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Writing 2 grade: 2/2


Name: julio jean Pierre de la barra moreno
There are some tips to help you when you feel homesick
Before traveling, pack photos of your family your country. once the city arrives
the city, maybe you will have jet lag or you will feel nostalgic. When you feel
homesick, try calling your parents. If don’t know the language and you have
language barrier with other persons try to have a good body language. once
you have arrived at the hotel, try to walk around the city and appreciate the new
sights and have small talks with other persons. As soon as you feel homesick,
try to order a typical meal from your country. Since you are in the street this is a
good opportunity other good advantage is that after you feel homesick, go to a
store of typical products of your country and buy some products. It will not be
difficult for you to be able to talk to people there since you have the translator. I
hope these ideas will help you and make you feel better.

Writing 3 grade: 2/2


A month ago I purchase a iphone 10, it all started when the ipone 10 was purchase by
friend and he recommended this product to me because my old cellphone stopped
working. Even though it was very expensive, I bought it. After using it for a few weeks i
have realized that iphone 10 is very popular. because it is the smartest of all, i like that
and my sister too, the iphone 10 was used by my sister and she like it.her birthday is
close, so i will buy her iphone 10.I also have emphazise that although the iphone is
small, it has a good sound. For me was a good purchase.the iphone 10 is made by LG
company, so it is sold there. Although the cellphone was bought by me, now everyone
wants to use it. I recommend it.

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Writing 1: grade 2/2
Name: Julio Jean Pierre De La Barra Moreno
My brother always told me to do exercise and at first I ignored her but since she move
away to other country two years ago I have thought a lot about what he once told me
and decided to pay attention to him as a kind of thanks to him, but now I realize that he
told me good things that I start to like, my father is very proud of that I do and all my
family also I asked them to join me and at first they told me that they could not because
they were very busy but now that they see the results they are undecided but the only
thing that I can tell them is don't forget that I will always be there to help you with this
because I think that exercising is also a good way to unite the family.
Writing 2: grade 2/2
NAME: JULIO DE LA BARRA MORENO
My hobby is drawing and painting, I have been doing it for a few years. At first I needed
help from my father, and he was good but I was not as good as him. but with help of
the practice I have been improving and now I am better than him in that. I have never
been at an academy since This became very easy for me and I started to learn by
myself. Day by day I have already understood all the rules of drawing such as
proportions and shadows for that reason I can make more realistic drawings. I
remember that to achieve it I went to YouTube and watch videos about those rules. I
have been following these rules and I realize now that they are very useful. I believe
that all hobbies are an important part of life because that is where your talent is, before
I draw I was more bored but since I have done it, I have changed for better.

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Writing 3 grade: 2/2


Local fruits could be much more expensive but they aren't since the best of
them are exported abroad, in countries like japan,you can find fruits like mango
much more expensive than in Peru,this  is because in Japan fruits don't grow so
rich.If you buy fruits anywhere in Peru,you will realize that it is a great way to
save money since the price is even lower.Many people complain about the
prices but they should compare them whit abroad price.According to statistics if
you want to buy a mango in Japan, it will cost you triple.I think we are lucky to
live in a rich country like Peru,and we must think how lucky we are.

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Writing 2: grade 1/2
Julio de la Barra Moreno
Meeting for the convetion ( next week ) on  Monday.
1.We are going whit something simple( Black and White ).
2.Staff that we need eg. (team of six).
3.Send email as soon as i can.

Writing 3: grade 2/2


JULIO DE LA BARRA MORENO
 Like everyday, I was going to the gym  whit my dog Randy and I got on the
train to arrive there, until today since whit the new rules they have put in, I had
to get off the train since now pets aren't allowed inside, but What bothered me
the most about this ridiculous is that they wanted me to pay a ridiculous fine,
and they didn't let me leave until i pay the fine, I mean , I had no idea of that
change, it wasn't my fault, i don't see the signs because as the rule is new they
still don't put up the signs, I think this is illegal.So I had two options, I could let
my dog go alone or took Randy back and lost my gym day, Luckly my neighbor
Who was returning home told me that she could take Randy back and that I
didn't have to lost my gym day. And guess what? The train's supervisor also
wanted to fine my neighbor for bringing her bike even though there wasn't sign
to say that. Obviusly, my neighbor and I couldn't allow this happen, so we called
the authorities in the area and they give us the reason, And in this way we
managed to get out of that problem, Which was really mortifying.

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Writing 1: grade 2/2
Julio De La Barra Moreno

My best memory:

I remember Christmas 2010, i love this Christmas because it brings me back


very pleasant memories like the unity of the family against the adversity, well,
that day the family was not completely reunited, since three very close uncles
had traveled abroad a year before, and my grandfather missed them, during
dinner we had a problem, with the turkey, since it burned and almost caused a
fire, in that moment the turkey prepared by my aunt was spoiled and after
calling many restaurants we realized that we had lost the only turkey we had
Luckily we all got together and found a solution since we realized that
Christmas was going to be lost, my parents and uncles bought a chicken grilled,
but we were all sad anyway, later the best part of the night was when my uncles
arrived at the house, everyone felt happy and more my grandfather, at the next
morning we cooked the turkey bought by my uncles and that was the Christmas
with the most union in the family since we managed to solve problems together.
And now that I think about it, I take it in that if my uncles hadn't come back,
Christmas wouldn't have been the same., and If the turkey had not been
burned, the family union would have been the same.

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Writing 2: grade 2/2
Sure more than one are a (in) favor and against the tec(h)nology in virtual classes , but it is 
certainly a tool that has helped us in one or another way.
It helps the teacher since they work from home and have more time  to do their daily activities
and be (with) whit their family just as it happens to the students who are very thankful (with) whit
the tec(h)nology because (it) is more easy (to) do the homework from home , (.) now every task
is from home and that is incredible.  Also it hepls (helps) to do the class in a more relaxed way (with)
whit less (pressure) pression.
Although if we talk about points against, we can realized that we need more than only see(ing) our friends
, (.) one thing that the tec(h)nology can(´)t remplazed (replace) is living whit (with) our friends and that
makes the tec(h)nology incomplete, in addition to the fact that sometimes it becomes so slow (,) which
depends on your internet and what (how) prepared that you are to have virtual classes .
The tec(h)nology in virtual classes are definitly (is definitely) a relief but we must work so hard
so that we all can have access to it.
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Portfolio: grade 4/4
PORTFOLIO ICPNA ADVANCED 5

STUDENT: JULIO DE LA BARRA MORENO

WRITING 1

STUDENT: Julio de la Barra Moreno.

My Life During the Pandemic:

I think that during pandemic normalizing biosecurity helped us to ensure that


no one dear to me was infected. Those in my life who were especially at risk are
my parents and my older brother who spent their time working in risky places .
We knew that to ignore safety measures would be putting us at high risk not
only for ourselves but also for our older family members, also it’s true that not
everyone wanted to follow the rules at first but then they realized that it was
the right thing to do. I addition to that I remember that some neighbors kept
throwing parties when the government insisted on stopping doing that., for
me that was a very big irresponsibility on their part, I also remember that at first
some insisted on not following the isolation rules, but I think it helped us not
to get infected. Besides that, I took my studies at home virtually since the
purpose at that time was taking care of myself but as I got used to that,
currently I plan studying at home for a few more years and also I am grateful
to have the opportunity to choose the study mode. Finally the truth is that I can
only thank God for the luck I have had and continue to take care of myself from
this pandemic that is not yet completely over, but at the end of the day we are
happy to have all our relatives healthy since we had responsibility and luck.
WRITING 2
Essay On Improving Study Habits
USING QUANTIFIERS
STUDENT: Julio De la Barra Moreno
Improving study habits is something very important for many reasons to each
student, some of them use methods that would not suit to others because
many times that is something personal, which is why the school always tries to
promote general study whit a lot of study habits and most of them are very
good habits such as reading, practicing, speaking, debating, for one of the best
study habits is to study in a didactic or fun way, both are good since it makes
us like to study, I know few people that this method has not worked, but for a
plenty of people this method has worked , but If you have little time you can
listen to podcasts or educational audios on the topics you want to study so you
don't spend so much time watching a video you just listen to it that way you will
acquire some knowledge, no study habit is bad, except overstudy is when you
study much more than necessary and it has bad effects on your health, most
students try to avoid that but you have to give enough time to study as well as
to other activities, both are important. Finally, I think that we can all have any
way of studying with personal habits because the most important thing is to
study.
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Writing 1: grade 2/2
Student: Julio Jean Pierre De la Barra Moreno

My Promotion Trip
I remember that about 7 years ago I was in 6th grade and with all my friends we went
on a promotion trip, the destination was Santiago de Chile, since we were going to
cross the border, before the trip they gave us certain recommendations, actually the
sheet was about 10 pages to peruse, but we didn't.
While we were enjoying the trip along the entire southern coast of Peru, we were all
calm, until we reached the border, and everything changed. Many colleagues had the
same problem as me because they went whit their father or mother but not both,
although it is true, I went with my mother and with her permission, according to the law
of Peru and Chile, a minor can leave the country only if he or she has the permission
of both parents. and I only went with the permission of my mother, my father was not
there. We could enter only if my father sent permission so we called him.
Consequently, we ask him to send the copied identification with permission, then after
almost 5 hours we could hardly enter meanwhile we waited we talk whit 2 other
classmate whit same problem, since the internet was not good there the 2 didn’t solve
their problems so the border police of Chile didn’t let them get in.
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Writing 2: grade 2/2


My University Problem
A few weeks ago I had a conflict with my university, the previous day the professor was
he was talking about the final exams He told that the final evaluation was going to
be in groups, and some students asked the teacher what day he was going to
review the work but me and others students told the teacher that group work is
difficult because there are many irresponsible people, but the teacher rejected us
and I had to do it in a group of 4.
After two bad days The teacher asked, have you finished your report? and I told
him that my coworkers had not done anything, I did almost all the work and I told the
delegate that , so the delegate asked the teacher what to do, but the teacher ignored
him, at the end the teacher gave me a bad grade, I was annoyed I complained to his
superior, and they agreed with me, so the superior asked him if he had given the
same grade to everyone in the group, and The teacher told him that he had not,
then the superior asked, “Do you have any proof of what you say?” so i told him
that i did have it and I showed him my note.
Finally, the teacher told the superior that it was all a mix-up and apologized to
me, and Just that day the teacher asked the class if there were irresponsible
students in the groups, and everyone answered that they did. Thanks to that I was
able to save my cycle.

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Writing 3: grade 2/2


My Amazing Dream

I have had quite strange and extraordinary dreams, but this one I will remember for a
long time. This night I dreamed that a raccoon began to visit my house. After having
seen the animal lonely and sad, I decided to adopt it. That decision took a long time,
clearly.

A couple of days later, I began to notice that something was wrong with him and I took
him to the doctor. The doctor talked to me after checking it, he showed me that the
raccoon was very different genetically, and Seeing the strange animal, he decided to
take it to the science faculty and I accepted. Clearly, that was not a normal raccoon.
They realized that it was actually developed type of alien that seems like a raccoon.
Being unable to tame the raccoon, the scientist called me since only i could tame it like
a pet. Thanks to this, they made me study different topics and I became an expert.
Having investigated the animal, we found valuable information for life and we solved
many doubts that only the raccoon could answer.

then I woke up and wondered why I had dreamed that, and I remembered that before I
went to sleep, I was watching an alien documentary and a raccoon movie.

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Portfolio: grade 4/4
PORTFOLIO ADVANCED 6

STUDENT: JULIO DE LA BARRA MORENO

TEACHER: DULIO CARDENAS

ESSAY 1

My Amazing Dream

I have had quite strange and extraordinary dreams, but this one I will remember for a
long time. This night I dreamed that a raccoon began to visit my house. After having
seen the animal lonely and sad, I decided to adopt it. That decision took a long time,
clearly.

A couple of days later, I began to notice that something was wrong with him and I took
him to the doctor. The doctor talked to me after checking it, he showed me that the
raccoon was very different genetically, and Seeing the strange animal, he decided to
take it to the science faculty and I accepted. Clearly, that was not a normal raccoon.
They realized that it was actually developed type of alien that seems like a raccoon.
Being unable to tame the raccoon, the scientist called me since only i could tame it like
a pet. Thanks to this, they made me study different topics and I became an expert.
Having investigated the animal, we found valuable information for life and we solved
many doubts that only the raccoon could answer.

then I woke up and wondered why I had dreamed that, and I remembered that before I
went to sleep, I was watching an alien documentary and a raccoon movie.

3 reduce adverbs clauses

3 adverbials

2 focus adverbs

2 sentence adverbs

ESSAY 2
My Dear Family

The relationship with my family is very good, I am lucky that they love me very much
and I love them too, but above all I love them so much and I am sure that I love them
so much and I am sure that if I had not had this family, i would have had a sad life.

My father is the relative with whom I spend the most time, sometimes he helps me with
my studies, and I realize what I learned studying with my father has helped me in my
university career, if my father weren’t whit me, I couldn’t find a solution to some
problems.

My younger sister is very nice to me, the fact that she is the closest sister to my age
makes it easier to have fun with her, we often study together, I often try to teach her, In
the family we all see that she likes study whit me, and If it doesn't take long time, it
would be incredible, since that would show that she is learning really quickly with me.
Also she said that she had learned a lot with my classes,

Also my mother is a very nice person, she always helps the whole family, whatever I do
is supported by her, all the children know that the mother is fundamental to the success
of the family, for example One day she told me that family is the most loyal thing a
person has, and that is a great truth and advice.

Finally, I realized that I was lucky to have this beautiful family and i know that if
something were difficult, it would be easy with the help of my family.

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