better for college students to live in schools than live at home with
their parents. Do you agree or disagree?

From the issues outlined above, one can conclude that living on a university
campus is a better choice for students than living at home with their parents,
because it allows students to get easier access to libraries and other learning
facilities and to experience a environment with cultural diversity. It is
predicted that the number of students choosing to live in university
accommodation will remain high in the future.

Science Education
Do you agree or disagree with the statement that the government
should invest more money in science education rather than other
subjects to develop the country?

From the issues outlined above, one may conclude that governments should
not increase their spending on science education. They should, instead, keep
the current budget allocation scheme, because this ensures that other
subjects such as languages, history, management and economics are no less
important than science.

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Early Education
Some people think that children should begin their formal education at a
very early age. Some think they should begin at least 7 years old. Discuss
both views give opinions

In conclusion, educating children under the age of seven in a formal school is

associated with certain benefits such as the extra time for learning academic
knowledge. These benefits are, however, not as clear and significant as the
advantages of sending children to a formal school when they are seven. It is
therefore recommended that very young children spend time playing games
or joining informal classes in order to cultivate their ability to imagine and
think creatively.

Class Size
Some people say that class size affects language teaching while others
feel that big classes do not matter. Discuss both views and give your
opinion.

In conclusion, a small-size class is undoubtedly a suitable place for students

to learn languages. A school, however, can employ teaching assistants and
computer technology to effectively teach languages to students in larger
classes. It is recommended that educators should determine whether they
should organise small classes in the traditional way or large ones with
teacher’s assistants and a digital learning system depending on the average
student-teacher ratio of their schools.

Handwriting
Many people think that it is unnecessary to teach children handwriting
skills in this technological age. Do you agree or disagree?

In conclusion, schools should not abolish the practice of teaching children to

write using their hands, because handwriting techniques are associated with

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values that are still significant in all parts of the world in this age of
technological development. It is recommended that schools provide their
students with both handwriting and typing lessons so that these students
can master both of these skills.

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NHÓM CHỦ ĐIỂM 6: ENVIRONMENT
Environment and Technology
Developments in technology have brought various environmental
problems. Some believe that people need to live simpler lives to solve
environmental problems. Others, however, believe technology is the way
to solve these problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In conclusion, advances in technology such as hybrid vehicles and renewable

energy can tackle environmental problems, while simple ways of life are an
ineffective and sometimes counterproductive solution for these problems. It
is recommended that governments and societies adopt the latest technology
in the fields of green vehicles and energy.

Natural Resources

The world's natural resources are consumed at an ever-increased rate.

What are the causes of this situation? What are the solutions?

In conclusion, the overexploitation of natural resources derives from the

strong demand in developing countries and the over-reliance on these types
of resources. Strong measures, such as reducing the aforementioned
demand and making use of alternative energy sources, should be
implemented to tackle this situation.

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Fuel cost
The best way to solve the world's environmental problems is to increase
the cost of fuel. Do you agree or disagree?

In conclusion, the main environmental benefit of increasing the cost of fuel is

that global warming might be slowed down. This is, however, not the best
way to ease the problem of environmental deterioration, as there are more
effective solutions to address environmental problems at large, such as
applying green technology to the mass production of various kinds of
equipment for both household and industrial use.

Individuals and Environmental problems

Some people think that environmental problems are too big for
individuals to solve. Others believe individuals can also do some things to
solve these problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In summary, there are some vast environmental problems such as climate

change that can only be solved by governments, not individuals. Individuals,
however, can still contribute to environmental protection in many ways such
as being voters for environmental laws and users of green products.

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Car-free days

Some people think international car-free days are an effective way of

reducing air pollution, others think there are some other ways. Discuss
both views and give your own opinion.

In conclusion, the organisation of world car free days may produce little effect
on protecting the atmosphere. Other solutions, namely building designated
lanes for public vehicles and taxing all industries on carbon usage, produce
more sustainable positive impacts on the environment.

Nature

People have little understanding of the importance of the natural world.

What are the reasons for this and how can people learn more about the
natural world？

In conclusion, the problem that most people do not have proper

understanding about the natural environment derives from the scarcity of
time that they spend in this kind of environment and the false belief that
human beings do not need to rely on natural materials. It is recommended
that these two issues are tackled through education so that every person can
learn more about the natural world from their young age.

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NHÓM CHỦ ĐIỂM 7: GOVERNMENTS
Supporting Artists

Some people think that governments should give financial support to

artists, musicians and poets. Others think that it is a waste of money.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In conclusion, the idea of giving artists financial assistance is worthwhile for a

few reasons, namely helping impoverished artists who contributed to society
and motivating young artists to continue their work. There are, however, far
more compelling reasons why this policy is wasteful, including the fact that
artists today can earn money more easily by using the internet to sell their
artworks and that investing in art education at school is a more cost-effective
and sustainable way to spend money for art.

Helping developing countries

Some people think that developing countries need financial help from
international organizations. Others think that it is practical aid and advice
that is needed. Discuss these views and give your own opinion.

From the arguments outlined above, one may conclude it is practical

assistance, not financial support, that is crucial for developing nations to 24
thrive in the long term. It is predicted that practical aid and advice will be at
the core of international support in the future.

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Tax on Fast food

In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from

health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore
necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To
what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In conclusion, it seems senseless to convey the idea that a higher tax on fast
food is an appropriate measure, as it may not be effective enough and lead to
heavier routine expenditure. It is recommended that instead of trying to
impose a new tax, the government should introduce policies that make fast
food healthier, such as forcing fast food restaurants to use ingredients that
are free of preservatives.

Banning dangerous sports

Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports, while
others think people should have freedom to do any sports or activity.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In conclusion, there are real risks of playing extreme sports, such as injuries
and even deaths. There are, however, stronger reasons to defend the right of
any individual to take part in the extreme sport of their choice, providing that
they are fully prepared for the game they want to play, both physically and
mentally.

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NHÓM CHỦ ĐIỂM 8: INDIVIDUALS AND
SOCIETY

Sports stars as role models

Nowadays, young people admire sports stars though they often do not
set a good example. Do you think this is a positive or negative
development?

In conclusion, even though the young may learn some useful life skills from
the top athletes who set a poor example, the proclivity of imitating these
stars may result in a wide range of adverse effects and thus is an issue of
concern in today's society. It is recommended that if children admire a sports
star, their parents should teach them about what is positive and what is not
about the lifestyle of that star.

Lack of respect

There is a general increase in anti-social behaviours and lack of respect

for others. What are the causes and solutions?

In conclusion, it is clear that violence, discrimination and the indifference of

parents to children’s education are the major catalysts for the increase in
anti-social behaviour and disrespect towards others. Strong measures, such
as stringent law enforcement on violent and discriminatory acts, should be
taken to alleviate this distressing situation.

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Luck and Success
Whether or not someone achieves their aims is mostly by a question of
luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In conclusion, the importance of luck in determining goal achievement is

overstated, while there are much more significant factors to consider, namely
hard work and determination. It is recommended that anyone who wants to
pursue their dream should develop their will and perseverance.

Zoos
Some people say that zoos have no useful purpose. Others believe that
zoos are beneficial in many ways. Discuss and give your opinion.
In conclusion, zoos are places where people learn about and develop their
love for animals and where endangered species are nurtured and protected.
These advantages outweigh the disadvantages, such as the chance that
animals are exploited and bullied, or the possibility that they gradually lose
their instincts. All these disadvantages can be lessened if more is invested in
zoos to turn them into a better living space for animals.

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NHÓM CHỦ ĐIỂM 9: TRANSPORT
Bicycles
Nowadays people use bicycles less as a form of transport. Why is that?
What can we do to encourage people to use bicycles more?

In conclusion, the unpopularity of bicycles could be attributed to the

overdependence on modern means of transport and the shortage of
dedicated cycling paths. To encourage people to cycle more, the government
should therefore introduce a tax on motor vehicles and invest money in
building dedicated paths for cyclists.

Public Transport
Some people believe the government should spend money on building
train and subway lines to reduce traffic congestion. Others think that
building more and wider roads is the better way to reduce traffic
congestion. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In conclusion, building more and larger roads is an unsustainable measure,

while trains and subway lines would be a much more effective solution for
the problem of traffic congestion. It is recommended that the government
should invest more into trains and underground networks.

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NHÓM CHỦ ĐIỂM 10: TECHNOLOGY

Digital Communication

Many people think modern communication technology is having some

negative effects on social relationships. Do you agree or disagree?

In summary, the constant distraction of modern communication devices

such as mobile phones may cause the breakdown of numerous social
relationships. It is recommended that people use no digital devices when
they spend time with their friends and family.

Digital Communication 2

Some people think that increasing communication usage of computers

and mobile phones by young people has had a negative effect on their
reading and writing skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In conclusion, due to the tendency towards using spoken language and the
over-reliance on proofreading software when communicating via computers
and mobiles, digital communication has an adverse impact on one’s overall
reading and writing level. It is recommended that people should meet their
friends and family in person on a regular basis instead of always using
smartphones and other electronic devices to communicate with them.

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Inventions
There have been many inventions in human history, such as the wheel.
Some people think the most important thing is the internet. To what
extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In summary, the Internet has some enormous advantages for the human
race, but there are even more significant discoveries, including electricity,
engines and mobile phones. It is predicted that along with the Internet, these
three inventions will still be the cornerstones of future humanity.

Space
In the future, it seems more difficult to live on the Earth. Some people
think more money should be spent on researching other planets to live,
such as Mars. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this
statement?

In conclusion, research projects on planets that support human life should

not receive more funds, because they can hardly be completed in the next
decades if not centuries. It is suggested that these funds should be disbursed
to campaigns that address issues on Earth so that everyone can lead an easy
life without having to migrate to any other planets.

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Space 2

Some people believe that spending money on developing technology on

space exploration is unjustifiable and there are more beneficial ways to
spend this money. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this
statement?

In summary, there are compelling reasons why money should be allocated to

space exploration. It saves people’s money and provides a sustainable and
efficient way to generate energy. There can be other areas to spend money
on, but that does not stop investments in space technology from being
justifiable.

Animal Testing
Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines
and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these
experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause
animals to suffer, while others are in favour of them because of their
benefits to humanity. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In summary, due to the advent of modern biological technologies such as

using engineered cells, new products and medicines can be tested for
effectiveness and safety without the need of animals. This means the
suffering caused to these living creatures is now much more considerable
than the benefits of performing experiments on them.

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Storing user information
In this technological era, personal information is held on computers by
many companies and organisations. Do you think the advantages
outweigh the disadvantages?

In summary, storing private data of users on the system of a company is a

common practice that not only creates convenience for the users and helps
the company improve customer experience. The advantages, however, are
dwarfed by substantial disadvantages, including personal data security
breach and the annoyance from advertisements the user has to experience
when they are online.

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